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So, I now have three things that are on the cusp of being ready: my Halloween story “The Ultimate,” “The Big Brothers Club,” and the latest chapter of “Master Plan.” I hope to get “The Ultimate” done and posted tomorrow, and the others soon thereafter.

So, I now have three things that are on the cusp of being ready: my Halloween story “The Ultimate,” “The Big Brothers Club,” and the latest chapter of “Master Plan.” I hope to get “The Ultimate” done and posted tomorrow, and the others soon thereafter.

Chapter 3 of “Developed” is off to beta. Now I am focusing primarily on finishing my Halloween story, “The Ultimate.” It’s a medieval (or maybe pre-medieval) fantasy about two women who go into the woods on “The Eve” for some fun they couldn’t have any other night of the year.
FYI, I'm planning to do NaNoWriMo this year, which means that I'll be slowing down on my smut writing during November. But I will at least work on my in-progress stories—“Master Plan,” “Red All Over,” and “Developed”—during that time. 
Before November, I’m hoping to finish “The Big Brothers Club.” This will be a long, round-robin, rather rapey one-shot furry story about a group of teenage boys who bring their younger siblings to their “clubhouse” on Friday nights to be used by the other teens.  Even thought it’s a single story, I’ve been writing it in 4 separate documents because it was hard to keep the 4 plot threads straight in my head when I had them in 1 document. I’m using this same approach with my Glitch Techs story “Retro,” which will also be a long, round-robin one-shot.

Chapter 3 of “Developed” is off to beta. Now I am focusing primarily on finishing my Halloween story, “The Ultimate.” It’s a medieval (or maybe pre-medieval) fantasy about two women who go into the woods on “The Eve” for some fun they couldn’t have any other night of the year.
FYI, I'm planning to do NaNoWriMo this year, which means that I'll be slowing down on my smut writing during November. But I will at least work on my in-progress stories—“Master Plan,” “Red All Over,” and “Developed”—during that time. 
Before November, I’m hoping to finish “The Big Brothers Club.” This will be a long, round-robin, rather rapey one-shot furry story about a group of teenage boys who bring their younger siblings to their “clubhouse” on Friday nights to be used by the other teens.  Even thought it’s a single story, I’ve been writing it in 4 separate documents because it was hard to keep the 4 plot threads straight in my head when I had them in 1 document. I’m using this same approach with my Glitch Techs story “Retro,” which will also be a long, round-robin one-shot.

Thanks for “sidequel”; I’d never heard that before. 
I’m sure Randy will be plowing Opal doggystyle at some point near the end of the story.

I think I would not rehash Opal and Evie’s visit to Randy and Rose’s house, but I might conclude the story with a scene set after that (but before the events of “A Little Family Trip”).
Black Canary is a good comparison for Opal’s body type. Now I’m going to have to have her wear black fishnet stockings at some point.
Now here’s a question: If a sequel is a story set after the original and a prequel is set before the original, what do you call a story that takes place at the same time as the original? 

Re: “The Power Arcane: An Erotic Anthology” (final story)
From LadyFreelove2 on October 08, 2023
Thanks! Both the battle and the orgy required extensive outlining because there were so many characters involved, so I really appreciate the comment.

We have an ongoing issue with punctuation in story titles and summaries. I’m unable to correct it for our members myself, which suggests this is a script/code issue. Hopefully, @manta2g will be able to address that when she has the time. The black diamond issue is something else entirely, however. 

So, the next things I’m trying to finish are chapter 3 of “Developed” and my Halloween one-shot story, to be titled “The Ultimate.”
Also, notes for a couple of people:
Lesles, I watched the first episode of “Gaki Ni Modotte Yarinaoshi,” and dang, it was hot. Also, the subtitles were in Spanish, which I’ve been studying, so it was educational.
Star Wars Player 1, I mulled over your idea about doing a story about how Opal and Evie’s sex life got started, and the more I thought about it, the more I liked the idea. So I’ve started outlining that story. It will be in first-person from Opal’s perspective, so it will have the same format as “Little Rose.”

Dang it…  I’m in the middle of something else, and the only thing I have enough of that I could write it quickly isn’t original.  I’ll be here for the holiday anthology, though.  Meaningful Gifts has waited long enough!

I’m not promising to have it done exactly on time, but I think I have something...

I’ve got a story in the works; hope to finish it in the next 10 days or so.

Hey, everyone. I was off on a wilderness trip for a few days, so I’ve been largely off the grid. But now I’m back and feeling gridly.  
Thanks for the recs, Lesles! I’ll look those up.
In other news, Fairy Slayer has done a fine job of betaing the latest chapter of “Red All Over,” and now it’s posted!
Chapter 2: Miriam

Hey, everyone. I was off on a wilderness trip for a few days, so I’ve been largely off the grid. But now I’m back and feeling gridly.  
Thanks for the recs, Lesles! I’ll look those up.
In other news, Fairy Slayer has done a fine job of betaing the latest chapter of “Red All Over,” and now it’s posted!
Chapter 2: Miriam

Well, depending on circumstances, you can have OTHER characters talking.  Maybe it’s the radio/TV in the background.  Maybe it’s others around the corner wondering why there’s underwear on the floor.  (Or in some of my works, the characters don’t mind giving a show.) Talking could be important or not, in the end, it’d help break up long descriptive paragraphs.

Wait, you’re telling me that a character shouldn’t be getting off while giving a book report?

Interesting thought. A “next generation” approach might be a good way to change things up. I’ll put that in the idea file.

Re: “Master Plan”
From Unknown on June 15, 2023
Thanks!

Hey, all. A bunch of updates:
–I've just posted the first chapter of an original story titled "Developed." This is a furry story set in a world where girls reach puberty at age 3 or 4 and become infertile by age 12. Because the window of fertility is so narrow, society gives men and boys the right to fuck "fertiles" whenever they want. The MC is Nash, a 15-year-old boy with an impregnation fetish. I'm planning four chapters. So if you like, check out Chapter 1: Break Time.
–I'm also about to send chapter 5 of "Master Plan" off to beta.
–I've got 2 other stories in the works that are getting close to being ready for prime time:
1. "Red All Over": This is a Turning Red fanfic. A couple of months after the events of the movie, Mei has an erotic dream about her friends Abby, Miriam, and Priya and awakens in her panda form—and with a penis. Mei decides to seduce each of her friends, and fun ensues. I'm planning 4 chapters.
2. "Cowboys and Indians": While exploring the attic, Tina and her younger brother Ricky find a collection of old (think 1950s) illustrated children's books about the Old West. The two become fascinated with a picture of a handsome cowboy who has a beautiful Indian maiden tied to a post, and the kids decide to recreate the scene themselves, with sexy consequences. The story will consist of two fairly long chapters set 4 years apart.
Jomahawk has volunteered to beta "Developed" and "Cowboys and Indians," and Fairy Slayer has stepped up to beta "Red All Over." (FS was also a big help in kicking around ideas for that story.) So y'all should be seeing these pretty soon.

I use profanity frequently in sex scenes, for two reasons:
--My sex scenes are more often about lust than love.
--I’m a great devotee of dirty talk in sex scenes.
On the second point, though, my friend and beta Jomahawk recently gave me some sage advice: If one or both of the characters are capable of speaking full, uninterrupted sentences during sex, it suggests that they aren’t having that good a time. So now I try to be mindful of that.

I use profanity frequently in sex scenes, for two reasons:
--My sex scenes are more often about lust than love.
--I’m a great devotee of dirty talk in sex scenes.
On the second point, though, my friend and beta Jomahawk recently gave me some sage advice: If one or both of the characters are capable of speaking full, uninterrupted sentences during sex, it suggests that they aren’t having that good a time. So now I try to be mindful of that.

I use profanity frequently in sex scenes, for two reasons:
--My sex scenes are more often about lust than love.
--I’m a great devotee of dirty talk in sex scenes.
On the second point, though, my friend and beta Jomahawk recently gave me some sage advice: If one or both of the characters are capable of speaking full, uninterrupted sentences during sex, it suggests that they aren’t having that good a time. So now I try to be mindful of that.

There is a tendency among a lot of writers to rely on profanity when they're writing a sex scene. To the writer who does this, all sex scenes have to have profanity. Someone has to be screaming “fuck me” or something for the sex scene to be readable (according to the people who rely on it).
Before you start writing your scene, here are some questions you should ask yourself:
1.) Who are the characters in your scene? Is it in their personality or their diction to use that type of profanity, even in extreme situations? If not, then your characters won't actually be in the scene you write. Instead, it’ll be charicatures of your characters.
2.) What was the build up to the scene you are writing? Was it two characters confessing their feelings in an intimate fashion, or was it just animal lust? The former sets into the story better with as little profanity as possible (preferably none). If it, for example, was an encounter in the backroom of a sex club, then feel free to go as heavy with profanity as you’d like because it sets into your story.
These are just my opinions. Take them for whatever little they're worth.
 

“Red All Over” is underway!
Red All Over
Meilin Lee has made peace with her red panda spirit and thinks she’s finished with all the crazy changes it will cause in her life. Nope!
Content Tags : 3Plus Anal Anthro Bi Ds FD FF Fingering Inc Minor1 Oral Preg TF
Chapter 1: Abby
 
Also, chapter 2 of “Developed” is now in beta. 

Here you go:  https://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/index.php?cat=2079