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  1. 5 more days until the Halloween Anthology will be up and running! Everyone is welcome to add a story!

    If you haven’t started yours yet, there are some Halloween story ideas in the Original Challenges forum. And don’t worry if you don’t get your story done by the 20th, you can still submit an entry up to Halloween and beyond.
     

     

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    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      @Sinfulwolf oh good you're a perfectionist too. Welcome to the club! I've been doing that constantly with chaptered fics for the last year. But I churned out the 3 Halloween fics I wrote in like 2 weeks. Complete switch around from last year. 

    3. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      I still can’t focus on the one story, but since I’ve got the other one, it’ll definitely go up and  give that nice creepy Christmas feel….

    4. Sinfulwolf

      Sinfulwolf

      I wouldn’t say perfectionist… but I do like to put out something good and entertaining at least.

  2. Binge-watching Lockup. So who wants to write some fun m/m prison fiction for me to binge-read? 

     

  3. For those of you who don’t follow me, the planning thread for the Holiday Anthology is up! But seriously, you should be following me.

     

    1. BronxWench
    2. Tcr

      Tcr

      "IT'S GARBAGE DAY!"  I mean, right seasonal movie, wrong quote...  And if anyone gets the quote...  You get a lifetime award of "Wow, Not the Only Obscure Movie Weirdo".  Lol.

      Seriously, hurrah  (why'd it autocorrectto Murray?) For this!!!!

  4. Got my eggnog, got my nutcracker collection surrounding me, got my music playing and my lights off, and a house full of sleeping animals. No responsibilities, no expectations, just me and the silent wintry night. This is Christmas my way. 

    I hope you all get your slice of happiness tonight, in whichever form you demand it. Love you guys <3

    1. Daye

      Daye

      That sounds super peaceful and relaxing! Enjoy!

    2. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      That sounds absolutely perfect! :hug: Merry Christmas! :D

       

  5. I have been assimilated into the world of the bespectacled. Huzzah! 

    And… You know what? I think I like it. 

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    2. KassX

      KassX

      Seconded on the foundation thing, my sunglasses do that too :cry:

    3. Arian-Sinclair

      Arian-Sinclair

      @pippychick

      You use the daily contacts? Those are a lot more expensive than the monthly ones I use. It isn't hard to clean them, so I just do that. The fact that I flip so much between glasses and contacts helps in not having to clean them every day, though I do have to clean the lenses throughout the day when wearing my glasses because of all the little dust mites floating around inside if I'm home all day.

      @CloverReef

      Tinted moisturizer might work depending on the brand and such. I never bothered trying that myself, though. I sometimes don't even bother with make-up when wearing my contacts. If it's a particular occasion, I'll definitely put on at least some foundation and mascara, otherwise it's just depends on whether I feel like it or not.

      @KassX

      I'm afraid of wearing sunglasses with my contacts for that reason when I do put on make-up! I haven't worn actual sunglasses in so long because of that.

    4. KassX

      KassX

      @Arian-Sinclair I live in LA, so not wearing sunglasses is not really an option lol. Hey, maybe that’s why everyone here walks around with shades on indoors and at night! :D

  6. I love writing tips. Like I LOVE them. I can spend hours on google searching for specific tips and soaking in every little ounce of advice I can get my greedy little paws on. 

    Then I abandoned facebook and joined twitter. There I discovered a treasure trove of editors and publishers posting practically hourly, and I was so excited! 

    And then I discovered that 90% of the writing pages I’ve found on twitter are full of shit. Full of sweeping generalizations, no concept of word economy, conflicting advice within the same article, or just baseless friggin judgments. SMH. I feel so disillusioned right now. 

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    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      @Praetor I attribute a good part of what I love about my own writing skill to a healthy exchange between writers. Twenty years of exchanging stories to beta and giving each other advice is the way I chose to evolve. It’s what works for me. It’s why I’m active on this site. Of course it wasn’t all good advice, but you learn to pick and choose what to take and what to shrug off. Doing your own thing is absolutely important too. I just prefer a balance of both. 

    3. Melrick

      Melrick

      I wrote a bunch of tips here actually, speaking of which, although I couldn’t remember where they were so I had to go hunting for them.

    4. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      Not only is there all that BS, but there’s also the massive variation in what works for whom. I recently went to a panel discussion in which 5 writers talked about, among other things, hashing out story ideas. Some of them absolutely needed someone to discuss ideas with; some just needed to say them out loud, even to a rubber ducky; and one said that articulating his ideas made him lose all interest in them. 

  7. I was never a fan of procedural dramas, but I used to not mind them as something mindless to watch. Now I can’t even watch them! Whole time I’m watching Lie To Me, I’m going “OMG how is this Lightman dude not in prison! That’s assault! That’s a felony!” 

    Maybe I’m watching too much Lockup. 

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    2. Avaloyuru

      Avaloyuru

      Funny you should mention Law & Order @CloverReef because that just happens to be my favorite one!  The original, not the Special Victims Unit. :D

    3. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      They film quite a bit for that show in my neighborhood. All of the Law and Order shows, actually. But I did get to meet Jerry Orbach once, and he was lovely. :D

    4. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      I like svu mostly because ice T dealing with sensitive cases amuses the hell out of me. When i was into procedural dramas though my poisin was ncis. I liked criminal minds too until greg from dharma and Greg came into it. I don't like his eyebrows. 

  8. I’m so relieved the Christmas anthology is going well. I feel bad for being semi MIA for it last year. You guys are awesome! My gorgeously talented AFF family! 

    Rock on, guys! 

    1. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      This is the second time I’ve submitted two, which is nice :)

    2. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      I’m really happy I was able to contribute to both this year myself. I really, really enjoy doing these anthologies! :hug: to you for hosting them, @CloverReef

  9. It’s a mature, television thriller. I wanted more of it, I wanted to see it go places the tv producers couldn’t take it, so I thought I’d check out the fandom. I thought “Oh, the fans of this show will be mature”, “I’ll totally find some dark and angsty fanfics on this one!”

    You fooled me again, internet. Well done. I’d better go to bed as soon as I can stop cry-laughing. 

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    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Lol my problem wasnt that there were fics like that, it was that all the hannibal fics on that particular site were like that. 

    3. JayDee

      JayDee

      Fair enough! I hope you find what you’re looking for elsewhere. I think a lot of Friday the 13th fics have much the same issue.

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      @CloverReef Hannibal with an eating disorder, right?  

  10. Okay. I did it: 

    If someone else was hoping to do it, or if I did it wrong, let me know and we can work it out. 

    1. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      :freak:  Thanks for volunteering!  :)

    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      I’m super excited. My friends aren’t gonna hear the end of it until halloween’s over

    3. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Apart from a couple of announcements, it’s not that bad, and it’ll be on your profile.  Besides, you then get the right of the first story post :)

  11. Sooo tired of thinking up names for characters. Time to start writing with variables instead. 

    AFF, I am pleased to introduce you to the new stars of my stories: X, Y, and Z.

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    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      Have \ fuck / and you’ve got real slash fiction.

    3. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

       (o)   (o) 
      \___/ \___/

       

    4. Sinfulwolf

      Sinfulwolf

      I feel your pain. I have demons so, it gets even more annoying.

  12. Thinking of doing a penname change. Just feel like it’s time to evolve from the old CloverReef. I mean… I’ve been CloverReef for… about a decade I guess. It probably seems weird to some people, who are perfectly content identifying with one pen name their whole lives, but for me, as I grow and shift, how I identify tends to grow and shift too. 

    I do have a pen name in mind. But I’m debating whether I should wait until I finish posting my current chaptered story or not. 

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    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      @CloverReef  If you think I’m horrible, you should read my stories to confirm it! :)

       

    3. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      @Desiderius Price I tend to avoid the hells out of scat and WS when I don’t have to read it for the weekly sweeps. I’d almost rather read about sounding, which remains to date the only thing to actually have made me cry a little while sweeping. (I was very new, in my defense.)

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      @BronxWench I tend to say “scat” in the forums for the “eww” response.  In my writings, the tag will be a general CYA because I’ll mention characters taking a dump when it’s relevant to the story.  I can’t really fathom the “play” part of it, and I don’t want to.

  13. Wooo! I hit the 5 chapter mark! Since that’s my I-Got-This-Far-So-Pretty-sure-I-Won’t-Drop-This-fic-Like-I-Did-The-Last-Fifty-Yay line in he sand, you know what that means, don’t you? Tiiime to unleash this porny beast upon the world!!!! Mwahahahaahaha! 

    Well… Soon as I edit and wrangle me a beta… BEWARE and so forth. 

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    2. InBrightestDay

      InBrightestDay

      Quote

      that’s my I-Got-This-Far-So-Pretty-sure-I-Won’t-Drop-This-fic-Like-I-Did-The-Last-Fifty-Yay line in he sand

      :lol: It’s always good to have a line like that.

      Quote

      Oh crap I gotta write the summary. :no:

      I know how you feel.  It’s a surprisingly tricky thing to do.

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Ha! I did decide on a title, thanks to Melrick. 

      But yeah, summaries. Who needs em? From now on I’m just going to load the summary field with top secret mind control words that force everyone who’d enjoy the story to read it and review. Those words exist! I’m sure of it! We just gotta make them harry potter writers tell us what they are! 

    4. JayDee

      JayDee

      “LOL I SUCK AT SUMMARIES JUST READ AND REVIEW.”

  14. Wooooh! I finished a short story!

    It was meant to be my entry for the AFF Halloween thingy, but it ended up running a little long. Of course it’s not out of the wordcount limit or even close to it, 7.5k is too long for me so either I’ll suck it up and put it in the anthology as is, or if I manage to write another entry, I’ll split this one into a two-parter and post it normally. 

    Eeeee I’m just happy I finally finished something! Yay!

    1. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      You can make it a multi-parter across years… it’s been done before.  ie, post the first part (a complete story, btw), this year, and post the second part next year.  I’ve done a sequel in before (ie, The Phone, and The Phone II).

    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      If only I had that kinda patience, lol

  15. Time in the story where I most frequently have existential crises, and question all the skills I’m normally (over)confident of…? The first. Frickin. Sentence.

    And yes. I deleted and redid this status because of a typo. FML. 

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    2. Tcr

      Tcr

      Funny, I kind of do the same thing...  I'll start writing...   Sometimes two, three, half the novel, then I get a scene that I have to write...  And it's much later...  So I stop writing where I am to advance off to the later chapter/scene.  On occasion, I've done what you said, written a scene without writing anything else, because it's detailed, then I work it around…

      And yeah, sometimes, it would be easier to write it backwards...  But then, wouldn't there still have to be a first line?  Whether it's a last line?

    3. mastershakeme

      mastershakeme

      I’d suggest you totally blow the first line and move on… (haha that sounds silly :P) you can always come back and play with it. you might get ideas about what you really want to do with the first line later. Don’t beat yourself up, just get into the meat of the story!

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Sometimes I’ve found myself writing backwards too.  Of course, those scenes far off will typically be more plot critical (gives me an idea of how it’ll play down), though there’s still frequently a sexual scene, toying with my characters, leaving me to figure out where I’ll put it (because the scene will be good).  I’m sure I’d keep a shrink occupied for their entire career if they ever cared to really analyze it in me.

  16. Ahhhh! It’s been seven years since I had to write a conclusion to a chaptered story. WTF I have no idea what to do with this conclusion lol. Now I’m all excited and proud and nervous and frustrated all at once, so I’m just gonna scream again, kay? AHHHH! :party::flash:

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    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      You, DP, I totally take for granted. No, I’m kidding. You don’t fascinate me, sorry, but I am often impressed and amused by you. 

    4. JayDee

      JayDee

      Y’all scare me. Also the brothers have pointed out they modernised from brethren and so I withdraw my objection to talking about the brother.

  17. Anyone know any good science fiction novels? Trying to find something to buy my dad for Christmas. Bonus points if it has gay characters, but no smut. No way I’m buying my dad porn lol. bleeeeh

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    2. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Thanks guys! I'll check them all out!

    3. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Well, @CloverReef if you’re daring, wrap it in some playboy covers or similar :)

       

    4. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Lol @Desiderius Price! Well my dad's gay so he might be a little confused by that message. And if you're trying to make me shudder it worked!

  18. Anyone know of a decent publisher? I’m working myself up to trying this again soon as the moving drama calms down a bit. 

  19. As a proud Canadian, I successfully avoided the Trailer Park Boys ever since their unfortunate inception. I thought the whole thing was stupid. The glimpses I got seemed boring and ridiculous and offensive…

    Now I’m addicted to the goddamn show. Call help. 

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    2. Sinfulwolf

      Sinfulwolf

      Redwall if yer into animation.

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      friggin loooove kids in the hall and orphan black. Never heard of redwall, I’ll have to check it out!

    4. Sinfulwolf

      Sinfulwolf

      Older cartoon kinda meant for kids. Based off a “Children’s” book series by Brian Jacques. Basically this fantasy world inhabited by anthropomorphic animals… who then slaughter the fuck out of each other. Seriously, the first book “Redwall” was a bunch of brigand rats besieging an abbey that had to learn how to defend themselves, including the fact that they had to take lives in order to protect all those who took refuge in their abbey.

      And that book was turned into a Kids TV show.

  20. Couldn’t sleep. But the fun thing about insomnia is everything seems 150% funnier and gooder (that’s a word now. I just decided). I just started a scene and laughed uproariously at a stupid little porny rhyme I wrote in it and I just KNOW I’m going to think it’s totally juvenile and unusable in the morning. Morning Chloe’s such a goddamn stick in the mud. 

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    2. marley_station

      marley_station

      What is Morning Chloe afraid of?

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Morning Chloe is afraid of everything. Morning Chloe has issues. 

    4. marley_station

      marley_station

      Morning Chloe is in good company, then. :P

  21. Dogsitting over, time to get back to the important shit: writing smut. Soon as I get a good idea. … … *Crickets* … … Fuck it, I’ll just work on my Christmas fic. 

    1. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      Dog shitting?  Hmm… might make for a crappy Christmas story, just saying….

    2. JayDee

      JayDee

      A Dogshitter is what Sean Connery hires to look after his pet.

    3. InvidiaRed
  22. Finally got more than two words into a christmas story. I’m 1500 deep now, and suddenly all my plans turn to shit because my characters decided to do it their own way. Well if you wanna dictate the direction, you fictional assholes, you could at least write me an outline or something! 

    1. JayDee

      JayDee

      You can always punish them. Write something like “In the background Justin Bieber music began to play on a continuous loop.”

    2. BronxWench
  23. Finally read Apprentice and did my review replies. Now back to Hannibal for me! 

    1. Desiderius Price
    2. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      Now why did this make me think of you, m’dear Clover?
       

       

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    3. CloverReef
  24. First time ever, got a holiday story written early! Annnnd now I have to wait a month. Fuck me.

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    2. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      I’ve been considering one, but no, haven’t written it yet.  I was toying with another halloween one, but I forget what it was about… have to write it down once I remember.  (It’s been floating in/out of consciousness.)

    3. CloverReef

      CloverReef

      Something about them priests I hope, DP ;) I love naughty priests. 

    4. Desiderius Price

      Desiderius Price

      The holiday fic might have naughty priests, though the successor to Dale’s Game might have them too :)

       

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