magusfang

Too much?

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yeah Nadi and Max are merged and she was using his com chip, when he shut it down, she was pulled from the VW and back into his headm bo poor Legion is worried he won't be able to seperate them. as for the sex scenes...i've been on the sideline a while...bout a week! what can i say, i'm a man slut

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ok, 100 words exactly" She slowly reached for the doorknob, her hand shaking lightly, and taking a deep breath before grasping it, she threw the heavy door open hard. From the doorway she saw the old man sitting at the desk, piles of gold coins arrayed before him, and the gun in her hand lifted, seemingly of it’s own, and fired with an explosive roar that hurt her ears. She looked over the dieing man, and out of the large window behind his desk with a sad sigh, at a large tree on the cliff and the dark storm clouds roiling in the distance. the longer version is here: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107120

well the sheets were wet so at least they had fun first

Guess I was a little horny . But I did warn you guys it was a mushy chapter and I even toned it down a bit in the rewrite Not much went on, it was a feel good, lovey dovey chapter. Tried something a bit different in the sex scene, thought it was kinda funny

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Chapter three of Shadows in the Grass posted; hope you enjoy

Ok, finally got chapter 3 posted...that was almost painful

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Sorry, but I just haven't been able to get more than a page or two done at a time, just not flowing well. Evidently moriphine is not as conducive to bouts a fancy as vicoden...

Yeah, my writing is confusing enough to have to figure out when everything suddenly changed

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Nope! 32079

32077 Can ya tell I'm bored

Sound advice and someday I mat actually heed those words of wisdom

Not sure, I do tend to be a bit verbose, using twenty words to say what I could have in five, but I think it's more that I hunt for a perfect spot to drop a cliffhanger and that can take a while. Also I do switch scenes in chapters so they tend to actually be a collection of little chapters; if I ended a chapter at each scene end, I'd have like 200 1000 word or so chapters in each book.

It's easy: put tab P into slot V and bounce until a leak is noticed.

Better pastimes? but this is fun!

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Careful, BW likes to let her inner Dom out here...