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Re: “The Happiest Place”
From Fairy-Slayer on February 14, 2019
Thank you, and thank you.
In this universe, Rule 34 states that “If it exists, there might be some non-porn interpretation of it somewhere.”
Like Disney, they know better than just about anybody what sells, and to whom. 
Yeah, me neither. It’s probably for the best. :| 
The bit about the dog was the first part I thought up, and it inspired all the rest of the story.
Rather different situation: Mommy-manager wanting her teenager to be a star versus crappy parents making their kid miserable. 
Also, I have a tendency to want to subvert the “corporations are evil” trope. Corporations are run by people, and sometimes, those people act like human beings.
It was mainly to show that Colquitt’s line about putting smiles on kids’ faces wasn’t just said in the abstract. He’s thinking about an actual kid when he says that.
As for the last bit of “Apprentice,” you probably just figured out the twist before most people.
You’re welcome. And as always, thanks for another uplifting review!

This week, when I was driving home on Monday night, I suddenly realized how I wanted chapter 5 of “Auntie’s Home” to end. I banged it out over the next couple of days and, thanks to a quick beta by Jomahawk, got it posted on Friday. Not sure whether there will be 1 more chapter, 2 more, or 1 chapter plus an epilogue. Will just have to see how much material there ends up being.
SWP1, haven’t seen Bumblebee yet, but will probably check it out when it makes it to DVD/Blu-Ray/Netflix/Amazon.

Hey, all. Didn’t make a lot of progress on anything last week, as I was a bit distracted by my “legit” writing projects. (I’m trying to publish a novel in RL.) But I continue to plug away; probably the next thing I’ll finish is chapter 5 of “Auntie’s Home.” 
Thanks!
Not this year, but I have written one, if you haven’t yet seen it. It’s a big-brother/little-sister incest story titled “Some Girl.”
Thanks! I’ve got another furry one-shot in the works, although it’s quite a bit darker than “First Time.”
I didn’t actually mean for the chapters to get progressively longer; that was just how things worked out. Chapter 1 is the shortest because it’s mostly setup. Chapter 2 got into the action but didn’t have everyone participating yet (ie, Ginger hadn’t yet arrived, and Roger was just spectating). So it wasn’t until chapter 3 that the orgy was in full swing. Chapter 4 will be about as long as chapter 3 was, and chapter 5 (the final chapter) will probably be a bit shorter.

Got a new original short story posted this week: “First Time,” a furry, oppai loli story in which a feline-like alien explains his species’ facts of life by describing the sexual initiation of his 2-year-old daughter.

Thanks, Fanbay! I’m an editor in RL, so I’m pretty meticulous about spelling and grammar. And I have good betas. 

Howdy, all. Sorry for my lengthy absence. Been a bit busy with various things – including a couple of chapters! Specifically, there are new chapters for Little Rose and Country Summer. 
Regarding SWP1’s comments:
I really appreciate that you consider 3 chapters in a year and a half to be good progress. I’m not being ironic; I think it’s decent progress, too, but a lot of other folks might not.
“Truth or Dare 2.0” wasn’t exactly a fan favorite, but I really loved writing it, so I appreciate your mentioning it.
One thing Truth or Dare 2.0 and Hot Yoga have in common is that they pull in a lot of 2nd-tier characters from the PnF world. I sometimes like doing that, because a character that hasn’t had a lot of screen time leaves a lot of 
I do make an effort to make my stories consistent with canon. And now that the show is over, the events of “Hot Yoga” and “The More, the Merrier” could have happened sometime after the finale.
Yes, definitely.
Thanks for the comments. Hope your 2019 is off to a great start!

Finally got around to reading and reviewing the rest of these. Now the holidays are officially over.

Re: “Quiet”
From have_a_little_feith on January 02, 2019
What Quiet has is something like Asperger’s or autism, but not exactly like it. I figured that people living in the paleolithic era, where the environment is completely different (different chemicals, different viruses, and some minor physiological differences from modern humans) wouldn’t necessarily have exactly the same neurologic issues that modern people do. 
Well, you don’t actually have to sign in to read the forums, but I guess you won’t know that unless you happen to try.

Hey, all. Sorry for the prolonged silence; I’ve been traveling for the holidays and had limited internet access. What’s more, Microsoft went and changed Hotmail so that I can’t access it from my phone anymore; thus, I can only check my Hotmail on my laptop, which I means that I won’t always be getting alerts about new reviews in a timely fashion anymore. 
Anyway, on to news. As SWP1 observed, chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is posted, and at ~8000 words, it’s packed with orgiastic goodness.  Probably the next thing I’ll finish will be chapter 8 of “Country Summer.” I’m also going to try to finish one of my one-shot stories to make room on the List of 20 for – and I’ll preface this with “God help me” – a She-Ra and the Princesses of Power story. 
SWP1, with regard to your comments about the TMTM chapter:
 I don’t know about the next chapter, but we’ll probably see it at least once more before the story ends.
In the initial draft of the chapter, I kept having Midas think of Gretchen as a “bitch” in the sense of a female dog. But Jomahawk, who is betaing this story, thought the repeated use of “bitch” came across as too crass. I thought he had a point, so I changed “bitch” to “female” in Midas’ thoughts. Adyson still used “bitch” in her dialogue, of course.
There are only a couple of other choices besides Stacy, so odds are good that you can guess. 
Sally is an innocent (up until now, at least), so I wanted to capture that in the story.
Believe it or not, that scene was purely the result of Adyson and Dr. Hirano being the only characters left after I decided what to do with everyone else. I was forced to get creative and figure out why those two would pair up, and I had to go through a few drafts of the scene before I was happy with it (because I was refining the nature of their interaction with each draft), but I had fun doing it. 
Hope you had a great Christmas, and Happy New Year!

From Nick on December 21, 2018
My apologies for the slowness of this reply. I’ve been travelling for the holidays and just haven’t had a chance.
Thank you! (I think.)
I hope there's no real-world version of this pageant, but one never knows.
I figured Lynn would be okay with it as long as (1) she was able to personally ensure Lola and Lana's safety (which she was), and (2) there was the possibility that Lynn would get to kick someone in the face.
Thanks! In writing fics like these, I've had to come up with a lot of ways in which normally unacceptable behavior can become acceptable, and one of them is taking on an alternate persona like Lincoln did.
I felt like the story didn't really need that. The periodic revelations about the nature of the contest and Lincoln's responsibilities seemed like twists enough.
I wrote this story after finishing two incest-intensive ones -- "Whoops" and "The Loud House After Dark." I wanted to set incest aside this time around. (Of course, there's more of it coming, as in my upcoming story "Enter the Sandboy.")
Not planning a sequel at this point, but more Loud House stories are in the works. 
Thanks for the review!

From The Evil Fairy on December 26, 2018
Thank you! I wanted somebody who could do the Alfred Hitchcock "Good eeeevening" thing, and there Lucy was.
I really wanted to do a "the twins get creepy" thing, and having them gang up on a sibling seemed like a good way to do that. I had plans for pretty much all of the other characters except Luan at that point, so she became their victim-turned-master. Then I became enamored of the idea of showing a bit of what lies beneath Luan's constant joking.
I don't always get a chance to go for maximum sensuality in a scene, but I really tried for it there.
So glad you liked it. It's pretty twisted, but I loved writing it. 
"In character" is always high praise to me. When it comes to fanfic, I live for authenticity. Thanks!
I thought about making it 2 chapters, but Fairy Slayer (who betaed) and I agreed that it would work better as a oneshot, with nothing to break up the flow. 
Thank you!

From The Evil Fairy on December 26, 2018
Thank you! I wanted somebody who could do the Alfred Hitchcock "Good eeeevening" thing, and there Lucy was.
I really wanted to do a "the twins get creepy" thing, and having them gang up on a sibling seemed like a good way to do that. I had plans for pretty much all of the other characters except Luan at that point, so she became their victim-turned-master. Then I became enamored of the idea of showing a bit of what lies beneath Luan's constant joking.
I don't always get a chance to go for maximum sensuality in a scene, but I really tried for it there.
So glad you liked it. It's pretty twisted, but I loved writing it. 
"In character" is always high praise to me. When it comes to fanfic, I live for authenticity. Thanks!
I thought about making it 2 chapters, but Fairy Slayer (who betaed) and I agreed that it would work better as a oneshot, with nothing to break up the flow. 
Thank you!

“A Visit From Shota Claus” seems to be coming along nicely; I expect to have it ready by the weekend. 
When I took a break from that, I unexpectedly finished chapter 7 of “Make It All Better,” a story that has been in progress for three and a half years now. I have to be in a particular frame of mind to work on it because the characters are so complex, and a lot goes on under the surface. Yet, at the same time, the story is relentlessly pornographic. Trying to be deep and shallow at the same time is tricky, but I love making the attempt. 

I am pleased to say that my laptop is working properly again, not least because of the substantial efforts of a nice fellow at the Knowledge Bar at Micro Center. 
Also, a surprise announcement: Earlier, I wrote that once again, I would not be writing a Christmas story this year because I had no good ideas for one. Then, a few days ago, such an idea struck. So if I can finish it in time, and if they do some kind of holiday story jam here on AFF, I’ll post “A Visit From Shota Claus” there (although as the title implies, it will have Minor1 content, so a fair number of folk won’t read it). Otherwise, I’ll post it on its own in the Originals section. 
SWP1: Some answers to your questions:
The next chapter of “Little Rose” is about two-thirds written, but right now I’m trying to spend the majority of my writing time on “A Visit From Shota Claus” in the hope of getting it done in the next week or so. Once I’m done with that, “Little Rose” will be back on my priority list, along with my various other in-progress multi-chapter stories. Christmas prep is going well. We don’t have a full-size tree this one, but we have a cute little fake one that looks very festive and that we put in the front window so people can see the lights at night. How is yours? I appreciate your enthusiasm for this idea, but I just have too many other ideas that I’m excited about to pursue that one at this point. And my excitement is renewed now that I don’t have to do everything on my phone.

Hello, all. I haven’t been posting much lately because my laptop has been on the fritz; the power supply isn’t working right, which is slowing the whole thing down. (Makes me extra-glad I wasn't trying to do NaNoWriMo this year.) Hopefully, the new adapter I ordered will fix the problem.
News: Chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is now in beta. (I had to finish it on my phone.) It is huge – 8000+ words – so the beta could take a while. 
BTW, my friend who lost his father and grandfather is the beta on that story. He asked for a distraction, so I hurried up and finished the chapter to provide him one. 
SWP1: Of the movies you mentioned, the one I’m most interested in is Aquaman. Although if it gets terrible reviews, I'll probably just wait and watch it the next time my cable provider has a free-premium-channels weekend (which is how I watched Batman vs. Superman and Justice League). I’m iffier about Bumblebee because the recent Transformers movies haven’t been great, but focusing on one character might make for a better movie, so I’m keeping an open mind. 
Last night, I watched Murder on the Orient Express (the new one with Kenneth Branagh), and now I wish I had seen it on the big screen. Lots of magnificent vistas. The story is good, too (I guess you can't go too far wrong with Agatha Christie), and the movie is chock-full of good actors.

A friend of mine has lost both his father and his grandfather in a tragic accident. In the hope of providing him a distraction, I put the pedal to the metal and finished chapter 4 of “Little Rose” this afternoon.
SWP1, chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is probably the next thing I’ll finish. However, my laptop is on the fritz (needs a new battery that I have to have shipped to me and then installed by a technician), so I may not be able to post it until next week.
Also, I will probably continue my trend of not contributing to this year’s holiday story jam. All the Christmas-story ideas I have are weepy things involving dying children, and I’m not doin’ that.

Haven’t had much to report recently, but today I posted a new one-shot story titled, “The Happiest Place.” It’s a shameless parody of the Walt Disney company, set in an alternate world with very different rules about what is considered appropriate content for children.
Getting pretty close to finished with a couple of chapters, but I’m not entirely sure what will be ready next.
Oh, and for some Lori/Lana fun, I recommend “Sweet Dreams, Lana Loud” by @Evil Fairy. It’s all about sibling affection taking an erotic turn, which is I thing I’m fond of, and Evil Fairy writes well.

I’m sure it’s an awesome story because you’re a great writer, but I gotta give it a pass with the minor1 content. I hope it went down well for you with readers on that other contest! I know nothing of the site but from the name I suspect it’s the kind of content they appreciate.

@GeorgeGlass Aww shame that it was predictable, lol, but yeah I didn’t really do as much of a feint as I probably could have. I would have liked to do less humanoids. The giant started as something else entirely but the flow was off so he ended up a combination of one of those ‘nord' aliens and a cyclops. And I had to do an Elf. Just had to. Anyway, I’m glad it made you laugh! That was really the intention, so there was a little success there! Thank you for the kind review!

Title: A Visit From Shota Claus
Tags: MF, Minor1, not sure what else yet
Summary: When Ellen finds herself struggling to assemble her child’s gift on Christmas Eve, she receives some unexpected tech support – and more – from Santa’s young son.

“A Visit From Shota Claus” seems to be coming along nicely; I expect to have it ready by the weekend. 
When I took a break from that, I unexpectedly finished chapter 7 of “Make It All Better,” a story that has been in progress for three and a half years now. I have to be in a particular frame of mind to work on it because the characters are so complex, and a lot goes on under the surface. Yet, at the same time, the story is relentlessly pornographic. Trying to be deep and shallow at the same time is tricky, but I love making the attempt. 

Title: A Visit From Shota Claus
Tags: MF, Minor1, not sure what else yet
Summary: When Ellen finds herself struggling to assemble her child’s gift on Christmas Eve, she receives some unexpected tech support – and more – from Santa’s young son.

Oh, hey, good news on your laptop!

Thanks! I don’t know how that slipped my mind. 

I am pleased to say that my laptop is working properly again, not least because of the substantial efforts of a nice fellow at the Knowledge Bar at Micro Center. 
Also, a surprise announcement: Earlier, I wrote that once again, I would not be writing a Christmas story this year because I had no good ideas for one. Then, a few days ago, such an idea struck. So if I can finish it in time, and if they do some kind of holiday story jam here on AFF, I’ll post “A Visit From Shota Claus” there (although as the title implies, it will have Minor1 content, so a fair number of folk won’t read it). Otherwise, I’ll post it on its own in the Originals section. 
SWP1: Some answers to your questions:
The next chapter of “Little Rose” is about two-thirds written, but right now I’m trying to spend the majority of my writing time on “A Visit From Shota Claus” in the hope of getting it done in the next week or so. Once I’m done with that, “Little Rose” will be back on my priority list, along with my various other in-progress multi-chapter stories. Christmas prep is going well. We don’t have a full-size tree this one, but we have a cute little fake one that looks very festive and that we put in the front window so people can see the lights at night. How is yours? I appreciate your enthusiasm for this idea, but I just have too many other ideas that I’m excited about to pursue that one at this point. And my excitement is renewed now that I don’t have to do everything on my phone.