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The Slave of Bones now 25226 hits and 4 reviews!

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With what she knows though, why would Amelia sacrifice her niece? Harry will be unable to fight properly since he will be conditioned even if subconsciously to be a slave. Thus he will be unable to fight Tom, leading to Susan being dead at best, sex slave at worst to people far worse than how she treated Harry.

Thanks for your query; to answer your question, she wouldn't. Nor, I suspect, would she rape Harry. This here is one of those request fics where the actual porn thing the person wants to see is so unlikely and out of character or continuity that the only way for a tired porn hack like me to write it is out of character. Thus, for anybody who wants to see the idea "Amelia rapes Harry and then he becomes an auror sex slave" they'll overlook the unlikely characterisation, the impossible behaviour, the clunky descriptive text and spoken lines like,

“For tonight, I will leave you like this. If you learn to behave with respect and service me sufficiently well, I will permit you further degrees of movement, slave. Do you understand? Remember that your life is in my hands and say, yes Goddess.”

hence the smattering of positive reviews, while everybody else has your reaction! The follow up question then is, "Well, why post it on the internet?" to which I reply, "because of the people who do want to touch themselves over it."

Next: An AU in which Amelia's cable stops working, and Harry is the guy sent to fix it.

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After only eight years, another comment on For the Profit of The Slytherin giving it a highly respectable ratio of 4 reviews:44393 hits since January 2008!

The comment does, unfortunately, stretch the reviews page, so I have added some carriage returns here.

anon
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Thank you for your comment. The last time I saw so much of the letter k on the same page was in Trump supporter literature.

Was the key jammed down because of all the spunk crusted on it? If so, it's good that you're enjoying AFF!

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I woke up at 3am and thought about a story where Fred and George are both getting fucked by the same athletic dickgirl in their seventh year (before leaving). Would call it Angelina's Johnson.

I bet someone’s already done it, but it’s not coming up on google...

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Revenge Of The Ravenclaw aka the one where Draco gets castrated.

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From ANON - Pppp on January 17, 2020

 

Well. Another blank review. Not sure if meant to be an actual review, if so I thank you for the intent, or some sort of screwed up spam bot in which case, meh, at least we’re a while yet off Skynet destroying us all.

 

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Unleash The Beast ended up being my most “copy and pasted” story of all time. It just kept showing up elsewhere. It may well be out there again at the moment. Watching, waiting. Ready to strike. Who can say? Well, unexpected new review!

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From ANON - cherokee on July 26, 2020

Just read your story. Damn, you are that rare kind of writer that makes the reader wish the story never ends. I got off like a sonofabitch. Thank you and I hope to see more of your stories

Thank you for the review! I’ve noticed a lot of folks are super reluctant to review older stories which is likely why this’n from 2008 has 151824 hits and less than 20 reviews so it’s really cool of you to take the time and I’m really glad to hear that you enjoyed this so much! I wish I could still put our stories of this sort of length. Unfortunately most of my other stories are very different and if you liked this you’d probably not enjoy them, with the possible exception of “Corinthian Knot” in Games and “The Horse and His Cock” in books – and the latter might be too short to work for ya with this kind of content. Still, at least you’ve enjoyed this’n and I thank you again for the review.

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