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RogueMudblood

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  1. Why I hate the star/plus rating system: Friends will up-vote their friends' stories. No matter how atrocious the writing. Pairings are down-voted just because someone doesn't like them, regardless of how good the story was. Drabbles and Twitfics are down-voted simply because of what they are, regardless of their content. It is utilized as a form of retribution for any number of things. Users will leave a "rating" rather than a review. The last one doesn't bother me so much because I thrive on praise, but because if it sucked, tell me why. I can't get better at writing if you don't tell me what I did wrong. (Having said that, please, by all means, tell me what I did right as well so I don't keep trying to improve something that is in an acceptable place, but neglect something that is in vast need of improvement.) Case in point of that: That review meant the world to me. It told me one thing I needed to know: did I convey what I intended? And, Daye, I can honestly say that I didn't get a "more" review on any of my stories until 2013-09-05. The story was Published [2013-05-11]. Even then, there was a bit more to it, and it was spelled correctly as well as being a complete sentence. I will say this - I generally won't 'vote' on a story in the archive (can't say I never have). I will, however, leave a review that will offset the "MOAR" reviews by leaving actual concrit. Anyone who is looking for a solid review would hopefully see that and consider it before simply clicking on the link and being disappointed by a five-star rating.
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    ...Who is you? Or is this a general request of "can anyone write a wild thornberrys fic?"
  3. If you're on this forum, you need to be 18. Otherwise, you shouldn't be here to even see that link.
  4. The author took it down. It could have been for any number of reasons, but those are known only to the author. Sorry.
  5. Links to the above: How Severus Spends His Summer Hols by sevs_lil_secret Severus and Harry embark on an adventure in the US that eventually finds them making their home in WV. This is fic is AU, there is OOCness, BDSM, Fluff, Mpreg, Torture, Angst. I don't want anyone to bother reading if it offends them. Thank you. Posted : 2005-06-20 -:- Edited : 2008-08-26 11:47:08 -:- Read Reviews
  6. The story was written by Sculderville - it's not on AFF, though.
  7. Category name: James Franco Section for it to be in: Celeb>Individual Celebrities Do you have any stories for it?: Yes.
  8. Cat and Mouse by sglily Ryou arrives home late to find Bakura waiting up for him-that's not necessarily a good thing. Being the generous soul he is, Bakura proposes a game of 'Cat and Mouse'. If Ryou wins he is allowed to go free. If Bakura wins well...you know... Posted : 2005-07-01 -:- Edited : 2005-08-10 00:00:00 -:- Read Reviews has not been removed from the archive - that link is still valid. I'm showing no record of a Maxine_chan in the archive at this time or having been deleted by this staff. If your links have not been updated to show adult-fanfiction.org in your bookmarks, that will be why you may be redirected to the new domain.
  9. Pen Name: RogueMudblood Story link: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094780&chapter=8 Review replies link: www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/49543-review-replies-and-we-continue-on/ Type of fic: Flashfic Rating: Adult + Fandom: The Monster Squad Pairing: Rudy/Phoebe (As stated in the author's note - and made as clear as possible in the text - this takes place eighteen years after the movie ends, so all parties are adults.) Warnings: AFFO, Angst, ChallengeFic, Fingering, H/C, M/F, Oral, UST, Violence, WIP
  10. I believe you're referring to Tesgura's "Baby Boy", which the author removed from the site.
  11. Numbers rather than numerals distract the reader from your story. My brain has to translate a symbol, such as 13 or "Dr" into a word, which slows me down. I understand how you can miss things reading over your own work, and that's why you utilize the services of a beta; however, I would highly recommend obtaining another one who has the time to go over things at the pace that you wish to update. I say this because uploading something which is below the standard that you wish to present turns readers off of your work. Random capitalization turns me off your work as well, and the site has an RTE box, so you can easily use italics in order to apply emphasis to a word or phrase. Example - you felt it necessary to randomly capitalize the word "numbers" in your response to me above. This is what you have: This is how it should appear (I've emboldened and underlined the changes): I'd also like to address your argument - it is much easier for me to type a word than a number. I use ten-key extensively, but when I'm composing a story, my fingers are on the alpha keys, and I have to reposition my hand in order to reach the numerals. It is far simpler for me to use the word thirteen and takes much less time than moving my hand over to the ten-key pad on my board and keying 13. I will also say that using your previous work experience as an excuse for lazy writing is a turn off to your work. Your response to me lacks punctuation, which is a poor display to your readers. I realize I'm being blunt here, but you need to understand that this is a presentation of your writing skill just as much as your story, and if I'm not intrigued by what I see here, I won't be impressed by your story. Allow me to provide a scenario for you: If you purchased a book with the glaring errors in your own work, and the author offered as excuse that their editor simply wasn't fast enough for their tastes, would you purchase another book by that author?
  12. Do you have authorization from the authors whose work you are trying to take to do so? And as far as I know, there is no way to bypass the verification page - it's there for a reason.
  13. It was removed from the site because the author refused to comply with the clearly stated terms of service of this site. Leilita requested that her profile be removed as well. This took place in December 2011.
  14. That's the fandom, yes. But the story they've described is not "Labyrinth" itself.
  15. Regardless, since you did create a new account, I'll put them in the merge queue with a note that you want to keep the aleigh75 gmail address. I will also state that the evil.muse address is not the one registered to the sadisticmuse account. It's the one showing on the profile, but it's not the one it was registered under.
  16. Darling, that would be MA. Not M. But we don't use those ratings here. Possibly this story? Moonlight Offering Draco is walking the moonlit grounds of Hogwarts. He is confronted by a wolf and submits himself to the beast. Anal, Beast, COMPLETE, D/s, M/M, Oral, PWP, Rim [SlashPervert] Harry Potter > Slash - Male/Male
  17. The title. And I noted the issue with the URL when I made my post.
  18. @AlfonsoLing - Have you attempted to use Google in order to search the stories you have here? I admit, they haven't updated to the new URL yet, but that does show you just how long it's been available via Google: (edited for formatting)
  19. Link courtesy of the lovely Pittwitch:
  20. review from cherylnixon 09/05/13: I assure you, I do intend to write more! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and do hope that you will continue to do so.
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