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From ekmedic on January 26, 2025 Thank you! The story is told entirely from Jozi's perspective, so we know a lot more about what she's thinking that we know about the others. Rest assured, there will be a lot more said about Zero in the coming chapters. Thanks for the comments!

I’ve written a lot of threesome scenes, and they vary a lot in terms of how they go. But they tend to take one of these forms: --All three participants pleasuring one another more or less equally --Two participants focusing on pleasuring the third. Sometimes this is the case for the whole scene (especially if it’s two guys on one girl); other times, they take turns being the center of attention. --A genuine “tag team” in which two participants have sex while the third watches, and then they switch out (usually so one of them can rest up for the next round) So the “rules” vary according to what sort of relationship and expectations everyone has.

I’m happy to say that chapter 3 of “Band Together” has gone to beta. Now I’m focusing on chapter 5 of “The Business of Pleasure.” I’m contemplating splitting that chapter into two, if it ends up being very long.

Just so I understand the question: By “tag team,” are you talking about a three-person sex session in which only two of the three are having sex at any given moment?

Ah, I didn’t realize that you meant ideas related to Ramshackle. I’m not really feeling it. Maybe if it becomes a series and I see more of it, that will change.

A new chapter of “Rewire” stands at the ready! Chapter 3: Faceless Guest, feel free to share your ideas. I make no guarantee that I’ll do anything with them; I’ve got more ideas of my own than I can reasonably hope to write up. Also, I got hooked on another YouTube cartoon: Murphy and Mitzi. It’s cute, funny, and full of fun characters and dangerous shenanigans. And, God help me, I already have a fic idea for it.

Ah, okay. Well, I’m glad you’re using the medium of fanfic to take the story in a direction that the show probably won’t.

@InBrightestDay From InBrightestDay on January 01, 2025 A Fairy Merry Christmas This idea actually came from an old Bill Cosby standup routine. He talked about a “breast fairy” that would come to a girl’s room at night with a magic bicycle pump. Yup. I never decided exactly how old Beagan is (twenty? a hundred and eighty-four?), but she’s old enough to have forgotten what being a kid was like. I’ve recently developed a fondness for reverse bathos: playing something for laughs and then turning it serious at the end. And for this story, Beagan confronting her alcoholism felt like the closest thing to a real happy ending that it could have. Thank you, and thanks so much for the review!

@InvidiaRed Re: “A Fairy Merry Christmas” From InvidiaRed on January 01, 2025 Thanks! Addiction isn’t something I’ve dealt with much in stories, but for this, it seemed fitting. Well, you know, the spirit of the holidays and all that.

FYI, I did get around to watching Ramshackle a while back. I liked it, but it didn’t give me any story ideas. On the other hand, I recently watched The Art of Murder, which might have story potential.

Looks like the next thing I’ll be sending to beta is chapter 3 of “Rewire.” At this point, I’ve abandoned all illusions of finishing chapters in any particular order. I don’t know why I keep forgetting that I’m most productive when I just write what I feel like writing at the moment.

@Seaman Re: “The Glownose Chronicles” Thanks! That’s pretty much what I was going for. The twin-sister idea started as a joke that Fairy Slayer made about Greta’s use of “elf magic” at the end of the first story, and I liked it so much that I made it canon in the second story.

@InvidiaRed, I left a comment on your story.

It's all good. Honestly, I'm glad for any form of participation.

I don't see your story in the 2024 Winter Holiday; I just see InvidiaRed's and mine. If you go to this link and click Add Chapter, that should do it. https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110499