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I would like to read a story where like Snape slowly brainwashes and corrupts the students and the teachers into sex toys. In this story Snape must be firmly against Voldemort but he's by no mean a good person. He wants to keep Harry safe because he's Lily's son but he hates him because he's James' brat. Since Dumbledore obviously can't keep Harry safe or happy, Snape decides to take care of it in a way that keeps himself happy. He plans to brainwash/corrupt Harry into being his faithful servant and fuck-toy with potions, spells and legilimency, (if you are familiar with my fic "Candy" you know what I'm talking about), but because his friends would notice if he changes too much he must corrupt Hermione and Ron too. What I'd like to see is: - Harry being turned into a feminine sissy (he can develop breasts later on but no gender change) over time. I'd like to see him struggle with his new sexuality and his attraction to Snape. - Hermione becoming either a bimbo or an exhibitionist or both - Do what you with Ron but he must be submissive too. Play with any other character as you see fit but Snape must be dominant and bisexual. No Mpreg. Points for cum and cock addiction for the subs. By the end of the story the Light side must win the war. - Other kinks I'd like to see are: whoring, dickgirls and gloryholes. I'm not good with plot so the best I can do is write smut with an illusion of a story beneath, but I'd like to read a story with more plot. I hope to see this challenge turned into a story soon.

All along, there's been sex in the series. First book was more sex than story. If I didn't enjoy the sex as well, I wouldn't have kept reading all of it. The problem most seem to forget, it's Magus' series to write as he sees fit. Honestly, it's been more action in this book than the closeness that started all of it in BITG. It wasn't really until the later part of that one that the slave ring was brought in, before that it was more about them as a group and how they interacted and dealt with what happened to them, the trauma from the dog attack that actually made Amy afraid to even pet Mia's mom, June's death, the loss of Max's first daughter, Amy and Emma losing their virginity to Max, as he lost his to them, after that, yeah, it was a bit or an orgy, but, there was the closeness, now everyone is everywhere all the time. Eventually Max and Co. will find that while it's hopeless to try to completely eliminate the evil in the world, they have done a lot more than anyone else has, or will do, even the Pope couldn't keep the crap from happening right under his own nose. Knowing Max, he'll find a way to go the route that Nick has gone, and start hiring people to perform while he is able to concentrate on logistics as well as funding, that would fall into an area that I'm sure Magus is very familiar with. I have loved the overall series from the first time I read about Max getting lost in Emma's eyes, while there's times it goes a direction I may not prefer, it's always true to what Magus wants to put down. For that, I think I speak for a lot of us.... Thank you for giving us hours upon hours of enjoyment and we all look forward to many more. You got banned to your office.... sounds like not much of a punishment, kind of like sending a modern kid to their room... computer, Xbox, big screen, fridge, microwave, and i'm sure a few "adult" beverages. Enjoy the warmth, and don't let the girls break the bank too badly.

OK, gotta admit...I shed a tear for Hans. Thanks for not making the Pope a bad guy but Max will still get the blame for killing him, I expect...regardless of what the young guy tells the authorities. It will be interesting to see if this makes Max a marked man. Hoping he proves to the world that Artemis was the bad guy in all of this but I guess we'll see. GREAT chapter!

My apologies for not catching on to the troll sooner. It's been taken care of. @Johnny Best of luck with your dad's health and treatment. I know how tough this is. Lost my MIL last year to an aggressive form of leukemia.

Hey everyone! First of all, I wanna send a special message to JohnnyBanana: I'm glad the news isn't as bad as it could be. I hope the news continues to hold out well and you're still in our prayers. And a special thank-you to everyone else who supported him. This is an awesome community of people and I'm glad that, in my own little way, I can help keep everyone together. Now onto the Reality Check: - For Kayla's reaction, I asked my wife how she would react if she got similar news. I have never actually done anything like that but she and I sat down for a while and hashed out how the emotions would play out. - I did have a buddy in high school who was rather unpopular for a while who decided to run for Student Council. We managed to convince him to hold off for a year to repair his reputation. I won't reveal how it turned out as that would fall under the classification of SPOILERS. - Jack and Kayla's critique from Ms. Locke is identical to many that I got in high school. I'd like to think my teacher was trying to push us but, honestly, I never felt like it was doing much more than pissing me off. - My brother and I fought a few times growing up and the fight between Alan and Jack is a fairly close representation of how they all went down. That's about it. Minor bits and pieces are based on real life as well, but none really worth mentioning. Have started work on Chapter 27 and hopefully it'll go by quickly. Hope everyone is doing well and I'll message soon with progress updates!

They ARE your family. Just have a different name here. . B

Hopefully you can get GITG wrapped up before jamaica, that way you have a break between books. Hard to believe weve read 113 chapters about max and the girls.

eh, I get randy sometimes...