George Glass' fanfic review response thread

[GeorgeGlass]

6 hours ago, king said:

This was a beyond epic story,I'm going to headcanon that Loona got pregnant with a half hell hound half Goat-cherub.

That would be kind of hilarious.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Lincoln’s Lesson”

From Nick on March 18, 2022

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this is why i have you recommended.

you can write a story that has zero sex and do it well...

Thank you!

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i hope my stories can be like yours eventually.

It just takes practice, and caring about getting two things right: the characters and the language (ie, grammar and punctuation).

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the two non sexual stories i've written have less views than my sexual ones.

That’s pretty much how it is for everybody.

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i know it's weird to say but i respect the hell out of ya.

Thank you again!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Big Lincoln, Little Lincoln”

From ConanEdogawa on April 30, 2022

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What a awesome story wish there would be more 

Thanks! And who knows? I may be tempted to visit Earth 17.2 again some time.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Big Lincoln, Little Lincoln”

From ANON - Ron jenkins on May 03, 2022

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This was a wild and heart warmingly cute. 

Thanks! Feedback from both the contest winner and Jomahawk, who betaed this story, helped me with the “heartwarming” part.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Clydeborg”

From DixieFreelove on May 15, 2022

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I like it! She should mass produce those chips for world distribution! LOL

Well, the distribution of chips is going to expand in part 2, so we’ll see what the marketing focus groups think.

[GeorgeGlass]

Holy cow, Nytefyre, did you actually read and review 4 of my stories in ONE DAY? You are voracious!

Now, on to the responses.

 

Re: Big Lincoln, Little Lincoln

From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023

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Great story. 

Thanks for writing and sharing.

 

You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed it.

Also--and this is the first time I've mentioned it to anyone--I'm planning another Loud House story set on Earth 17.2. Working title: "Casino Night."

Re: Clydeborg: The Six Million Dollar Ladies’ Man

From Nytefyre on February 08, 2023

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I wonder if there will be any other after-effects from Lisa's little experiment?  I'm surprised at her perceptiveness and willingness to not share the data.

There's nothing like causing a family-wide disaster to give you some perspective.

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This was a hot scenario and I would love to see Lincoln "accidentally" swallow a chip next.  I also wonder whether the chips are still in the original receipients and whether they could get reactivated "accidentally" or might respond to a new chipped person as an unintended consequence?

I think this was mostly a one shot though...

 

It was indeed. No plans for a sequel at this point.

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Thanks for writing and sharing!

You're most welcome, and thanks for the review!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Heaven Help You”

@Yahegai

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I love the way you wrote Moxxie and Millie in this fic.

Moxxie, Millie, and Blitzo are so well characterized and have such clear and distinct “voices” in Helluva Boss that I find all of them pretty easy to write. Loona is actually the hardest of the four to write because she gets the least screen time yet has the most complex personality.

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Eloise and Sylvia mouth fucking each other at the end made this hot Loona x Collin centric fic even hotter

I figured I couldn’t let the women who write Sherlock/Moriarty and Thor/Loki fanfics have the “enemies become lovers” trope all to themselves.

Thanks for the review!

[GeorgeGlass]

@Yahegai

Re: "Record"

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Very enticing story

Thanks!

Re: "What Happens on Mystacor"

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The story is fantastic

Thanks! 

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“It’s ‘What happens on Mystacor rarey stays a secret.’”

What an amazing play on words

Thank you! “What happens in ______ stays in ______” is such an overused trope that I thought it would be funny to do the exact opposite.

 

Re: "The Princess Hire-ees"

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What a very gnarly erotic story

Thank you! How totally tubular of you.

Re: "Rashōmonster"

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The story feels trippy but in a sexily great way

The original Rashōmon (and "In a Grove," the 1922 short story by Ryūnosuke Akutagawa that Rashōmon is based on) helped popularize the idea of the unreliable narrator. I tried to capture that in the story--hence the trippiness. Glad you enjoyed it!

Re: "Clydeborg: The Six Million Dollar Ladies’ Man"

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Thanks to Lisa the genius, Clyde finally got game, lots of game

Having written a lot of Lincoln-centric stories that more or less sidelined Clyde to keep him from messing up the sexy action, I wanted to do the opposite for once.

 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Red All Over”

From ninesenshi on November 11, 2023

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Just finished chap3, very sexy, fun story with some nice dominance.  Hope to read more of this.

First of all, thanks for giving this story it’s first review on AFF! And I’m glad you’re liking it.

There’s one chapter still to come, and there will be plenty of dominance, so stay tuned.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Red All Over”

From ninesenshi on December 10, 2023

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Enjoyed chap 4, hope to read more or other stories like it.  Frozen?  Last Unicorn?

“Red All Over” is finished, but I certainly have written, am writing, and will write more stories in that vein. If you can tell me more specifically what you mean by “stories like it,” I can probably give you a list.

I did write a “Frozen” story (“In the Light of Day: A Frozen Epic”), but it’s not a futa harem story like this one. It’s basically a novel-length Frozen sequel aimed at adults.

The Last Unicorn? You are dating yourself, my friend. Of course, the fact that I even know what you’re talking about dates me, too.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Rashomonster”

From Nytefyre on December 29, 2023

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Enjoyable - would love to see the repercussions that devolve out of it. 

Would Wasabi and Gogo see each other in a new light?  

Would Hiro's monster seed take root in Karmi?  

Hmmm....?

I don’t have any plans for a sequel, but if I ever consider writing one, I’ll keep these questions in mind.

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Thanks for writing and sharing!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Record”

From Nytefyre on December 29, 2023

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Interesting protein diet that Lynn has latched onto.  

Well, you know how these fitness fads are.

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Thanks for writing and sharing.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Biological Imperative”

From Nytefyre on December 29, 2023

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Thanks for writing and sharing.

You’re welcome! Hope you enjoyed.

[neo4812]

Just read casino night and loved it! Also on a unrelated topic are you having trouble signing into CAFF? I've reset and made a new account but I still can't log in

[BronxWench]

1 hour ago, neo4812 said:

Also on a unrelated topic are you having trouble signing into CAFF? I've reset and made a new account but I still can't log in

@neo4812, I’ve emailed you the links needed to reactivate your original account.

[GeorgeGlass]

13 hours ago, neo4812 said:

Just read casino night and loved it! Also on a unrelated topic are you having trouble signing into CAFF? I've reset and made a new account but I still can't log in

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying Casino Night, and that BronxWench could help you with your account problem. 

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Casino Night"

From TheAllSeeingEye on February 26, 2024

>Oh boy I can't wait to see who is whispering in Lincolns ear

Who is whispering will probably not be that interesting. What they're whispering about, on the other hand...