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Glad you liked the finale so well, SWP1. To answer your questions: I’ve decided to title the ‘Sandboy’ sequel “Just One Rule,” which refers to Lincoln being forbidden to have sex with anyone outside the Loud household. I’ve made good progress on the final chapter of “For the Price of One,” but it’s not ready for prime time yet. Now that “Twist My Arm” has dropped off the List of Twenty, my Big Hero 6 story, titled “Rashomonster,” is jumping on. Will check out that story you mentioned.

Still wish the final member was Gal Gadot, but will be interesting to see how Alexandra and Kendall will fit in. With Kendall being kept loyal with a constant supply of Arcadia, will Bella realize that’s what Arcadia does or just be possibly be kept in control? Also around the time of everyone getting taken, think there can be some fun tension between Kendall and Taylor. Can’t wait for the next one!

First I loved chapter 5 it was a awesomely sweet and funny chapter, I'm also happy Lincoln and Ronnie Ann got some payback, and Lori and him had that talk afterwards and there cool. Second I also loved chapter 6 was a fun and sweet Epilogue I hope there's a sequel when there older and get together .

The difference between now and then is spelled “vacation”. Not a bad idea for a story...but I was thinking along the lines of Fitzgerald’s “Show me a hero, and I'll write you a tragedy.” It makes sense that there eventually need to be a hero to try to make things right when the demon appears and there are plenty of reasons why this particular character might care a lot about what happened and have a story to tell. No worry really. Honestly I have read stories where such scene would have fitted well, but I am guessing there might be some readers around that are a bit wary about checking stuff that makes JayDee talk about such things...I think there is plenty of darkness in the story. With a lead character that is evil or suffering from severe amorality depending on your point of view bad stuff happens but there are also a number of places when I decided against using more severe abuse to not obscure the story. The scene with the rape of the witch for instance could been used a lots of more violence, but I decided that having her put up less resistance made it work better. The funny thing is that I started writing this with the aim to make something shorter than the epics that I normally get involved with. Problem was just that the story concept gave me such good ideas that the scenes kept adding themselves and scope keep growing. Thanks again for the reviews. They mean a lot to me. Like I mentioned before in an earlier review this is a story that has always got good ratings but very little actual feedback