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Status Updates posted by InvidiaRed
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Revising 100%
Page Count :527
Word Count: 76147
Now I have to read through it.
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Tarnished Lion has 40,000 Views!
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Congratulations, always good to see that hit counter go up!
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The goodnews 90% done with the revamp. Tying the loose threads into a serviceable plot. Trying so hard everything will be ready soon!
The Badnews, Having to deal with the fact my 90 year old grandma is a hoarder.
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I can laugh at it now.
The bruises are gone but I don’t think I’m going to step into that house for a long time nomatter how much I love my grandparent.
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Oh, good, you survived. Did you need search & rescue to pull you out?
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Well between getting conked in the head by 1970’s ads in boxes , three outdated encyclopedias and essentially covered in every single issue of 1981’s readers digest surprisingly not.
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https://www.biospace.com/article/researchers-answer-how-and-why-infants-die-from-sids/
They found the cause of SIDs!
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What’s the title of the book that was dedicated? It sounds like it would be either the best read ever, or a major disappointment. With the parents the author claimed to have had...
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I have never been quite certain what exactly the Oxford comma is… but I’m going to assume that it has something to do with Merle Haggard’s two ex-wives, Kris Kristofferson and Robert Duvall… and the rest of those outlandish claims
And I’d also like to know the title of this book, just for reference
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The best I can narrow it down.
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Here’s a language funny.
If Tomb and Womb have the same sound
then shouldn’t bomb be pronounced Boom?
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Not to mention cough, rough, dough, and bough.
Also, I’m glad they called it a vowel shift and not a vowel movement.
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“Bomb” typically pronounces itself “boom,” so there is that.
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75% done. Haha!
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Dunno what you’re up to, but good work!?
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Fun fact and a bit of trivia
The first mention of orange as a color was in 1502 and was a description of clothing for Margaret Tudor
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and to add to that
the fruit was originally called a norange, but some scribe messed up and changed it to an orange, and it stuck…
same thing a nadder changed to an adder and a nickname used to be an ickname
::*whispers* tell me you watch too much QI without telling me you watch too much QI::
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60% done with the revamp. Had to rewrite and shove things into book 2 and three lol
So there’s that.
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Like rolling dough thinner and thinner, every time I “rewrite”, things inevitably get longer.
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Its true though. Absolutely is that age old question brought to life.
Why are things happening? Because people are flawed drama llamas living in a world where gods and monsters are active make no pretense of being human or having human values and the horrors of the dark age just barely passed.
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Characters w/o flaws? Tends to make for rather short & boring stories.
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Who do you think would win?
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Personally, My money is on who has the greater authority. average faerie vs vamp defintely money is on the faerie
An elder vamp vs faerie= probably the elder vamp
A primal vamp vs faerie noble probably closer to an uneasy armed truce rather than any feeling of Tea time.
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So, who supplied the tea? I’d wager whoever poisons it is more likely to come out on top.
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That’s the thing. Following the rules of hospitality means it’d be more of who spiked the wine of the vein =p
Assuming that doesn’t breach the rules of hospitality.
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Editorial Review came back.
So I was correct to put mature warning. They enjoyed it… For a middle novel.
So before I launch any website I have to go back and revamp it so it fits a first book feel
rather than a middle of the series vibe.
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Think of it like what happens if you wrote the two towers
Before the fellowship of the ring.
Or Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix before harry potter and the philosopher’s stone.
Or even the empire strikes back
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It sounds like they want a bit of world building or stage setting up front.
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Well, not super bad then, I mean, there’s a certain popular film franchise that started off with episode number four.