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  1. pippychick
    (looks completely and utterly innocent)
  2. pippychick
    You guys are merciful Gods… lol
  3. pippychick
    42362… and a half
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    Yes, either via immortality or some kind of endless loop. Or it’s clear that the nightmarish quality of the ending is not static and is going to get measurably worse over time, and there’s nothing the MC can do to stop it. I, um, did that too. (sorry Abbe)
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    Tragic endings with a hint of nightmare and a dash of infinity. Wow I’ve written like three of them, just like that. Damn.
  6. pippychick
    I think it depends whether you’re reading straight up porn or erotica, since erotic writing is more character driven, and that tends to be what I want from my fanfiction, when I consume it. In any case it’s extremely rare to see multiple orgasms written well, but that’s just my opinion. I’m not sure you’re asking the right question. If I’m answering this as a reader, and you’re the author, I’m countering with: how did you hook me into your story? Was it the promise of porn/sexual gratification, or something more? Did you make me curious about the consequences/aftermath or make me want more? Because those things are the job of the author. If you hook me right, I will read it.
  7. pippychick

    You all redecorated… Hope everyone is doing okay. x

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    2. pippychick

      pippychick

      Um… (coughs) I think it’s got Manta…

      @manta2g Don’t take this wrong, but have you been possessed by a pussy?

      I can definitely see it at the top of the screen. Does anyone know how to get it to come? 

      Does anyone on these adultfanfiction forums know what kind of treats will tempt a pussy? 

      😎

    3. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      I’m still hoping for an archive dragon. :lol: 

    4. manta2g

      manta2g

      I have 4 kitties so yes I am in thier possession.

       

      An archive dragon may be possible if I can get a cute one.

  8. pippychick

    :wub:

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    2. Melrick

      Melrick

      Sorry we left you out.  We’ll do better next time. ;) lol

    3. WillowDarkling

      WillowDarkling

      *screams and runs away*  No thank you! You can be naughty together all you want! :kittenexclaim:

    4. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      Happy to see that you two are still around, no matter what it may be that you’re doing. ;)

  9. pippychick
    39550…. There!
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    @Melrick and @BronxWench

    :wub:

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      :hug: and :wub: 

    2. Melrick

      Melrick

      :hug:and :wub:and:sex:

    3. JayDee

      JayDee

      Hey @pippychick ! I’m finally getting to see the Game of Thrones tv show. Gonna read yer story once it’s done. I’m up to season 4 episode 2 so I’ve a ways to go!

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    (follows you around the forum)

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    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Think this love story belongs in the celebrity section, right? :)

    3. WillowDarkling

      WillowDarkling

      If they get any friskier, it sure does, Desiderius :D 

    4. pippychick

      pippychick

      Everyone should be aware that Melrick and I are suffering from an inability to actually “get a room” anywhere in the world right now.

  12. pippychick

    What is 2021 like?

    Have the carrots attacked yet?

     

    1. Melrick

      Melrick

      Well, so far 2021 has been wet, but at least it’s been cool!  And no attacking vegetables of any kind so far.  I’ll keep you posted.

    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      For those not yet in 2021, lets just state that I hope you remembered to put your name on your nanowrimo challenge.

    3. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      Ok, so I’m 18+ hours into 2021 and I’m afraid I have no idea what you’re talking abou- oh God!  NO!  Where did these carrots come from?!  TAKE COVER!!!

  13. pippychick
    Omg, well done…. I’m going to enjoy this. Got it on amazon.
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    It’s been a hell of a year, right?

    I hope everyone has come through it okay… so far…

    And, well… I just thought I should warn you all, I’m planning to be around a bit more.

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    2. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      Welcome back, pippychick!  I’m sorry about your year, but it’s good to see you again. :hug:

    3. InvidiaRed

      InvidiaRed

      Welcome:D

      Covid… financially screwed me but otherwise everybody is mostly okay.

    4. pippychick

      pippychick

      Sorry to hear that Invidia… I hope you can start to recover from it.

  15. pippychick

    Hey, did you see my title… I’m a Master… lol

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    (runs and hides)

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    2. pippychick

      pippychick

      Ahh.. well, Sir… always is, um…

      (toes at the ground like there might be something interesting just under the surface)

    3. Melrick

      Melrick

      I was right, always. :wub:

    4. pippychick

      pippychick

      :wub: back at you Master :hug:

      The moment this virus is over and I can book us a series of rooms, I swear I am all over it!

  16. pippychick
    That whole thing really made me smile, showing how much these two care about each other, and the part where Nina almost cried because of how happy she was almost made me tear up a little. Of course, there is the inevitable coming back to reality, on two fronts. First, the future of this relationship is rather uncertain due to the age difference. Second, Ray did come inside her, which is going to be an absolute nightmare if she gets pregnant at fourteen. Still and all, this was a really sweet chapter. I did kind of tilt my head at one thing. Nina's house is way out in the middle of nowhere, and she says that it has no phone reception (and presumably no landline). That seems really dangerous if there's a medical emergency. I've never been to Australia, mind you, so for all I know this is a common thing out in the country and it doesn't really cause any problems. It just kind of caught my attention while reading. On a final note, you've officially done it. I felt disappointed when the "this is just sex" reality check came up, meaning that yes, I am rooting for this couple now. Looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you @InBrightestDay I’m really glad this chapter worked, and that Nina’s feelings about it all came across so well. Yes, the potential for her getting pregnant is a worry, and both of them need to take that more seriously than they are right now. As to the isolation, I suspect the must be some way for Nina to contact the outside world, just as I’m equally sure she’s keeping the knowledge of how to do so all to herself, for her own purposes (kind of like how she didn’t tell Ray her mobile/cellphone only worked at school). I am glad you’re rooting for them. There is something quite deep going on here, even if neither of them realise it yet. Thank you again!
  17. pippychick
    lol… I’ve only just realised how that sounds. Of course I meant I hope you will continue reading!
  18. pippychick
    Although I will not have the honor of adult breasts impugned! They're magical things and I am not budging on that front. Anyway, I liked how awkward this is for both of them, and not just in the sense of Ray thinking about the fact that he's about to have sex with a fourteen year old. He’d understood that he was in too deep at this stage to care about whether she was 15, 14 or even 13. ...Goddamnit it, Ray. Anyway, what I was getting at is that he's honestly just kind of awkward around members of the opposite sex to begin with, which works to sort of complement Nina's awkwardness over her lack of sexual experience. So yeah, I'm now actually looking forward to how things go next chapter! And lastly… for now, hopefully… lol… I will not say a word about breasts, or we’ll be here all day. But they are kind of equal in being awkward, so I’m glad that comes across. Ray is extremely lonely, and he’s not having an easy time of it even without having a girl throw herself in his way... and Nina is so terribly curious. “Goddamnit Ray” made me laugh though. I hope you enjoy the rest Thank you so much!
  19. pippychick
    That made me laugh. Truer words... Thank you for this one too! I’m glad that their communication made you feel better about them. Well, he has been worried about those consequences, so they’ve been at the front of his mind. Even though Melrick and I are really making him go there. He doesn’t mean to do any harm. Ah… Melrick made you laugh… (points)
  20. pippychick
    FUNNY YOU SHOULD SAY THAT, RAY. Again, I am glad that Ray caught onto what he was doing and backed off, especially considering that this was moving far too fast for Nina there. Still, it's not a good sign when his self-control is that tenuous. It does make me wonder how we as readers are meant to see Ray's actions. The first chapter made him seem like a decent guy, but are we meant to see him that way, or as something for more disturbing? It's definitely something to think about. Anyway, I will be back for the next chapter. Hey again, and thank you! Well… I think she was more frightened of herself just then. She hasn’t been in any situation like this before, but she’s also very daring. It’s amazing how easy it is to get right out of your depth… lol. Silly Nina! But Ray is a good guy really. He’d never hurt her or deliberately scare her. He’s not thinking rationally at all right now.
  21. pippychick
    Hey, @InBrightestDay and thank you so much! Thank you for reading, even if it is out of your comfort zone. I’m entirely responsible for Nina’s age, and it’s interesting to think back and imagine what she would be thinking and feeling. But we wanted to try and write about two characters first and foremost, so if you do stick with it, be prepared for this to go a lot deeper. As for Ray, he absolutely does realise, and I think ordinarily nothing would happen here. But this is fiction, so we are just having a little fun as the Gods of this world, and watching what unfolds, so I’m really happy that it seems to be just happening, rather than being forced. I hope you will root for Ray and Nina by the end. Together, they are more than their age difference
  22. pippychick
    Thank you so much, @JayDee – I’m so glad you liked it. I’m glad you noticed the comparison of playing the instrument and the lover. They both do involve a kind of purposeful caress.
  23. pippychick
    Thank you so much, Melrick I really love that piece of music and the character of the duet. I hope I wrote something to do it justice.
  24. pippychick
    Hey @JayDee Thank you so much for this review, and I completely understand about the minor2, it’s why the tag is there. For me, it is kind of fun recalling my younger self so that Nina can borrow her for a bit (I was terrible). I’m glad the build up comes across well, nevertheless. @Melrick and I added the setting to the summary, because you gave us a reminder. I know I have so much catching up to do reading-wise (covers the ears of fate), and with any luck, this week could be my week, because I am really looking forward to it! I’m sorry I’ve been absent for such a long time now.
  25. pippychick
    Ahh… JayDee, no. You made us realise we hadn’t mentioned it at all! Thank you
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