JayDee

Some unsolicited input: In a chapter of my Phineas and Ferb orgy fic “The More, the Merrier,” there's a dog-on-girl sex scene that is written from the dog's POV. In the initial draft of the chapter, I had the dog mentally refer to the girl he fucks as “the little human bitch,” because I figured that a dog would see anyone whom he can fuck as a bitch -- in the sense of a female dog. But my beta said that it didn't read that way, and that the use of “bitch” just came across as crass. So I replaced “bitch” with “female” throughout that scene (except, of course, in the line of dialogue in which the girl's domme refers to her as the dog's bitch), and I think it worked better.

This anecdote is probably useless to you, but I had an extra two cents to spend.

Crass is pretty much my brand when it comes to the porn so using bitch for the dog’ll probably enhance the godawful feel I’m going for with this flashfic abomination!

Can’t wait.