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oooh That IS nice. I meant at LEAST one of the campaigns, but this makes the most sense (since she’d know the area) and has SO many possibilities. plus it would give the orcs a reason to attack hiccup on sight. aside from general malevolence. where are you going with this?

i was iffy about that anyway what if hiccup has to fight through an orc camp on his way in?

although he probably would be pretty mad

hiccup could spend the fight criticising her claw and offering to make a better one

okay. what did you think of the ‘during the nightmare crisis’ idea

hmmmm. was this the everlight forest, not jungle? the same one we talked about finding aurora in? if we did the titania/maelficent/mim thing we’d have to be careful of the pacing. OR, what if they attack DURING the nightmare crisis? remember how i suggested Oberon be guarding aurora?Their leader could be the one who kills him, and becomes the final area boss. Hiccup takes her prisoner and return her for their surrender. It also ties into sleeping beauty again, since the orcs and orc-minions were in each version o the films. any idea what we’d base the orcs on? a completely original group or tribute to a disney/overlord group?

oh also, i think succubi should be magic-resistant or outright immune to magic damage

hmmm. we don;t want it to be too powerful, so what if only the queens had that? and it was one element at a time, so multiple foes could confuse it okay. they’re full orcs now. that’s neat. you got them into the story after all. also had a thought. what if when he saw a uncicorn, some of the girls wanted one. hiccup protested that it was an insane horse trying to gore him with it’s horn, so now the violent girls want one (mainly the sorceresses. astrid probably would but she’s not there yet)

what other minion upgrades can we have? i mean for reds, greens and browns

thought you’d like it

i thought about making the girls into replacements fr the omnitrix aliens but that seemed a bit one-note. still working on charmcaster (who would fit SO well), looma and mina loveberry. maybe charm uses a fake-wand. she could be trying to mimic the mewman royal legacy, an attempt pased down from her godfather. not all that bad a girl, just anti-mewman government. OR she’s part of a human world attempt to mimic it. Looma…. not sure. maybe she’s a combat demon Mina loveberry would probably have a history with the forever knights, who probably are the reason she’s so loopy

Hiccup would have to be the one to name her after all

While that could work, i don’t know. Hiccup is from the culture that names their kid ‘hiccup’ ‘fishlegs’ and so on. It actually makes sense that ‘toothless’ could be a human name. I dunno, I had the idea that toothless used to express displeasure with hiccup by gnawing on him. since she used human teeth he used to mock her by calling her ‘toothless’ and it stuck. then he named the dragon after his ‘girlfriend’ here’s the picture https://zielle.deviantart.com/art/Overlady-s-march-335653246

oh, and i found a non-sexy image of female minions if you want to see it

huh. that works, though what if Zarina is the reason? she could be trying to ‘improve’ the minions. Or one of the mages just teaches them spells and asks why no-one else did. though that might make the blues a bit overpowered. eh, whatever works. Just the mental image decked out like tolkien orcs with proper armour, weapons and sheilds. I was going to suggest that since maleficent used orcish minions in her film, she might have designed the minions. trying to think what the others did. It’s a joke on her pet crow’s name. Idea, what if almost everyone has a ‘better’ name for toothless that they suggest and irritate hiccup and the dragon in question. why tanya?

also, i think Maleficent would want to name toothless “dival” and be underwhelmed by the name she got

They;re like tiny orcs. I was going to suggest maleficent created them since the actually used orcs…. or something like them

I felt it both was a nice nod to canon ben and kept him from being too overpowered

what did you think of my ‘hero’ familiars idea?

make it his magic weapon of choice. it’s unwieldy and cannot slash or bash very well, but conducts magic better than his sword. Ariel could probably comment on it and give him upgrade tips

also, attea could be buff-frog’s neice. she’s apathetic towards the whole steal-the-wand thing and treats it like a summer job due to being underwhelmed with ludo, while scheming to seize real power and that handsome ben she keeps seeing about. she’s like regular attea, but with wing ears. not sure how she feels about star

Ursula could suggest enchanting one to let them breathe ubderwater, remember last time then change it help them hold his breath. The latter could be even better considering the use in thin-air environments such as high altitudes or when hiding.

That works well. What if he tried to take an old one (the real one) she had presented near her throne to arm his early minions but she showed up right away to tell him no?

Too much? Not funny?

As a pleasure slave she'd probably be desensitised to tjat aspect of a relationship and seek comfort, support and respect. Plus tiana, being someone she places above her clients, would therefore be held to higher standards, nudity from her would be more meaningful You could also do a bit of a meta joke/ nod to the high levels of narrative nd character content of this story with her. Remember how i said you had to pace the erotic content to keep interest? Charlotte's pretty much living that as a pleasure slave. "It's nothing but sex, sex, sex and dirty talk all the time. That's it. That gets dull faster than you'd believe"