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Desiderius Price

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  1. 40380 – looks like I fat fingered the leading number a few iterations ago… fixing.
  2. Jefferey #13 (Grouch) is now up.
  3. Jefferey #12 (Decisions) is now up.
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  8. Jefferey #11 (Alone) is up, deals with his emotions as the father’s went away to deal with court matters.
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  11. Don’t mean to downplay the seriousness of your situation. What irks me is “puritans” thinking that teachers/others can’t have a life outside of work. It shouldn’t be a detriment that a person has a creative/expressive hobby, even if it’s writing “adult” content, or having an only fans website. And besides, AFF is adult-only, so why were the students finding it?
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  15. I’m treating cousins as incest once removed by that statement. Admit it’s been a few months so I don’t remember which scene I was referring to, as there were more than one.
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  17. Must confess I was envisioning it as the guy on top, pushing in, so yeah, was considering him a rapist. However,the reverse can be true too, she pushing herself onto him. Now, if you want to thicken the plot, you could have them both the inadvertent recipients of a date-rape drug (or equivalent), one that was intended for another party that slipped into both of their drinks. And if the effects run off, they remember more and more of the night as time progresses? (BTW, Love potion works here too.)
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  19. Aw, so she’s unexpectedly pleased by it? Well, she could be annoyed & accuse him of a memory charm to try to cover it up. (Not sure the spell in your world, borrowing the name from the potterverse.) BTW, this is a less likely reaction, even if the physicality is enjoyable, it’s still a violation if it’s non-consensual.
  20. Jefferey #10 (Halloween) has now been posted, have fun! There’s a gunshot, a birthday, and more.
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  22. It is a setup, and there’s dozens if not hundreds of different ways you can take the scenario you initially described – some more morally better than others. It’s writers gold because the decision is based on how you want to take the story, or how the characters inherently act. If you’re still stuck, suggest you try out the exercises above, figure the characters out to the point that you know their reaction to this situation. Also, it’s literary platinum/diamond club material to have both characters DISAGREE about it too.
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