Desiderius Price
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I’m now working on a second Christmas story, involves some of the material from the Halloween story that I did scrub.
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It works better as a christmas story, with flashbacks, IMO.
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OOooo. Nice.
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Yesterday, a conversation with @CloverReef mentioned Christmas trains, and, well, I found I’m able to run with it, did like half of it last night.
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Finally, a story of mine you could read! I admit to being a perv, wanted that suicide bomber to be naked (except for his backpack)…. I meant, from the lore perspective, nudism is a trait that can be found among the atheists. While some might be docile, a number of them have radicalized, so there’s an elite fringe that treat it as a badge of honor to take action in the buff. Dead dog… taking notes for the next dark story. Thanks @JayDee for the review!
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yeah, my way of hinting to the method on the agents’ part here…. And I’m typically envisioning Agent Smith of the Matrix every time I’m writing him.
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I don’t always do bloody stories, but it was justified this year because of how I wanted the story to play out. Thanks for the review. Yep, guilt by association and one of the methods of enforcement within my universe.
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I haven’t strayed…. your other worlds might be disturbed by this adulterous affair.
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Here plot bunny…. here, over here, so long as you fellows stay away from me. I definitely know the challenge, to keep the plot simple, and how it likes to grow. That’s how the Dale’s Game came into existence, I was trying to write it as the holiday oneshot, but realized there were too many elements, too many moving parts for a reasonable oneshot. It had started to come off like yours, where I’d have prolonged exposition to the point that it felt like a download, cramming it all in. Thus, I spun the longer story off, and focused my oneshot on the simple premise.
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Yes, the madness of Black Friday seemed…. well, it was an itch I had to settle. All those stampedes, the fights, the insanity for a cheap TV, discounted socks, or less. And in this case, the seemingly small human gesture of holding the door open for a stranger, used against her. btw, I tend not to have Jello around the house, health reasons.
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And I got the first review in!
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Winter is nearly here, tis the time for Santa to be banging the reindeer.
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“You can’t spell comet without come!”
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Childhood = ruined
The joke there is that I had a childhood! Ha! Nah…
You want christmas pornstar names, google Christmas elves. http://www.elfcrazy.com/traditional-names-of-the-first-christmas-elves/
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Title: Jello Tags: Bigotry, Exhib, Fingering, MCD, MiCD, MF, NoSex, Violence Summary: A smoke break goes wrong, Megan heads home.
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Contenders announced for 2018 bad sex awards
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So, this man has two todgers? -
That a motivator when I first contributed a Halloween story back in 2015. Small samples, reviews, and perhaps even picking up a reader or two.
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Contenders announced for 2018 bad sex awards
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Some seemed better than others…. Like I can complain, I’d probably get top spot if my smut were submitted. -
Taking a dump on the holidays? Readers want to know…
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I posted a chapter, which means, I’ve met my NaNoWriMo goal, with a little extra, several hundred over 200k.
Next month….hmmm, I need a goal. 300k would be a bit much, but 250k seems too small, maybe 275k? Thinking about it.
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Maybe that’s a good start to the story…. typo gets somebody the wrong thing?
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Well, I did manage a dark holiday story in 2015. Mistletoe Hanging: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108028&chapter=4
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Dark and gruesome holiday anybody?
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After a short burst of writing, I’ve finished the chapter that’ll let me reach my nano goal. My story will make 200k words on Friday! (Still need to wait, proofread, so that’ll be Friday, the last day of the month. While this will be cutting it close, on time is on time.)
