Desiderius Price
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“Human Treats now made with 99% recycled humans.”
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Human Treats is people!
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Might not get a Halloween story in this season, but I can get in some funny adverts
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42792 and remembering the effects of timezones as I work on my story.
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I’m on too good of a roll on my potter fanfic to take a break… maybe on my next burnout/switch, whenever that comes.
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And a reading of later bits of that older draft, name is now needed to connect dots, so that doctor got his name restored. Introduced, but then kept to “the doctor” for most of the rest to signal it’s less...necessary, more about the role being played.
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It’s the 30th, so just because I made it to 150k today, does not mean I’ll be able to slide the goal post to 200k. Maybe next month I’ll hit that?
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Lets not totally derail this topic Names… yep, size of the role dependent. Whether it’s sexual or not. When reworking the potter fanfic, noticed I had removed a doctor’s name between two (earlier) drafts today, kept the name out simply as it’d be more distracting than helpful. Guess that’s a better measure for your gang of boys & girls the MC is going through – name helpful or distracting to the narrative?
