Desiderius Price

That’s how I’ve done it, because proofreading can be a never ending cycle, and it’s not like we’re using professional editors here, right?

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Thanks for the review. I even found myself a bit disturbed after I wrote it!

No problem, that’s the reason I put the code there, to warn the squeamish and/or are in a country where it’s illegal to view.

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When I see it posted, I’ll try to read+review.

Leave a review! (It’s like doggie treats, but for your authors.)

You even have a review on it.

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Good, I need some bedtime reading in a couple of hours.

I’d almost suggest a more classic twist. Instead of Jake seeking his mother out, he surreptitiously sells them (based on his dick, of course). Unbeknownst to Jake, his mother, having marital issues with his father (or divorced and single), buys one and uses it. Truth comes out...over a big family Christmas dinner? Think we’ve got a holiday story for you to write, @T_B.

Aw, misunderstood there… It’s definitely a good premise for Halloween.

We can’t put stories themselves into the forums, otherwise, I’d encourage you to put in a few sentences or so as a post; trying to draw you out here, give you a bit of confidence Or, maybe somebody else takes up the challenge? We can always use more Halloween stories. [btw, my plate’s too full and I prefer to write in my original universe, which wouldn’t permit this storyline.]

We’ll encourage you! Heck, this premise could even make for a good Halloween story (going on now).

Hey @T_B, with all these very specific challenges you post, I suggest you write them. It’s much better as a writer because you’ve got to mentally picture it a whole bunch of times as you describe it; more bang for the buck, so to speak. Sure, the first story might be filled with plot holes, grammar issues, etc, but with a little practice, you can become a smut author!

Thanks. I needed that name for a discount mortuary and it works good for Halloween too

Thank you, thank you for the review! Obviously being from Adam’s point of view (and his younger brother’s), I don’t tell the full picture of what’s going through Father Jordan’s mind. And if Hope had suspected Adam’s fate, she would not have dropped him off like that, instead, picking up Oliver too and bringing them elsewhere..

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And so is my story, enjoy the misbehaving priests!

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