George Glass' Transparency Thread

[Desiderius Price]

16 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

“Apprentice,” my story for the 2018 AFF Halloween Party, is now posted. You can find it and the other entries here. 

The List of Twenty is now down to 16, possibly for the first time in years. I’m trying to focus more on finishing my in-progress stuff before beginning any new stuff, even though I have a long list of stories waiting to be started. 

You even have a review on it.

[GeorgeGlass]

Well, I’ve been making progress on a lot of things, but not enough progress on any one thing to actually finish it. Most recently, there’s been action on the next chapters of “The More, the Merrier” and “Little Rose.” Chapter 3 of TMTM is up to 8000 words and it’s STILL not finished.

Also, a new story has joined The List. With the working title of “Twist My Arm,” it’s a Loud House story in which Bobby and Ronnie Anne return to Royal Woods for 4 weeks during the summer and go on a series of double dates with Lori and Lincoln at a retro drive-in theater. Lori wants to get seriously physical with Bobby but knows that Bobby won’t approve if the kids are in the car – unless, Lori reasons (okay, “reasons” in air quotes), Lincoln and Ronnie Anne are doing the same thing in the back seat. So she starts pressuring Lincoln to go farther with Ronnie Anne on every date. Of course, I really need to get some of my in-progress stories done before I start posting new stuff, so it might be a while before this sees daylight.

SWP1, my favorite horror movie is the original Scream. I like it because it turns a lot of tropes from the horror genre on their heads and because it’s a mystery as well as horror. In the days leading up to Halloween, though, the wife and I watched the new The Haunting of Hill House series on Netflix, which was very good. 

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, glad to hear what your favorite horror film is, mine is personally ‘Psycho’, which is also Alfred Hitchcock’s best film in my opinion, anyway glad to hear from you again, and I am really excited about this new loud house story, it sounds very interesting, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

Haven’t had much to report recently, but today I posted a new one-shot story titled, “The Happiest Place.” It’s a shameless parody of the Walt Disney company, set in an alternate world with very different rules about what is considered appropriate content for children.

Getting pretty close to finished with a couple of chapters, but I’m not entirely sure what will be ready next.

Oh, and for some Lori/Lana fun, I recommend “Sweet Dreams, Lana Loud” by @Evil Fairy. It’s all about sibling affection taking an erotic turn, which is I thing I’m fond of, and Evil Fairy writes well.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi, it’s me , I just wanted to say hi and I am glad to hear from you, at least it’s the only thing good about this weekend, anyway, hope you’re doing well and I will be checking out these two new stories of yours. Oh and one question, I know that you said that there hasn’t been much progress on any stories so far, but how are you doing with ‘The More, the Merrier’ ? Let me know when you have the time, and hope to hear from you again soon, good luck with your stories, and have a Happy Thanksgiving week  

[GeorgeGlass]

A friend of mine has lost both his father and his grandfather in a tragic accident. In the hope of providing him a distraction, I put the pedal to the metal and finished chapter 4 of “Little Rose” this afternoon.

SWP1, chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is probably the next thing I’ll finish. However, my laptop is on the fritz (needs a new battery that I have to have shipped to me and then installed by a technician), so I may not be able to post it until next week.

Also, I will probably continue my trend of not contributing to this year’s holiday story jam. All the Christmas-story ideas I have are weepy things involving dying children, and I’m not doin’ that.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and that I am terribly sorry about you’re friend’s loss, I hope that he gets well soon. I will be checking out the next chapter of ‘Little Rose’ soon, and I hope you do well with your friend. Anyway, hope you’re doing well and I will pray to god that your friend’s relatives are resting peacefully in heaven and that they are doing well in heaven. Hope you’re well and Happy Thanksgiving

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and that I hope that you had a very nice thanksgiving along with your friend. I had a wonderful thanksgiving and now I’m starting to get into the Christmas season, oh and I have a few questions if you don’t mind, 1. How is your friend doing ? I do hope that he isn’t feeling too bad 2. How are you doing with the next chapter of ‘The More,the Merrier’ and your other stories? 3. Are you excited for some of these upcoming movie releases like ‘Bumblebee, ‘Aquaman’ and ‘Mary Poppins returns’, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and I hope you’re friend is doing well, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a nice day.

[GeorgeGlass]

Hello, all. I haven’t been posting much lately because my laptop has been on the fritz; the power supply isn’t working right, which is slowing the whole thing down. (Makes me extra-glad I wasn't trying to do NaNoWriMo this year.) Hopefully, the new adapter I ordered will fix the problem.

News: Chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is now in beta. (I had to finish it on my phone.) It is huge – 8000+ words – so the beta could take a while. 

BTW, my friend who lost his father and grandfather is the beta on that story. He asked for a distraction, so I hurried up and finished the chapter to provide him one. 

SWP1: Of the movies you mentioned, the one I’m most interested in is Aquaman. Although if it gets terrible reviews, I'll probably just wait and watch it the next time my cable provider has a free-premium-channels weekend (which is how I watched Batman vs. Superman and Justice League). I’m iffier about Bumblebee because the recent Transformers movies haven’t been great, but focusing on one character might make for a better movie, so I’m keeping an open mind. 

Last night, I watched Murder on the Orient Express (the new one with Kenneth Branagh), and now I wish I had seen it on the big screen. Lots of magnificent vistas. The story is good, too (I guess you can't go too far wrong with Agatha Christie), and the movie is chock-full of good actors.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying, I am glad to hear that you’re friend is working on the beta for the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’, not by distracting him from his loss, but rather something to make him cheerful, to me that is a great thing you’ve done for him. Anyway, I wish you good luck on getting your computer fixed soon and thank you for replying to my question about the upcoming movie releases of this year, and I have one thing to say about ‘Bumblebee’, I agree that the recent transformers movies have definitely not been great and I agree that focusing on one character does seem like a better idea, but to me it is not just that, there is also the way the story is told and the tone of the movie , which looks to be what the original 80s era of ambling films was like which is what fans have truly wanted from the beginning, unlike the past films which are more action, over complicatited plots sometimes, and they sometimes focus on the humans too much, but anyway, I myself have an open mind as well and to me I think this film is the transformers movie that not only we have wanted but the one we have needed. Anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories and hope you’re friend is doing well, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how are you doing, oh and I also wanted to ask a few questions if you don’t mind 1. I know that you haven’t been posting much because your computer is damaged, but I will still ask questions about some of your stories whether they are complete or not, so how are you doing with the next chapter of ‘Little Rose’ ? I am pretty excited about what new things rose’s dad has planned for her 2. How is it with getting ready for Christmas ? 3. Now You know that a while ago I left a suggestion about writing an extended version of ‘Dil-drones’ and that you said that you were too busy with your other stories, and I understood that, but I think you misheard me about the suggestion, I didn’t exactly request that you write an extended version of ‘Dil-Drones’, I suggested that you should write an extended version of when Oscar Diez and Adele Diez’s drones arrived and how they first reacted to it and when they were having fun with them. Now I’m not saying that you should do it , because the decision to do this is yours but I thought since you don’t have much to do with your computer on the fritz, I suggest you do something like this to pass the time and have fun with it. If you do want to do it, It doesn’t have to be a full chapter or anything, but merely a more extended version of when Oscar and Adele first encountered their drones and the fun they had with them and just that, you don’t even have to post it on adult fan fiction, you could just leave the extended version of the scene here on a comment if you would like, or better yet, you could post it on a comment for the ‘original fiction review page’. But the decision is yours to make if you want to do this to pass the time since you can use your phone. I’m not pressuring you to do this , I’m only clearing things up a bit and only suggesting it, anyway hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.:) 

 

 

[GeorgeGlass]

I am pleased to say that my laptop is working properly again, not least because of the substantial efforts of a nice fellow at the Knowledge Bar at Micro Center. 

Also, a surprise announcement: Earlier, I wrote that once again, I would not be writing a Christmas story this year because I had no good ideas for one. Then, a few days ago, such an idea struck. So if I can finish it in time, and if they do some kind of holiday story jam here on AFF, I’ll post “A Visit From Shota Claus” there (although as the title implies, it will have Minor1 content, so a fair number of folk won’t read it). Otherwise, I’ll post it on its own in the Originals section. 

SWP1: Some answers to your questions:

1. The next chapter of “Little Rose” is about two-thirds written, but right now I’m trying to spend the majority of my writing time on “A Visit From Shota Claus” in the hope of getting it done in the next week or so. Once I’m done with that, “Little Rose” will be back on my priority list, along with my various other in-progress multi-chapter stories.
2. Christmas prep is going well. We don’t have a full-size tree this one, but we have a cute little fake one that looks very festive and that we put in the front window so people can see the lights at night. How is yours?
3. I appreciate your enthusiasm for this idea, but I just have too many other ideas that I’m excited about to pursue that one at this point. And my excitement is renewed now that I don’t have to do everything on my phone.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and thank you for replying to my questions and I understand that you are busy with other ideas right now. Christmas preparations are doing well right now and hope you’re doing well decorating your tree. I am excited about this new Christmas story you have planned and I can’t wait to see how it is. Anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your Christmas story and the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’ oh and one more thing, yesterday was the day that the ‘Bumblebee movie’ had advanced screening to’s and the reactions are very positive, many people say that it is the best transformers film and truly the one many people have been longing for, so I thought I let you know to maybe encourage your expectations for the film, anyway bye and have a good night.

 

 

[JayDee]

Oh, hey, good news on your laptop!

[GeorgeGlass]

“A Visit From Shota Claus” seems to be coming along nicely; I expect to have it ready by the weekend. 

When I took a break from that, I unexpectedly finished chapter 7 of “Make It All Better,” a story that has been in progress for three and a half years now. I have to be in a particular frame of mind to work on it because the characters are so complex, and a lot goes on under the surface. Yet, at the same time, the story is relentlessly pornographic. Trying to be deep and shallow at the same time is tricky, but I love making the attempt. 

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how are you doing. I just realized that time flies by faster than I can keep track, I just realized that Christmas is almost here starting during next week and that ’Aquaman’ and ‘Bumblebee’ come out later on this week. So anyway, I have a few questions if you don’t mind, 1. How are you doing with ‘The More, the Merrier’ ? I can’t wait to see what Dr. Hirano has planned for teaching Pedro about girls:) 2. How are you doing with your expectations for ‘Bumblebee’ ,because people are going nuts over it, they’re calling it the best Transformers movie ever:) and finally 3. How is your friend doing? I hope he’s not too sad about his loss. Anyway, hope you’re doing well, can’t wait for the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’, good luck with your other stories as well, and hope to hear from you again, bye and have a good night.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I have just read chapter 3 of ‘The More, the Merrier’ and I absolutely loved it, I thought it was a very creative chapter, especially when it shifted to midas’s Perspective which I thought was great and I do hope to see more of that in the next chapter. In the next comment I post, I will leave a more bigger review of the chapter, anyway, hope you’re doing well, can’t wait for the next chapter, good luck with your other stories too, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me again, I just wanted to say hi and merry Christmas! I hope you’re doing well with your Christmas, anyway, I also wanted to leave my full review of the new chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’, first off, like I said in my last comment, I really loved that Midas had a perspective in this chapter, and I like how you described his dream as if he was a person, I do hope to see more of that in the next chapter. 2. I really enjoyed how Roger found his interest in teenage girls starting with Stacy, and I wonder who he will partner up with next. 3. I really loved the part where Vanessa was partnered up with sally, and when sally said thank you to Vanessa for helping her, I thought that was really sweet. 4. This was probably one of the most hottest parts of the chapter for me, when Dr. hirano paired up with adyson , I like that she now likes to dominate women now, and I can’t wait to see who she pairs up with next, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, hope to hear from you again soon, and have a merry Christmas!:)

[GeorgeGlass]

Hey, all. Sorry for the prolonged silence; I’ve been traveling for the holidays and had limited internet access. What’s more, Microsoft went and changed Hotmail so that I can’t access it from my phone anymore; thus, I can only check my Hotmail on my laptop, which I means that I won’t always be getting alerts about new reviews in a timely fashion anymore. 

Anyway, on to news. As SWP1 observed, chapter 3 of “The More, the Merrier” is posted, and at ~8000 words, it’s packed with orgiastic goodness.  Probably the next thing I’ll finish will be chapter 8 of “Country Summer.” I’m also going to try to finish one of my one-shot stories to make room on the List of 20 for – and I’ll preface this with “God help me” – a She-Ra and the Princesses of Power story. 

SWP1, with regard to your comments about the TMTM chapter:

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I also wanted to leave my full review of the new chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’, first off, like I said in my last comment, I really loved that Midas had a perspective in this chapter, and I like how you described his dream as if he was a person, I do hope to see more of that in the next chapter.

 

 I don’t know about the next chapter, but we’ll probably see it at least once more before the story ends.

In the initial draft of the chapter, I kept having Midas think of Gretchen as a “bitch” in the sense of a female dog. But Jomahawk, who is betaing this story, thought the repeated use of “bitch” came across as too crass. I thought he had a point, so I changed “bitch” to “female” in Midas’ thoughts. Adyson still used “bitch” in her dialogue, of course.

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2. I really enjoyed how Roger found his interest in teenage girls starting with Stacy, and I wonder who he will partner up with next. 

 

There are only a couple of other choices besides Stacy, so odds are good that you can guess. 

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3. I really loved the part where Vanessa was partnered up with sally, and when sally said thank you to Vanessa for helping her, I thought that was really sweet.

Sally is an innocent (up until now, at least), so I wanted to capture that in the story.

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4. This was probably one of the most hottest parts of the chapter for me, when Dr. hirano paired up with adyson , I like that she now likes to dominate women now, and I can’t wait to see who she pairs up with next,

Believe it or not, that scene was purely the result of Adyson and Dr. Hirano being the only characters left after I decided what to do with everyone else. I was forced to get creative and figure out why those two would pair up, and I had to go through a few drafts of the scene before I was happy with it (because I was refining the nature of their interaction with each draft), but I had fun doing it. 

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anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, hope to hear from you again soon, and have a merry Christmas!:)

Hope you had a great Christmas, and Happy New Year!

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how are you doing ? Another reason I wanted to say hi was that I know it is a new year, and I nearly forgot to write this in this comment, first off I just wanted to say how I am surprised about how time flies by so fast, it seemed only like yesterday I posted my first comment on the review page for ‘Hot Yoga’ for you  2. I am also shocked about all this progress as well, just think just about a year and a half ago, we were just discussing the possibility of a sequel to ‘Hot Yoga’ and now you’ve already made about three chapters of the sequel. And 3. I just wanted to say thank you, because when I started to read some stories on adult fan fiction, I always found myself interested in phineas and fern lemon stories, and when I found one of these stories on adultfanfiction, I had a feeling I had found a lot of really good ones, and I remember that the first story I read on there was one of yours. I remember reading ‘Truth or Dare’ for the first time and I was hooked on it and I loved all the pairings, and so that is how I begun to read some of your stories, funny thing is It wasn’t until I decided to wonder who wrote ‘Hot Yoga’ , and when I was starting to write comments on your review page for ‘ Hot Yoga’, that I discovered that you were the one that wrote those amazing stories, and to me I was surprised to learn that. It seems like I already was reading your stories even before I read ‘ Hot Yoga’  Another thing I wanted to say thank you for me is that because of your stories, and specifically, the characters, I found interest in them like for example Django brown and Holly, I loved their pairing in ‘Truth or Dare’ and that made them some of my favorite phineas and ferb characters, and that was just the beginning, because then I read Hot Yoga, and when I finished it, I was so interested in the desires and personalities of all these characters, and to me I was fascinated with the story and it really is shocking to think that a simple fan fiction story would make all these characters some of my favorite PnF characters ever. I just love all of the characters to the beautiful and hot Dr Hirano with her ‘Mother’s fetish duty’ thing to the small, sweet, and eager young Baltazhar Horowitz  Now this is something that I have been debating with myself on, I love your PnF stories I have read so far and to me, the ‘Hot Yoga’ storyline is the best one of all of them. I love it so much that sometimes, I actually like to consider them canon in the tv show, like whenever I watch the PnF ‘Christmas in July’ special episode, I like to believe that the events of ‘The More, the Merrier’ are actually taking place while they do the Christmas special:), anyway, I hope you’re doing well, can’t wait for the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’, oh and one question, in the next chapter, do you plan to have Coltrane kiss Ginger and Dr. Hirano during the chapter?, because there has been a lot of kissing in the first three chapters, and I would like to see that in the next chapter, let me know when you have the time, anyway, good luck with your stories, hope to hear from you again soon, and hope you’re having a great new year so far, bye and have a good night.

[GeorgeGlass]

Howdy, all. Sorry for my lengthy absence. Been a bit busy with various things – including a couple of chapters! Specifically, there are new chapters for Little Rose and Country Summer. 

Regarding SWP1’s comments:

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first off I just wanted to say how I am surprised about how time flies by so fast, it seemed only like yesterday I posted my first comment on the review page for ‘Hot Yoga’ for you 2. I am also shocked about all this progress as well, just think just about a year and a half ago, we were just discussing the possibility of a sequel to ‘Hot Yoga’ and now you’ve already made about three chapters of the sequel. 

 

I really appreciate that you consider 3 chapters in a year and a half to be good progress. I’m not being ironic; I think it’s decent progress, too, but a lot of other folks might not.

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And 3. I just wanted to say thank you, because when I started to read some stories on adult fan fiction, I always found myself interested in phineas and fern lemon stories, and when I found one of these stories on adultfanfiction, I had a feeling I had found a lot of really good ones, and I remember that the first story I read on there was one of yours. I remember reading ‘Truth or Dare’ for the first time and I was hooked on it and I loved all the pairings, and so that is how I begun to read some of your stories, funny thing is It wasn’t until I decided to wonder who wrote ‘Hot Yoga’ , and when I was starting to write comments on your review page for ‘ Hot Yoga’, that I discovered that you were the one that wrote those amazing stories, and to me I was surprised to learn that. It seems like I already was reading your stories even before I read ‘ Hot Yoga’

“Truth or Dare 2.0” wasn’t exactly a fan favorite, but I really loved writing it, so I appreciate your mentioning it.

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Another thing I wanted to say thank you for me is that because of your stories, and specifically, the characters, I found interest in them like for example Django brown and Holly, I loved their pairing in ‘Truth or Dare’ and that made them some of my favorite phineas and ferb characters, and that was just the beginning, because then I read Hot Yoga, and when I finished it, I was so interested in the desires and personalities of all these characters, and to me I was fascinated with the story and it really is shocking to think that a simple fan fiction story would make all these characters some of my favorite PnF characters ever.

One thing Truth or Dare 2.0 and Hot Yoga have in common is that they pull in a lot of 2nd-tier characters from the PnF world. I sometimes like doing that, because a character that hasn’t had a lot of screen time leaves a lot of 

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I just love all of the characters to the beautiful and hot Dr Hirano with her ‘Mother’s fetish duty’ thing to the small, sweet, and eager young Baltazhar Horowitz Now this is something that I have been debating with myself on, I love your PnF stories I have read so far and to me, the ‘Hot Yoga’ storyline is the best one of all of them. I love it so much that sometimes, I actually like to consider them canon in the tv show, like whenever I watch the PnF ‘Christmas in July’ special episode, I like to believe that the events of ‘The More, the Merrier’ are actually taking place while they do the Christmas special:),

I do make an effort to make my stories consistent with canon. And now that the show is over, the events of “Hot Yoga” and “The More, the Merrier” could have happened sometime after the finale.

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anyway, I hope you’re doing well, can’t wait for the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’, oh and one question, in the next chapter, do you plan to have Coltrane kiss Ginger and Dr. Hirano during the chapter?, because there has been a lot of kissing in the first three chapters, and I would like to see that in the next chapter, 

Yes, definitely.

Thanks for the comments. Hope your 2019 is off to a great start!

[Guest Fanbay]

Oh man I am loving your writing, my favorite thing, aside from the hot as hell content is the lack of spelling errors, I love the quality of your work and am eagerly looking forward to all your future works!

[GeorgeGlass]

8 hours ago, Guest Fanbay said:

Oh man I am loving your writing, my favorite thing, aside from the hot as hell content is the lack of spelling errors, I love the quality of your work and am eagerly looking forward to all your future works!

Thanks, Fanbay! I’m an editor in RL, so I’m pretty meticulous about spelling and grammar. And I have good betas. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Got a new original short story posted this week: “First Time,” a furry, oppai loli story in which a feline-like alien explains his species’ facts of life by describing the sexual initiation of his 2-year-old daughter.

[Guest Star Wars player 1]

Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve recently read the next chapters of ‘Little Rose’ and ‘Country Summer’ and I really enjoyed both of them, especially ‘Little Rose’, oh and I have a few questions if you don’t mind, 1. Do you have any plans to make a Valentine’s Day themed story? 2. I forgot to mention that I also read your new story ‘First Time’ and I thought it was really good. 3. One thing that I’ve noticed in ‘The More, the Merrier’ is that each chapter gets more longer as the story goes on and I really love this idea of yours, so will the next chapter be even longer, cause that is a really great way to build up the story, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night.