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I can live with any reading speed you prefer. It was just funny that I decided I had to much work time and should skip checking AFF for few days since it is long since I had a review and suddenly there are two full length reviews that I missed. Not answering reviews in a timely fashion feels so very rude... You might be interested to know that there is one of later chapters that investigate Fang more in detail and gives more context to her fear. I see what you did there. I had lots of fun writing that reply...in truth it takes significant time to write good replies without spoiling too much of the future plot. Very good analysis. Good to know. Speaking of my other stories….I think you really want to stay clear of the ADM story and Carmen Elisa Need to Die that have characters that suffers a lot with very little hope afterwards...on the other hand With the Mirror Came.. might actually be a better fit for you than I thought earlier. It is the kind of story where the bad guy with high probability will win at the end, but on the other hand the bad guy is not after death and destruction. The lead character is over the story subjected to a lot of stuff...but she is also part of one of the best love couples I ever has written so there is clearly hope in the story. Actually I also have some new stuff in pipeline that I think you might find interesting. Just need to manage to finish the damn editing...not having a beta makes things take so horrible much time. I understand the confusion. I spent like a ton of time to figure out the rules for the psionic system and how it interact with people in the setting but at the end trying to explain that to the reader would kind of ruin the flow of the story so most of it never made it into print. Some kind of explanation about maze trap sound merited...I add it to list of things to look at when I have time to give the story a makeover.

yeah unless someone can come up with a better name, im going with a Hamlet