>Fairy-Slayer 2014-03-24 id # 3000069220
>I finally got a chance to listen to it, and it's so good I listened again.
I’m flattered!
>There were a lot of good bits that made me laugh or struck me as terrific, though unfortunately there was no way to note them all. However, everyone telling Phineas that Isabella had a crush on him for the longest time was adorable; the IsaBuford site was scary funny; polymer that "TASTES like chewing gum" cracked me up; everything takes longer to fix than to build was great.
I was thinking of the episode in which Baljeet’s bike got a flat tire, and it seemed to take the boys quite a while to fix it.
>The only thing that could have been cute was if the girls (at least) were still shy about undressing in front of the boys when it's just for the purpose of changing clothes, like some instinctive thing. Not a deal-breaker by any stretch.
Oh, that’s a clever idea.
>Trojan Horse - of course of course.
Neigh! J
>The plot itself was very show like, from the invention, the problem, and the B story with what Isabella (rightly, IMO) told Phineas when he was being clueless to her needs again.
Heck, even Phineas agreed with her, so yeah.
>Actually, it was one of those higher-level episodes where there was real danger (especially for Ferb) and then Candace and the community all rallied. "A very special episode" perhaps.
As soon as I got the idea of hundreds of kids wanting to pay P&F back for all great things they’ve done over the summer, I couldn’t let go of it.
>I did start to get worried about Perry and Doof not showing up, but it seems that they were saved, er, Candace was thwarted just in the nick of time. Terrific.
Yeah, I couldn’t introduce that part too early without having big gaps between their scenes, so I had to put it off for a bit.
>That targeting-system bit was hilarious.
It would explain a lot, wouldn’t it?
>Poor Stacy though, but maybe the sex strap will give her ideas for later on.
I can’t seem to write one of these stories without at least one of the teens losing her mind.
>Too bad Candace couldn't think of a way to bust her brothers for their other activities, but she had more important things in mind. Plus people who live in Glass houses and all that.
J
>The brief descriptions of the group's sexual escapades blossomed nicely as the story went along, and as it sometimes was mixed in with the relationship advice it was even poignant at times. When it became most descriptive it was excellent, and then we got a really nice recap.
Because this was a sequel, I really wanted the sex and relationships in this story to be at least somewhat more evolved than they were in the previous one; really, that was much of the point of writing this story.
>Now I just feel bad for Irving and Eva because it's going to get very confusing. But I'm not going to lose any sleep over it.
Inator effects always wear off eventually. And in the meantime, there’s got to be some entertainment value in seeing Irving try to imitate Buford. J
>Thanks for a really fun story, especially on a day that was otherwise driving me nuts. Still, even when I was home and resting it was just as good the second time. Maybe a third is in order too.
I’m very glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for yet another detailed, thoughtful, and uplifting review.