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More “Band Together” is posted!
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Re: “Heaven Help You”
From SentinelX on January 31, 2025
QuoteHelluva fanfic! I absolutely loved this and you totally did HB justice. Characters were on point and I will forever ship Loona x Collin now.
Thank you! Writing this was a lot of fun, especially because I had never before written dialogue for characters who use so much profanity.
I actually just saw a YouTube short about people shipping Loona x Collin. This story wasn’t mentioned, though.
Re: “Laid Bare”
From SentinelX on January 31, 2025
QuoteBinge-reading all the Hazbin fics on here and your two masterpieces and Blacksheep's wholesome Lute/St. Peter fic are the only ones that did it for me. Yes, I am totally obsessed with HH atm. Appreciate the effort put in to keeping Charlie & Vaggie in-character and a well-written plot. Kudos.
Thanks! Writing characters authentically (while making them do smutty things) is always my goal. Might have to check out that Lute/St. Peter story.
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The new chapter of “The Business of Pleasure” is posted!
I’m still waiting for chapter 3 of “Band Together” to return from beta, so now I plan to focus (to the extent that I ever focus) on chapter 4 of “Rewire.”
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From ekmedic on January 26, 2025
QuoteOnly three chapters in and you have a strong story line and Vandra and the rest of the crew of the Angel are outstandingly fleshed out.
Thank you!
QuoteAlso love your antagonist and the fact that we have seen that Zero and his people were able to match Jozi and the other Exo's and can't wait for Chapter 4, I know that it's hinted that only Jozi has questions after confronting this new villian, but I think it would go far, if all four exo's were involved with any complications involved with confronting this powerful new villian, you have created
The story is told entirely from Jozi's perspective, so we know a lot more about what she's thinking that we know about the others. Rest assured, there will be a lot more said about Zero in the coming chapters.
Thanks for the comments!
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I’ve written a lot of threesome scenes, and they vary a lot in terms of how they go. But they tend to take one of these forms:
--All three participants pleasuring one another more or less equally
--Two participants focusing on pleasuring the third. Sometimes this is the case for the whole scene (especially if it’s two guys on one girl); other times, they take turns being the center of attention.
--A genuine “tag team” in which two participants have sex while the third watches, and then they switch out (usually so one of them can rest up for the next round)
So the “rules” vary according to what sort of relationship and expectations everyone has.
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I’m happy to say that chapter 3 of “Band Together” has gone to beta.
Now I’m focusing on chapter 5 of “The Business of Pleasure.” I’m contemplating splitting that chapter into two, if it ends up being very long.
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Just so I understand the question: By “tag team,” are you talking about a three-person sex session in which only two of the three are having sex at any given moment?
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On 1/10/2025 at 6:59 PM, Guest Guest said:
No worries, totally understandable.
The ideas I have are actually a couple of prompts:
- Vinnie, Stone and Skipp use sex as a way to warm up during a particularly cold night;
- The trio are in desperate need of cash due to some bad luck with pickpocketing. Thankfully, an amateur movie producer approaches the three with an offer. Said offer being a porno;
- A member of the trio gets caught masturbating by the other two.
You can probably tell which one I thought the most about lol. Let me know what you think!
Ah, I didn’t realize that you meant ideas related to Ramshackle. I’m not really feeling it. Maybe if it becomes a series and I see more of it, that will change.
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A new chapter of “Rewire” stands at the ready!
Guest, feel free to share your ideas. I make no guarantee that I’ll do anything with them; I’ve got more ideas of my own than I can reasonably hope to write up.
Also, I got hooked on another YouTube cartoon: Murphy and Mitzi. It’s cute, funny, and full of fun characters and dangerous shenanigans. And, God help me, I already have a fic idea for it.
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On 1/8/2025 at 5:23 PM, Deadman said:
Thanks @GeorgeGlass for the review on my Christmas piece.
To clarify something. This is actually the first chapter in the story. So this is the background for the rest of the story to jump off from. Basically, I have 11 other chapters, only 8 of which I’ve written so far. My main concern was that nothing in the next 10 chapters has Santa or anything really to do with Christmas. Just more exploration of things brought up in this chapter.In the show, they actually explored exactly what you suggested. But not fully. Which is partly why I’m writing this piece.
Ah, okay. Well, I’m glad you’re using the medium of fanfic to take the story in a direction that the show probably won’t.
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From InBrightestDay on January 01, 2025
A Fairy Merry Christmas
QuoteOk, this was really funny. I was legit chuckling several times while reading it. The idea of what is for all intents and purposes a puberty fairy had never occurred to me, but if there's a fairy for transitioning from baby teeth to adult teeth, then puberty fairies make sense too. I also loved the bar full of disgruntled fantasy creatures.
This idea actually came from an old Bill Cosby standup routine. He talked about a “breast fairy” that would come to a girl’s room at night with a magic bicycle pump.
QuoteWell, some of them are disgruntled. The satyr's probably just there because that's how he rolls.
Yup.
QuoteBeagan's attitude towards children is great too. She's correct, in that Dina is frustrated by the rate her body's maturing at, but I loved the inevitable exchange where Dina points out that Beagan is kind of forgetting that kids going through puberty are still kids, so she's not about to flash the other girls to prove her breasts aren't fake.
I never decided exactly how old Beagan is (twenty? a hundred and eighty-four?), but she’s old enough to have forgotten what being a kid was like.
QuoteFinally, Beagan's alcoholism could be played purely for laughs, and to be sure, there is something funny about an AA meeting involving fairies and elves, but on the other hand I like that there is a little arc for her here, catalyzed by seeing the consequences of her attempted shortcut. At a guess, she's gotten used to ignoring disapproval from the other fairies and maybe disappointment from her mom, but it might get through when it comes from Dina.
I’ve recently developed a fondness for reverse bathos: playing something for laughs and then turning it serious at the end. And for this story, Beagan confronting her alcoholism felt like the closest thing to a real happy ending that it could have.
QuoteAll in all, a pretty solid way to finish the year!
Thank you, and thanks so much for the review!
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Re: “A Fairy Merry Christmas”
From InvidiaRed on January 01, 2025
QuoteI adore the pixie getting help! ❤️
Thanks! Addiction isn’t something I’ve dealt with much in stories, but for this, it seemed fitting.
QuoteHow strange that helping others was a theme this year O:
Well, you know, the spirit of the holidays and all that.
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On 10/20/2024 at 12:45 PM, Guest Guest said:
Hey there GeorgeGlass! Hope you’re doing well! I’m a long time reader who previously suggested a few Craig of the Creek scenarios. (Like, a couple of years ago lmao)
I just wanted to ask, are you familiar with Ramshackle?
FYI, I did get around to watching Ramshackle a while back. I liked it, but it didn’t give me any story ideas.
On the other hand, I recently watched The Art of Murder, which might have story potential.
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Looks like the next thing I’ll be sending to beta is chapter 3 of “Rewire.” At this point, I’ve abandoned all illusions of finishing chapters in any particular order. I don’t know why I keep forgetting that I’m most productive when I just write what I feel like writing at the moment.
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Re: “The Glownose Chronicles”
QuoteFrom Seaman on December 28, 2024
Outstanding story with just enough sex to make it hot.
Thanks! That’s pretty much what I was going for.
QuoteI especially liked the shared-cock magic.
The twin-sister idea started as a joke that Fairy Slayer made about Greta’s use of “elf magic” at the end of the first story, and I liked it so much that I made it canon in the second story.
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@InvidiaRed, I left a comment on your story.
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19 hours ago, Deadman said:
Well I guess I misunderstood. I thought it was just posted regularly.
Here’s where I posted the story:
https://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100000Although if it has to be original, I don’t have anything like that.
It's all good. Honestly, I'm glad for any form of participation.
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I don't see your story in the 2024 Winter Holiday; I just see InvidiaRed's and mine.
If you go to this link and click Add Chapter, that should do it.
https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110499
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So I just posted my trilogy of stories about Rudy the Reindeer (from the 2019, 2020, and 2021 AFF Holiday Parties) as its own story titled “The Glownose Chronicles.” I thought I had done this years ago, but at least I did it in time for Christmas.
The Glownose Chronicles
A trilogy of stories about Rudy, the newest member of Santa's reindeer team. Training for the annual round-the-world flight is hard work, but it also brings many pleasures...and dangers.
Content Tags : 3Plus Anal Anthro Bi COMPLETE DP Exhib FF MF Oral -
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To the exclusion of pretty much all other stories, I’ve been working this week to finish my story for Winter Holiday 2024. And now it’s posted!
When the Tooth Fairy retires, the Fairy Council decides against passing the torch to her hard-drinking slacker daughter, Beagan. But they have to give Beagan SOME kind of job, so now she will learn what being a “maturation fairy” is all about. Tags: NoSex, TF, Holiday
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And, it’s up!
A Fairy Merry Christmas: When the Tooth Fairy retires, the Fairy Council decides against passing the torch to her hard-drinking slacker daughter, Beagan. But they have to give Beagan SOME kind of job, so now she will learn what being a “maturation fairy” is all about. Tags: NoSex, TF, Holiday
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Since I doofishly posted the story in the archives before anyone had an actual story to put in it, I just added the URLs of the last few Winter Holidays to it.
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Thank you! But which story was it?