Desiderius Price
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I went ahead. Chapter 9, “First Interview” is now posted.
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This round of revising has finished for Dale’s Game (chapters 1-8). The major change, needed to better make the pieces of the story fit together, was I had to shift the story, in the SR universe, by a year, thus Dale, Jarred, et are a year older – this nearly got rid of that minor1 tag, except Dorcia’s still under 14. Some more details, consistency, and things have been added. I checked the before/after word count, and it’s up over 5kwords (with about 2k in chapter 2). I need to finish revising/checking chapters 9-14, then I can get back to writing new material.
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And there are days where I realize I have to revise, again….. sigh…. on the plus side, should make the story stronger. (Caution, dates/ages will change)
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I find revisions never stop… I’ve finished chapters and have had to go back because commentors say ‘Hey you missed an A!” but there’s even more things I’ve left behind… Stupid plot holes
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Of the revisions to be made, that one last week was a rather fast one to do. So that was good, and I’m done with this set of revisions. Now working on new material, once again, yay!
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I just did the same thing… tons of revisions… i then struggled immensely to get back to the new stuff. Way to go DP!!! I”m just gonna stroke your ego cuz we all need that shiz
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And revised chapters 3-6 have now been reposted – I’ve finished with eight, and looking through nine. The post/no-post decision is pending on chapters 9+ due to the high probability that a deus ex may want to sneak in.
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Phenomenal increase in spam in the forums
Desiderius Price replied to Mamacita's topic in Trolls/Flamers/Spammers
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