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AND, pray tell, why didn't you. Need some help?? You and she have made enough friends here, and not the facebook or social media type, that would gladly come to your little corner of the world and render whatever assistance you need to take this shit down along with his father. Shit in this case is a complementary term as I can't think of a low enough term to describe him. Fecal matter does have a purpose in being. He does NOT !!! but that's not painful enough and too fast. B

Like you ever had a doubt???? B

OK Just make sure she downloaded - not only the data that she got but herself too. Hands off the twins. Oh yeah - how long are you going to keep us dangling.? B

You said we would freak out - YES !! Alices explosion should set the seismographs off and that would pinpoint the location. Never saw Charles coming. Is Sara in on it too? How long are you going to keep us dangling?? B

Now that Mangus has thrown a large pile on us it's your turn Hope yours is not as upsetting as his. At least yours is past tense. B

OK So post it already !!! B

I understand the nervous comment. Is "Lucas" still alive and if so in the U.S.? Keep going. Well written. Like the twins said sometimes you have to let it out. B

Yours or his?? B

AMEN !! B

I would guess it depends on WHAT you are concentrating on! B

You have similar styles. but it is to be expected that the student would be similar to the instructor. You didn't comment on the spoiler. B

Very much enjoyed the chapter. You learned from the best. I can feel the emotion. Saw your spoiler on the SB about only one more chapter. Hope that is wrong. There is much more to the story/your life. B

That is a good series too BUT it's been a long time since a chapter was posted. Can you wait until ypu get to a good stopping place with SITG (no cliffhanger). With the similar names some of us (me) will have to go back a long way to get the relationships straight again. Despite what some have said the reminders you put in about that ARE helpful to folks, like me, who don't have elephant type memories. Chalk it up to age or whatever. B

I think it was something like many long and painful years. Since he invaded grey hairs mind he should now know who the "chief" of the SG is and where he is. B

I was wondering about the change. Personal preference is fine as long as no outside pressure. B

@DA Why did you change you graphic?? B

Been around you too long?? Picking up BAD habits. B

Guess on of the recovery team did something wrong to get Alice shot. What about all the coolant she lost? Don't like the spoiler about 10 or more "good guys" out. I know this does happen RL but this is fiction and I, for one, would rather not see anymore "white hats" down. B

OK What time? B

If you are putting that to a vote put mine in the NO column. Maybe twice!!! B

Found your page. Now we can rattle your chain in two places or maybe three. You do show up well with your first chapter. "We" want more. no big rush but a chapter today would be nice. Between you and M a chapter every 2-3 days?? We can wish can't we. B

I think your original title was probably more in line with the story. Snakes vs shadows. B

@DA I like your new graphics. Now let him go long enough to get a new chapter posted. B

So very unMax like. Come in DA let's have another chapter either his or yours. B

The major already said he needed to contact "control". Obviously "they" are a small group of a larger organization. B