Its a pretty good story, cliffhanger though , I guess I'm a bad influence
Yep, plus he wouldn't want to make a big deal about leaving her home, not wanting to panic his family. Also remember he thought Rick was over reacting anyway
When Rick starts telling his background, I'll bring it up, but you have to remember he was dirty, probably bloody from a fire fight, and she only saw him for a minute when sh was terrified out of her mind...
so had a brain fart and this fell out:
about Leia, i wonder if david built her...and maybe rick found her in a pod...could she actually be a robot? hmmmm
No, I saved the Leia explanation for back story, Rick is going to have a prominate place in book three, kinda like the twins do now, probably even more...nothing too twisty, but I feel Rick needs more of a past
Then they take their sweet ass time fixing it! Well everyone is gone or at school...I'm lonely wish I had class today, think I'll go to the range and shoot stuff!
Ok, the update at casa crazy: some idiot took out the telephone pole a block from my house so my only internet is my phone. Unfortunately I can't post from it, but I have been assured everything will be repaird shortly. The story is written and have started the next chapter; although little girls are like hound dogs evidently; they seem to have no trouble hunting me down . No internet means I am the only remaining source of entertainment, plus the women keep telling them to go see what I'm doing, the rats!
Hard to write with three little girls crawling all over you, but yeah it's fun, at least I know they love me even though they'll probably kill me before Monday