Desiderius Price

Bloodshot eyes could just be a symptom of something else….

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NoSex for all … and doom the human race.

You know how it goes, try one code, and next you know, you’re wanting them all (except for NoSex….)

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Poor dragons, always getting teased by the other kids on how they can’t even blow out candles on a birthday cake!

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If you read my first, you’ll see the evolution in my writing, heck, some reviewers commented to the same effect. Though it wasn’t until the sequel that I dropped that blasted present tense…

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While I’ve glanced at my first fanfic (different site) written/finished fifteen years ago, do I dare read it? Even more to the point, should I even edit/revise it? There’s a bit of beauty that it *is* my first, warts and all, that revising it kinda takes away a bit of that early magic. Sure, I can revise it, polish it up to my standards today, but at what point does it cease being my first story? I hear it in music. Sure, some bands do excellent work after they release their first album, but that first album has a different knack, a different charm, a roughness, an edge that can become quite dull..

I had to google, since I’m not an avid movie watcher, as I find it more fun to create than to consume. However, this reminded me of a criticism I had seen of Star Trek Voyager, how characters would suddenly have this new gift/insight/etc, for one episode only, but if you summed up all the traits, it’s an incredibly overpowered character. I know the temptation though, even if it’s through “training”. Had a point in Dale’s Game, where I wanted to train the main characters up, with their favorite sports team, but the more I thought about it, the less realistic it seemed – eventually I scrapped the training regimen because it’d change who my characters were. Sure, training a character is much more realistic than, say, having them get gifted a new set of abilities just by eating a box of Wheaties. However, the training alters the balance, and it was more interesting writing with the constraints of their inabilities too.

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I challenged myself by centering my second one around Christmas…

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@CloverReef It’s going into the Halloween anthology (it’s got an element to it …. besides, I thought you liked misbehaving priests? )

Having completed one, and not wanting to disturb my earlier reply… Title: Colt-45 Summary: TBD (still writing this one) Warnings: TBD (aiming for NoSex) Title: Adam the Altar Boy Summary: Adam, the altar boy, at Christmas Warnings: Abuse, Anal, Contro, Exhib, Fet, Horror, Inc, Minor1, Minor2, MCD, MiCD, MM, Oral, Pedo, Rape, Violence, WS