JayDee

yea for sheldon he is a total germaphobe but knowing him, he was scretly hoarding TP and stuff before this even started (like me and my bath and body works hand sanitizer lol). 

As far as canon characters go, I think Samus and Jill have both seen worse, though it might be hilarious to watch Jill Valentine reacting to how people are treating coronavirus.
“Why are you people acting like this?  When Raccoon City was overrun by flesh-eating monsters you all were calmer...I – don’t tell me I should be scared; I have seen some shit, man!  And why are you all hoarding toilet paper!?”
As for the OCs, well, Luzurial (JayDee’s OC, but I’m counting her) and Yua can’t get sick, being an angel and a yōkai respectively, but it could be both funny and heartwarming to see Yua get all concerned that Cody might catch COVID-19, not wanting to let her human mate leave the house and trying to convince him to...actually that could turn sexy right quick, given that she might keep him from leaving by webbing him up and/or distracting him to keep him indoors.

either or! might be a good writing prompt to start...maybe….

Do you mean OCs or canon characters?

Sorry to hear it. Given the quality of your writing you absolutely deserve to do well. As with a lot of things it is a case of who you know – it seems like it to me anyway and that’s why so many folks get their book deal after they score a well connected agent through some friend of a friend, or if they’ve been on some writing course run by a big name who’ll shill for them.

Sorry to hear about that.  At least you don’t work in retail though.  Today was a nightmare.
Still, maybe this will give you time to work on something else.

Sorry to hear it. Given the quality of your writing you absolutely deserve to do well. As with a lot of things it is a case of who you know – it seems like it to me anyway and that’s why so many folks get their book deal after they score a well connected agent through some friend of a friend, or if they’ve been on some writing course run by a big name who’ll shill for them.

Sorry to hear it. Given the quality of your writing you absolutely deserve to do well. As with a lot of things it is a case of who you know – it seems like it to me anyway and that’s why so many folks get their book deal after they score a well connected agent through some friend of a friend, or if they’ve been on some writing course run by a big name who’ll shill for them.

Caat world was practice / warm up so I could try to write a serious book.  Got a great idea for it, people who have read what I got love it.  Got a couple of dozen pages into it and can’t even force myself to work on it, started a different erotic story instead.  So hard to write serious.

There’s a question I’d love to see answered. I’m still stuck on my first serious book.

How many pages are the rejection letters? After a point I’d hope they’d at least give you some notes. Maybe your brain is pausing the second book until you get some kind of resolution on the first? Perhaps I shouldn’t be using question marks this way?
The third book should just be an anthology of your many original stories.
BTW the actual reason something is rejected often isn’t even what you think: https://www.smbc-comics.com/?id=3266

“You failed”
He bristled but getting his assbeat seven ways to sunday had mellowed this loss. To be fair, who expected an unwashed illiterate apostate peasant from the middle of bum fuck nowhere.
To be possibly the hero of legend?
“I won’t fail again.” He muttered angry at himself more than anything.
The emperor laughed softly for a moment.
“ You had your chance and that’s why I’m sending my incredibly well equipped, masterfully trained in cooperation elite units to deal with them. This world isn’t going to conquer itself and its just not worth it to lose a subordinate sending you after someone who through luck or what have you bested you. They’ll have confidence having beat you once. And this is why I’m the world conquering emperor.”
“Besides you look so pent up.”
The cursed tax collector gasped as the emperor’s hand expertly found its way down his trousers.
“Oh lord.” He cried.
And the emperor replied with a momentary painful clutch.
“Your Imperial Majesty.” The emperor corrected.

Work for Black Hand, you got a Black Hand Job!

Have sent some feedback! S’good stuff folks, I hope people have time to read and review!

Idk if it has been done. A villian that keep their minion’s morale up by jacking them off.

That’s why villains who jack off their minions are more popular on AFF.

Great news for your family! I hope all goes well!
 

Thank you for the update. Very much looking forward to it.

Way back in the day, it was originally meant to be four chapters: the first would be Kevin (named Michael back in the day) finding Luzurial and some of the hurt/comfort stuff, the second was meant to be more development of the relationship between Kevin and Luzurial and Eparlegna’s return, the third was going to be the first confrontation with Eparlegna, the revelation of exactly what happened to Luzurial and Kevin and her sleeping together, and the fourth chapter would be the final confrontation with Eparlegna.
That’s about right.  Part One went pretty much exactly as planned, but then I decided to do more with the PPD characters, so Part Two involved them more and Eparlegna’s return got pushed back to Part Three, then what was going to be a single chapter (Part Four) grew into the three chapter long App Theo Building arc.  Then I realized that Luzurial needed a lot more time to be emotionally ready for physical intimacy, so that meant moving that to near the end of a separate chapter (Part Seven), and then the final confrontation with Eparlegna became a large scale battle involving the PPD characters, so that meant Part Eight became a thing.
Finally, most recently, I realized it would undersell the threat to have the characters just blitz their way to the top of the tower to face Eparlegna, so entering the tower and making their way up became Part Nine and Luzurial’s actual final battle with Eparlegna and the denouement became Part Ten.
Fair warning: this may end up posted Thursday instead of Wednesday, since a friend I hadn’t seen since October wanted to go to the movies today (we went to see 1917), so I lost a lot of writing time.  If I can’t get it posted Wednesday, as I said, expect it some time the next day.

Whooo! The ending of over 10 years in the thinking and months in the writing! What was the original length gonna be? a oneshot, four chapters or something? It has only grown ‘cos you’ve got more story to tell I’d say.
I’m sure as heck looking forward to it. I see the whole thing as an under-viewed classic so far.

Even better, a bunch of Ukrainians get to enjoy the story as well, since they’re already listening to all the recordings “for quality assurance purposes” anyway.

Whooo! The ending of over 10 years in the thinking and months in the writing! What was the original length gonna be? a oneshot, four chapters or something? It has only grown ‘cos you’ve got more story to tell I’d say.
I’m sure as heck looking forward to it. I see the whole thing as an under-viewed classic so far.

You accidentally stroke a belly
“BAKA!” *four sets of claws sink in.

There's a few animes like that. One also has a grandiose swordswoman adorably scared of lightning that the protagonist always thought was a man. 

You accidentally stroke a belly
“BAKA!” *four sets of claws sink in.