Ahhh....
Yeah, but they're very western expressions. I dunno.
I feel just having the bear and snake grumble to each other and move on would be enough but I see why you went there.
I know you like reptiles and snake symbolism, but it didn't click till just now.
Also, read through the story, and I... Don't really see the hypnosis. It's a good premise, carried out well, though i think the end carried on a bit too long. And I question where shanti learned that language. But otherwise it's quite well done!
yeah…. the behind the scenes story for that movie is… something. Roland emmerich was quoted as saying he rejected the original draft for the end because “it was just two giant monsters going at one another and i simply don’t like that”
and that’s BEFORE they started getting editorial mandates on what godzilla couldn;t do.
If you make and account, pm me and i'd be happy to discuss it. They frown on taking up too much space in these boards. It sounds like an interesting story.
I'm also on ff.net to talk.