Desiderius Price

Author: Desiderius Price Title: The Repair Guy Summary: Alyssia opts for extended service after the repair guy shows up to fix her A/C in his underwear. Feedback: Sure, feedback with constructive criticism! Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Exhib, MF, Other, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL (AFF): http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108774 URL (AO3): https://archiveofourown.org/works/55313575 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59549-jaimies-campfire-starrebels/ (ie, I needed to write something nice and fluffy after I finished my Halloween story...)

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Life is nature’s way of keeping meat fresh…. (to quote Doctor Who)

Funny enough, IIRC, the summer heat wave many years ago (in a house w/o AC) as a kid is how I started sleeping nude.

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I came up with a summary for my new story today (not the halloween, not yet posted)…. “Alyssia opts for extended service after the repair guy shows up to fix her A/C in his underwear.” That ought to wet the appetite, I think.

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Bob Prime goes into the jungle and becomes Amazon Prime.

What’s right? What’s wrong? It probably depends on the intended audience, to some degree. If there was a precise science to it, I’d have licked this ages ago, instead, I find it to be rather...fuzzy. (No, I do not mean a fetish there)

Like most things, requires practice, and don’t be afraid to revise it! Still not great at it, most of the time I muddle through it, because something is typically better than nothing.

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Given the time/effort/reward involved, few are in writing for the money. And those who do, they’re the lucky few that effectively won the lottery, are now screenwriters or best sellers.

So, if anti-Bob and Bob meet, it’s a big bang? (Thinking antimatter/matter)

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I hereby banish Bob to the other thread! Fred/George, things can be better in pairs.

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Harry Potter is what got me started back in college while waiting for OotP to be released, I wanted more, and discovered fanfiction. There was one, I wanted more of, but the author did as fanfic authors tend to do, post less and less frequently as time goes on; so, I took it upon myself to write a story, based on that fanfic (it’s *NOT* posted here, nor will be because it wasn’t authorized by the author). Realized that I enjoyed it, started a sequel, before, like fanfic authors, I got stuck and, well, that fanfic’s yet to be finished. Fast forward to a few years ago, I started a rather smutty sci-fi/original PWP that developed a crude plot, but then realized that the circumstances around creating that setting would be interesting, so we’ve now got my current series of stories. Shortly after I had started writing fanfic, I did come to realize that the creative writing assignments, I did enjoy, the others...not so much If I come across any of those assignments, I’m definitely going to type them up to save them for posterity (or, figure out how to read those discs – I think I still have them, but its a non-standard format).

Yep, that’s why I still do it, I enjoy it. It took me dabbling in fanfiction to realize that I do love it, because I had believed my mother’s discouraging words before that (don’t confuse intent with effect here, she still thinks I don’t like writing, because, I’m definitely not showing her what I’ve been writing here!). Of course, now that I’ve got the halloween story into the hands of my beta, I’m starting to work up another story

*feels*, yep, still have two, so I’m a double nutjob.

I find AFF forums/chat to be a good repellent to those demons. I’ve tried loads of garlic, but that just offends the co-workers.