Deadman

Possibly, yeah. I just completed a general outline and might add more soon. It’s changed part of what the story happens.

Well thank you for caring enough to respond. This is definitely what I’m struggling with in many ways. Part of the reason I worry is that the end of the mystery is something that could tip fans of the fandom off if I accidentally tease too much. I’m just using the mystery in a different way and putting forward a pairing that didn’t officially happen in the show/fandom. It was only kinda hinted at. The way I have thought about the end of the first chapter is that a character is alone and hears a sound. What that sound will be and what it reveals about what happens between chapter 2 through however long the story ends up being. Although from my more detailed outline, the reveal might not happen in the final chapter. The last few chapters though will be dealing with the reveal of what it is.

Once again I’m coming up with stories and starting to outlining them while working on other stuff. It’s rather fun, but I could use a suggestion. The fandoms under which I usually write aren’t mysteries. This new one is more mystery oriented. Now I’m trying to figure out how much mystery is too much mystery. The fandom is sorta famous for seemingly random mysteries. For showing the audience just enough to be curious but not enough to really tell you anything until the end. What I’m writing is sorta like a gaslighting scenario. I introduce the idea of a mystery at the end of the first chapter but don’t reveal that the mystery is even happening until the very end. Although I wonder how much I should tease that there’s an ongoing mystery. Or if I should just go along as if the mystery isn’t happening. Thoughts?

Well yes but I guess I’m trying to figure out what counts as thinking like a human or an animal. I’ve seen examples of animals becoming more human or entirely like but only speak in simple terms. For instance, one example I saw in a different fandom than what I’m writing for now, had a rabbit turned into a human completely. However, they still thought like humans. The reasons they were changed is because they wanted to “do it like bunnies”. Which the rabbit turned human did with a human woman.

Based on what I’m writing, I don’t believe they would be weirded out of it.

Well what I mean is a human transformed into a demon with scales or with the head of a dog who instead of speaking like a normal human, they speak in simplistic terms.

So you’re thinking in terms of if they have a physical body similar to a human or human like?

Well I have a demonic cat who is speaking like a human. Although I had some thought about the idea that some of the humans are speaking in simplistic terms. Things like “Girl pretty” and things of that nature.

An example being if a werewolf on a full moon is having sex with a human woman. So, in a previous story I wrote about sex between two women and several demons. This includes vampires but also demons with scales and things of that nature. However, I don’t know that I tagged the story as bestiality because I didn’t consider that to be animal in nature. Namely because demons aren’t actually real. However, in a story I’m working on now, I have humans being transformed into half demon/part animal things. They would in many ways be human like, but they would have more animal features like fur or scales or tentacles. In one particular case it’s the familiar to a witch who starts out as an animal but is then transformed into a demon with the capacity to speak. Would that be considered bestiality? The animal isn’t technically an animal anymore in this context. There’s also some suggestion within canon that the animal isn’t really an animal. That it simply took animal form to appeal to the witch. Although I may or may not return the demonic familiar to its animal form at the end. Haven’t decided yet.

Author: Deadman Title: Waking Up at Dawn Summary: Dawn wakes up to the fact that she once had a whole other life and the power she used to have. She decides to use this power to have a little fun and make the world and the people in her life into a way she wants them. Feedback: Happy to have feedback or suggestions. Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer Pairing: FemSlash-Female/Female Warnings: 3Plus AFFO Anal CR FF Humil Inc MC Oral PWP SH Solo Toys Voy WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Both, technically, it’s a series of one shots mostly unconnected, refer to the summary to know how. URL: https://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092234

Author: Deadman Title: Waking Up at Dawn Summary: Dawn wakes up to the fact that she once had a whole other life and the power she used to have. She decides to use this power to have a little fun and make the world and the people in her life into a way she wants them. Feedback: Happy to have feedback or suggestions. Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer Pairing: FemSlash-Female/Female Warnings: 3Plus AFFO Anal CR FF Humil Inc MC Oral PWP SH Solo Toys Voy WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Both, technically, it’s a series of one shots mostly unconnected, refer to the summary to know how. URL: https://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092234

Okay, good call. I’ll do that then.

So, I was planning on adding a new story today but I realized I’m not completely sure what the right category is. It’s in the Buffy category but there are a bunch of drop down options. The entire story is femmeslash but there’s also the Threesome/Moresome category. Technically, the story could be in either category. But I’ve generally assumed that the general femmeslash category is for only two people. Yet my story involves four women together. Just want to be sure I have the right category.

Well this really helped. It’s a tie for the two that I’m the biggest fan of.

New chapter is up featuring Faith titled “Doing Time”. https://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092228&chapter=11

Doing Time Chapter 11 is up now featuring Faith LeHane Summary: Faith is doing her best to stay out of trouble but it's difficult to do when she's locked up in prison. She's clearly the alpha female but that means so many women want to take her down. A few of the girls decide they need a better solution to all their problems.

Well I would disagree with the idea that it’s something that is part of us since the day we’re born, but it obviously becomes a thing during puberty. I’m not necessarily against the idea of youth being interested in sex but I try to avoid it in my more sexual content.

Well to give you an example, I have a story featured in Scooby Gang Time about a single cheerleader involved with multiple men. However, when I wrote it I specifically had minor characters who had names in the canon of Buffy. However, the characters maybe appeared in one or two episodes. Some of them were exes of the female cheerleader character. Whereas using the naval officer example, I don’t ever name any of the naval officers. I don’t think I even mentioned the name of the main female character. The only way you know who the character is because I labelled the chapter with the name of the character. The naval situation isn’t canon to the series or universe as far as I’m aware. So none of the characters are canon and are entirely created for the story. In the story I’m writing now in the Riverdale space, I do mention the main female character’s name. She’s definitely not a minor, and I make a specific attempt to ensure that they’re not a minor. I think almost all the characters are from later in the series when they had graduated high school and were adults. There’s maybe one character where their age is not clear, something that I did with Scooby Gang Time story.

Yeah, I’m more concerned about the ability of readers to distinguish rather than creating a full character workup. This is because the main focus of the minor character is having sex with the main character. However, what I noticed is that in many of my stories, I either use a canon character who already has a name or if I create an OC, I used to give them names but have kinda stopped doing this. In the examples I give of “naval officer” or “personal trainer” I will refer to “naval officer on the left” or “naval officer I first spoke to”. Which technically does give people a sense of the different characters but maybe I should just say “John” or “Frank”.

Trying to figure out whether I should give some minor characters names. I noticed recently in the last 3 stories that I wrote that I didn’t actually give several of the minor characters names. They just get referred to as “naval officer” or “personal trainer” or things like that. They don’t necessarily matter because they aren’t important. But at the same time I kinda feel like it should work better if I can refer to actual people.

It looks like currently it’s a tie between: “Only in Riverdale” And: “Riverdale Gang Time”

I usually go for a pun of some kind.

Hey everyone, So the story that I recently finished is my Scooby Gang Time and now I’m writing the next thing. It’s similar to my Scooby Gang Time story but focused on the characters of Riverdale. However, I’m trying to figure out what I should title it. I try to be original and thoughtful in my titles, but not sure if the ones I have thought up are good enough. The poll I created is the three that I came up with. If you want to suggest another, feel free to comment with another idea. Or say what might be the best ones of what I’ve chosen.

Totally understand that. I’ve had things expanded on many occasions. But I’ve gotten better at actually finishing things.

Oh that’s me in so many ways. I’ve kinda gone the reverse. My first story was supposed to be short and it ended up being a trilogy. But the story I just finished I basically dropped/abandoned probably 10+ years ago. Now I finished it. Gonna write more in the same universe, but not necessarily in this version of the thing.