Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 9, 2018 Report Posted October 9, 2018 Naruto Namikaze was a Orphan who had lived alone in the City of Elementa. Sponsored by his world traveling God Father Jiraiya Naruto lives a easy life even if he was always strapped for cash for anything more than food or bills. It was his birthday when the answer for his cash problems came to him, after fucking Ino Yamanaka into a puddle of girl-cum after class and still not being fully satisfied. The answer was simple, become a Gigalo for many of the women and girls of the City who was popular for its host clubs. Starting with the girls and women of his school soon Naruto expands further to the other schools in the area and beyond, creating connections and quid pro quo with many powerful women. Turning from a school boy to a Gigalo to possibly the most powerful man in his city! --- Try and keep the physical discriptions as reasonable as possible so no 30 inch dicks and Triple M sized breast. It's about variety not absurd bodies. Naruto must have a large penis between 8-12 inches and have nearly superhuman Physical stamina usually taking 2 to 4 of the girls at the same time to actually tire like a normal boy after sex. Largest Breast must be double G Cups, at least one girl must have B cups. Again the story should have a variety of body types of the women not just enormous and impossible breast cocks and asses. Naruto doesn't stop at Female students but extends to teachers and faculty for his school. The Jonin would be his teachers so that includes Anko, Kurenai, Shizune, Tsunade ect. This also includes other female characters from outside the village who will be students and faculty at the other schools (Naruto goes to Konoha High and I think you can figure out where to go from there). So Mabui as a Vice Principal of Kumo Prep, Kurotsuchi as Student Council Prez of Iwa Charter ect ect. Other girls like Shion could be a local Shrine priestess, Princess Koyuki is the Chairwoman of Spring Industries ect ect on and on. Jiraiya pays for Naruto's necessities and that's it, it's how Naruto starts on this journey. Naruto uses the money from his girls pays for things like expressive clothing, video games, watches, eating out, going to movies. You get the idea. He can also get things like that as gifts from his more well off girls. Jiraiya doesn't know about Naruto's Hustle and believes he just got a part time job. If you come to the end it should end after a time skip, where Naruto who is now a teacher himself gets approached by one of his female students and asked if what she heard about him and her mother was true... And then Naruto proves it by fucking his student as well. Naruto can never be black mailed by the ladies or the police. The ladies love him, some literary and keep everything quite even though they know he is sleeping with dozens of them. A piece of Naruto is better than nothing. Other than that have fun Quote
BronxWench Posted October 9, 2018 Report Posted October 9, 2018 “Gigolo.” Just saying... JayDee 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 14 hours ago, BronxWench said: “Gigolo.” Just saying... 1 gigalo = 109 gigolos BronxWench and JayDee 2 Quote
BronxWench Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 38 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said: 1 gigalo = 109 gigolos Don’t encourage them. We’ll have clone jutsu everywhere, and who gets to clean up THAT mess? JayDee and GeorgeGlass 1 1 Quote
Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 I wrote that shit at 3am, so gimme a break Quote
JayDee Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 (edited) As the causer of many typos myself I am totally with you, Kid Coheed. It’s very easy to do and, hey, with any luck for you it’ll catch someone’e eye and get them to read the request and write out this pussy pounding extravaganza. Unfortunately I also see where the mirth making is coming from, as I can’t shake a mental image of Doc Brown muttering “1.21 Gigalos” in shock at his future self’s time travel requirements. Maybe in 1985 footlong cocks are available in any corner drug store, but in 1955 they're a little hard to come by. Edited October 10, 2018 by JayDee BronxWench 1 Quote
Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 Does he carry around a briefcase with Condoms from every time period so his customers aren't shocked when he whips out that Trojan that's ribbed for her pleasure back in 1955? Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 He’d have to. There’s no worse universe-destroying paradox than accidentally handing a futuristic condom to one of your ancestors and preventing your own existence. Physicists call it a “temporal dick move.” JayDee, BronxWench and WillowDarkling 1 2 Quote
TheDogSage Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 Wouldn’t that be a “temporal suicide”, not a “temporal dick move”. Now, if you handed a futuristic condom to one of someone else’s ancestors and prevented their existence, then that would be a “temporal dick move”. JayDee and BronxWench 2 Quote
Red_Light_Zone Posted October 10, 2018 Report Posted October 10, 2018 I’m actually in the process of writing something like this, but it’s an original story. Quote
Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 11, 2018 Report Posted October 11, 2018 Well please link us in when your done @Red_Light_Zone @TheDogSage Actually it would only be Temporal Suicide is if that next nut is the nut that makes you or your line. Quote
Red_Light_Zone Posted October 11, 2018 Report Posted October 11, 2018 18 minutes ago, Guest Kid Coheed said: Well please link us in when your done @Red_Light_Zone @TheDogSage Actually it would only be Temporal Suicide is if that next nut is the nut that makes you or your line. Would you like to know about it? Quote
Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 12, 2018 Report Posted October 12, 2018 Sure, you said it was a original, so is it going on Amazon or whatever or is it being posted on one of these sites? Quote
Red_Light_Zone Posted October 12, 2018 Report Posted October 12, 2018 16 minutes ago, Guest Kid Coheed said: Sure, you said it was a original, so is it going on Amazon or whatever or is it being posted on one of these sites? I’m posting here and on HentaiHaven The story basically follows the rules of this old doujin here: (https://hentai2read.com/world_of_reversed_gender_roles/1/) where a young man ends up in a world where the gender virtues and sexual behaviors are inversed. So a man who sleeps around would be labeled a slut, while a women would be a stud. Men are much more insecure and emotional while women act more dominant and abrasive. This even extends to their sexual stamina, as a healthy man can only go 2-3 times a day, while a woman can get ready as soon as they want. In this story, the man that’s sent into this parallel paradise is this large, buff, muscular, and (importantly) dark-skinned young man. Due to his swole body and foreign features, people assume that he’s a delinquent at best, and affiliated with the yakuza at worst. This is despite the fact that he’s a respectable citizen with clean record. Still, he has a decent life, living alone in an apartment with the barest essentials (more on that later) But all that all changes one day when he wakes up to find that the world is… strange. Billboards and ads featuring scantily clad, gorgeous men are everywhere in the city of Satu (The fake Japanese city this takes place in). Women let their tits hang out like it’s no big deal. Entertainment, especially of the explicit nature, are tailored more to females and most porn involve sexy men being taken advantage of by gangs of bitches. But it doesn’t stop there. Due to this new world, the young man finds himself going from someone who people actively avoided at all costs to this tall, dark, crust covered drink of water everyone wants to sip out of. It’s overwhelming how the shift in popularity occured, but he eventually figures things out and how this world works. At first, he uses this popularity solely for sex with sexy colleagues and strangers. Taking some liberties from your challenge, he starts receiving money and gifts from the women he slept with, unintentionally becoming a Gigolo. And a damn good one considering his size and stamina has only ever been seen in Doujins of unrealistic proportions in this new world. Now fully aware of the power and influence he has, he carefully uses it to pound his way to a better life, and gets more than he bargained for. I wasn’t sure if I should make him a student in high school/college, or an office worker in his early 20s. Let me know what you think. Also, for reference of what the protagonist should look like, here’s some pictures to get the general idea. https://i.nhentai.net/galleries/1259206/10.png https://i.nhentai.net/galleries/988865/2.jpg https://66.media.tumblr.com/47f530f7c7aa27fbb90f89ee7e3f1dd3/tumblr_oexix9GEKU1rntn47o1_1280.png Your thoughts? Quote
Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 13, 2018 Report Posted October 13, 2018 The idea is a more Ero Version of the popular yet seemingly abandoned Harry Potter Story 'Harry Potter and the Distaff Side' where Voldemort uses a spell on 14 yearold Harry to send him into a world where men are the fairer sex and to side side saddle on a horse is to ride like a Cowboy, much like that Doujin you linked. While there are real similarities between your idea and mine the biggest difference is the world setting. Mine is still set in the 'real world' somewhat, where men pursue women and women are the fairer sex and ect. In the challenge I'm purposing it isn't a world where women are the more dominant sex but rather taking place in a town with women and girls hard up for it for some reason, so Hard up they make high end Host clubs to date around or are willing to bang a Highschool Junior/Senior packing a missile launcher in his slacks. Think a combination of NYC where there is a 53/47 split between Men and Women with women coming out a head and modern day Japan where marriage and birth rates are dropping like stones due to men 'grazing' or just not pursuing relationships at all. A city where there is slightly more women and 15% of all avaliable boys just aren't interested in what these girls and women have to offer. And the Naruto comes in selling Porn sex and a Footlong dick for ¥8500 or $75 a pop Quote
Guest Kid Coheed Posted October 13, 2018 Report Posted October 13, 2018 Oh as for your questions about the story you're writing. 1 if you're going to draw it, don't make him too dark skinned, we don't really want to encourage the Mandingo's made for Fucking and stealing your woman. While it's nice to see a darker skinned MC in something like this, that stereotype isn't fun In Doujins or Fiction. 2 make him in his early 20s perhaps either finishing up his final year of Collage or working. Perhaps combine the two where he has many of his credits he focuses on his unpaid internship as it's his last needed thing for graduation. 3 make sure you take time from the fucking to explore the world to show more of it off than just the first chapter and what little plot links the Lemons together. Especially since your altering the world if we don't see that altered world why make it that way. 4 if the story expands further than the fucking, give your character some well character, give him likes and interest and shit. Make him fun Quote
Red_Light_Zone Posted October 13, 2018 Report Posted October 13, 2018 15 minutes ago, Guest Kid Coheed said: The idea is a more Ero Version of the popular yet seemingly abandoned Harry Potter Story 'Harry Potter and the Distaff Side' where Voldemort uses a spell on 14 yearold Harry to send him into a world where men are the fairer sex and to side side saddle on a horse is to ride like a Cowboy, much like that Doujin you linked. While there are real similarities between your idea and mine the biggest difference is the world setting. Mine is still set in the 'real world' somewhat, where men pursue women and women are the fairer sex and ect. In the challenge I'm purposing it isn't a world where women are the more dominant sex but rather taking place in a town with women and girls hard up for it for some reason, so Hard up they make high end Host clubs to date around or are willing to bang a Highschool Junior/Senior packing a missile launcher in his slacks. Think a combination of NYC where there is a 53/47 split between Men and Women with women coming out a head and modern day Japan where marriage and birth rates are dropping like stones due to men 'grazing' or just not pursuing relationships at all. A city where there is slightly more women and 15% of all avaliable boys just aren't interested in what these girls and women have to offer. And the Naruto comes in selling Porn sex and a Footlong dick for ¥8500 or $75 a pop Okay, first of all, while you are right in some aspects, there is one thing that needs to be clear. This isn't a genderswap where everything is the same except it's rule 63 all over. No, society has changed because virtues and behaviors of the same people are completely different. For example if Harry Potter suddenly woke up and took the place of his alternate self, that scene in the GoF where the other schools are introduced to Hogwarts would play out very different. Ron (still a boy) would be very blushing and bashful around the French girls, likely too stunned to make a comment. While Hermonie (still a girl) would look at those hunky Hungarian hottie like nobodies business along with the rest of the girls. Rom would act more innocent to the idea of sex because he likely doesn't understand it (because he's still not that smart) and Hermonie would fully understand the concept of sex and likely wouldn't mind a good finger or two thinking about taking some certain foreigners to bed for a quickie. Does this make sense? Second, I get your challenge. Off the bat, it seems like a modern day setting with women more willing. And I like that! A guy using his charms as a service isn't something one typically sees in smut fiction now a days. I just wanted to use the idea of him becoming a gigolo because I already played around with him being a prostitute/slut in the new world. (Also because I didn't know there was a word for it till now, thanks for that.) Third, thanks for the input, I really appreciate it! You don't need to worry about any actual race play, the character is only supposed to be somewhere between tanned to "ambiguously brown" where he has dark skin but isn't strictly African American. For reference, think of Chad from Bleach, Katara/Korra from Avatar, and Brock from Pokemon. I'm still trying to make a solid personality for Daisuke Watanabe (his name may be changed). So far, he's a tough, silent, no nonsense type of guy who's internally an awkward nerd that tries to get by life without too much issue. When he gets teleported to Opposite Land, he isn't used to all of the attention and popularity he's getting all of a sudden. So? He tries to figure out the process and navigate through life living in this world. Soon, he figures out just how powerful he really is after realizing that he's been unintentionally becoming a gigolo for some of the richest members of this society? And becomes a much more carefree social butterfly while also gaining some sultry sugar mommas and side pussy to boot. Quote
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