Desiderius Price
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Hamburger has met the grill….
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@BronxWench Sounds like a better location than the one I’ve gone to. I mean, yes, the county is next to water, but the restaurant I’m referring to is at a shopping mall, not particularly scenic.
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@Desiderius Price This one was right on the beach in Negril, Jamaica. Going out at night in Jamaica is sort of a walk on the wild side, and we mostly stayed at the resort, but we had to go for a sunset burger just to say we’d done it.
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@BronxWench Yeah, need to get a passport…. (my old one’s way past expired)
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Writing An Antagonist: Thoughts, Ideas, Processes...
Desiderius Price replied to Tcr's topic in Writers' Corner
Each form of antagonist has it’s time and place in stories, depends on what the author is going for. Sometimes, a Mr. Joker or Lex Luthor is exactly what the story calls for. Othertimes, it’s less, even down to just “society” being “normal” in the story’s era/setting. -
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Writing An Antagonist: Thoughts, Ideas, Processes...
Desiderius Price replied to Tcr's topic in Writers' Corner
Antagonists can also be more complicated too. In a particular story within my universe, I may choose a name/face to represent the antagonist, but the general antagonist is the collective whole of society, so it’s very multi-faceted in how it wants to screw over my protagonists. And that’s not out of spite or malice, but more in a belief within the society as a whole that they are right, and going about things in the right way. -
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FYI, I”ve yanked episode five, Contempt as it needs to be revised due to some inconsistencies I was encountering in the next episode.
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For those following Jefferey, I’ve yanked episode five, Contempt, and will repost once I revise it.
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Ouch! Continuity errors happen, and only the author knows. It’s happened to almost everyone who writes a story with more than one book. It looked good for the reader. I’m sure the “corrected” version will be even better.
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Thanks. Yeah, when I realized I was essentially revisiting the same point, that’s when I knew I had made a screwup. So one solution is to rehash the several episodes into a multi-part mini-series sort of thing, because some of it would be excellent in fostering some of Jeff’s grumpiness …
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