Desiderius Price

As I try to turn a lemon into lemonade … understanding that most here aren’t professionals, including our reviewers. Assuming this reviewer isn’t simply trolling, then the other way to take this is that if you can entice more feedback from this person to try to find out what things strike them as odd, or poorly worded, or confusing. It might be valid to consider, maybe not – though their demand is unreasonable. Personally, I don’t have an editor/beta, so my own writing has rough spots, so that’s why my second reaction to such a review would be to solicit more feedback to figure things out. (Of course, my first reaction is one best to be kept away from the keyboard.)

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Hey, focus on the fact that it is a review, which I know are rare here, and they like the story.

Well, with his taste more for pork.…

Family reunions were likely not the same afterwards….

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“oopsie” Yeah, I think these characters might have grounds to sue us for emotional distress…

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Relatives tend to sanitize the obituaries, though there’s occasionally an exception and you’ll typically see those listed under “odd news”.

Damn….that’s a trojan horse @JayDee Has the internet forgotten the story or is it still lingering out there by now?

Update to this case …. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mOTlj4MARbo

(I’m not a mod, just replying so it shows up in several of the mods alerts because I’m seeing that activity is high this morning.) Several questions they’ll likely ask: 1) age of the celebrity, 18+?, and 2) Is this minor a real person or fiction?

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(again), though, will there be paper/hardback editions?

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For me, major deaths are generally planned...kinda as goal posts. Though I do worry that I’ll subtly sabotage and weaken the characterization a bit so I don’t get too attached to the condemned.

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