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Glad you liked it. Most of that stuff I planned in advance, but the idea for Balthazar’s monologue just came to me as I was starting to write the scene. I liked the idea of including some stream-of-consciousness erotic narrative, especially within the limitations of a boy who’s only eleven and who is trying to talk while getting blown in front of a stranger (the mayor, no less). That was a lot of fun to write, and it’s part of why the chapter ended up being as long as it is.

Thank you! I’m rarely guilty of skimping on sex scenes, but in this case, I confess that I did, a bit. I was so concerned about the possibility of the “beach orgy” going on too long and the story getting lost that I overcompensated. Thanks! Ultimately, that’s what I was aiming for. Thanks for the review!

Neither, actually. I’m afraid you’ll have to wait and see.

I sometimes post in the “Promote a Story” section, but honestly, I mostly do that for stories that I think aren’t likely to attract a lot of viewers – not because they aren’t good, but because they may not be as relentlessly smutty as the rest of what I write. As for Halloween: I solemnly swear that I am up to no good and have already started my story.

At long last, chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” is posted! Thanks! I wanted Dipper to experience the other side of the situation he was in with Mermadeline. She tried to become someone else for Dipper, and that didn't work out; in this universe, Dipper tried to be someone else for Tiffany, and that didn't work out, either. Quite possibly.

Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” Thanks! And thanks again for betaing.

The penultimate chapter (chapter 10) of “Multiversity” is back from beta and posted! Dipper Thanks! I felt like I had to include the bit about the dad because I wanted to show that Mia’s fears of being exposed aren’t just in her head—that there are real consequences to people finding out what she is. But we’ll be back to the fun stuff soon enough.

Chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” is posted! In this flashback chapter, we find out how Mia’s unusual sex life got started. Thanks! There are times when I want the guy to have self-control, but I feel like it would be boring (and not terribly realistic) if that were the case ALL the time. So sometimes I just want him to go crazy and give the girl everything he’s got.

Aaaaand chapter 3 of “Little Rose” is posted. SWP1, no worries.

I don’t have any control over when my betas will get back to me with their critiques. They are doing this out of the kindness of their heart (ie, they rarely ask for me to do something for them in return), so I wouldn’t feel right about pressuring them. But I do plan to post chapter 3 of “Little Rose” some time tonight.

Very informative. And I will forever remember the phrase “boob turbulence.”

I don’t think just “letting things happen” to a character is enough to combat the Mary Sue disease. A lot of stuff happened to Rey from the current Star Wars trilogy, but that hasn’t prevented her from being good at absolutely everything she does on the first try, which makes it kind of pointless for her to have a story arc. For example, she had no real motivation to seek out Luke Skywalker, because he had nothing to teach her, so that part of the story came off as contrived. Compare that with the story arc of young Luke in the original trilogy, who had to confront not just enemies and hazards but his own flaws before he could become a Jedi. That’s what made his story worth watching.

So, much news. First, chapter 2 of “Delta Delta Delta” is now posted. Lindsey and the other pledges have to show off their dancing skills—alone, and with a partner. Naughtiness ensues. Second, chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” is now in beta. I now have three chapters in beta simultaneously, which is a personal record. Yay? Third, I unexpectedly made massive progress on chapter 3 of “Little Rose” this week, so that will probably be posted soon. Although if one of those three chapters comes back from beta and needs revisions, that will take priority. Fourth: SWP1, regarding your additional comments on “Hot Yoga”: Thanks! I wanted them to have a different sort of relationship from any of the others in the group. Also, Adyson has always had a bit of a bad-girl vibe, and I’ve always thought Gretchen was the cutest and sweetest of the Fireside Girls (after Isabella, anyway), so it just seemed right for Adyson to be the domme and Gretchen the sweet little submissive. Yes, my whole mother’s duty fetish definitely came through big time in this story, given that two female characters took on the role of sex-teachers to the younger ones. We’ll be seeing more of that from both Vanessa and Dr. Hirano in “The More, the Merrier.”

Re: “Little Rose” Thanks! And thanks for being the first to comment on this story. Next chapter coming soon!

Well, neither chapter has returned from beta yet, but in the meantime, I’ve made a bit of progress on the next chapters of “Auntie’s Home” and “The Little Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” and major progress on chapter 2 of “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl.” This chapter is a flashback to Mia’s teenage years, when she experienced her “second puberty” and the sharp spike in libido that came with it. It’s been hard limiting myself to one chapter’s worth of material, but I really want to get back to present time in the third chapter, so I’m sticking to the porny essentials.

My parents’ memorial service went splendidly. Lots of us got to tell stories about them, and everyone in attendance seemed glad to hear it. Now, 2 quick updates: --Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” should be back from beta any time now. --Chapter 10 of “Multiversity” went off to beta this morning. Thus, one way or the other, I’ll have something posted soon.

Thank you! My foremost goal is always to be true to the characters. Oh, he totally would. And her speech pattern is somewhat based on his. Thank you! I have just sent chapter 10 off to beta, so it should be ready soon!

Now, I didn’t say that...

There are just two chapters left to go, so you’ll find out the answers to all of those questions pretty soon. Stay tuned!

Hey, APW. I wanted to apologize for my long radio silence regarding this fic. The truth is, while I liked the novelty of a story that works in tandem with the episodes, I ultimately like a story to have a plot arc, and a story that is at the whims of what happens week by week in canon can’t have that. But I’m glad some folks are enjoying it.

Hey there. Personally, I’m glad that summer is getting closer to its end, mainly because it’s hot as blazes where I live. Some days, going outside is like going to a crawfish boil – where you’re the crawfish. I hope it’s more comfortable where you are. As for the stories you asked about, progress may slow down for a bit because I’m now in charge of putting together the program for my parents’ memorial service. But that shouldn’t take too long. Anyway, here’s a quick update: Chapter 2 of “The More, the Merrier” is still in beta. I hope to have it back and posted some time in the next week. Chapter 3 of “Little Rose” is off to a good start, but there’s work to be done. Chapter 10 of “Multiversity” is coming along nicely; I'd say it's about three-quarters complete. It's going to be a bit longer than chapter 9. The 6th and final chapter of “The Miss Cutie Patootie Pageant” still has a ways to go. But I’ve got a solid outline of it in my head, and I’m writing bits of the text as they come to me. (This is the way a lot of my writing goes – scenes are written not in the order they happen, but in the order in which each one becomes clear enough in my head to be put into words.)

I had an idea for a fanfic and I thought, “But what would I even do with it if I wrote it?” An internet search brought me to FFN, where I saw just how vast and diverse the fanfic world is.

Hey, weird is what Gravity Falls is all about. Glad you like the story!

One idea (borrowed from the Hollywood playbook) would be to follow the smaller party for a little while and then cliffhang them (ie, leave them in a dangerous situation that there’s a good chance they won’t survive). Then, when they pop up later, it will be a surprise, but not a deus-ex-level surprise.