Ichasennin Posted July 14, 2016 Author Report Posted July 14, 2016 Have you decided which servant classes to use to fill your quota yet? Also, On a scale of one to ten, how likely do you think it is that Morgana will debut in the upcoming Camelot story event? Nope and don't know but I hope so. That way I'll have a canon archetype to work with. Quote
warellis Posted July 14, 2016 Report Posted July 14, 2016 So is that list that you originally made still valid? Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 14, 2016 Report Posted July 14, 2016 He said so before, maybe its just muscle memory. Quote
VotedforKodos Posted July 14, 2016 Report Posted July 14, 2016 That's what I would think. Referring to any FSN Servant by their class by habit is totally reasonable, since they were the first. It took a while before I stopped, and I still refer to Arturia as Saber and EMIYA as Archer usually. And Ichasennin, if you haven't figured out which classes to use, have you at least got an idea of how many you want to have? Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 14, 2016 Report Posted July 14, 2016 If not classes, do you have any Servants in particular that you wish to add? Quote
Guest SwordCommandos Posted July 14, 2016 Report Posted July 14, 2016 Damn. Now I want to see a Shinji and Shirou team up, a local playboy and power level shota playboy. Since they're still young, Shirou might be able to influence Shinji enough he's less of an a hole in than his canon self. Wingman Shinji. Quote
Ichasennin Posted July 14, 2016 Author Report Posted July 14, 2016 He said so before, maybe its just muscle memory. Indeed. That's what happen when Classes are used for characters' names. Herk is indeed Archer Class, and Modred is Berserker If not classes, do you have any Servants in particular that you wish to add? Currently, I'm not focusing on that all that much. Keep tossing ideas back and forth, though. The overall number of servants should be 15 + Fem!GIlgamesh Since they're still young, Shirou might be able to influence Shinji enough he's less of an a hole in than his canon self. Wingman Shinji. Problem is that Shinji is already 16 and already abusing Sakura. Sorry, I'd like to read a Bro!Shinji story as well, but it ain't gonna be this one. Quote
Ichasennin Posted July 14, 2016 Author Report Posted July 14, 2016 My mistake The Servants are going to be 15 + 2 (Fem! Gil + Avenger!Dark Irisviel) Quote
warellis Posted July 14, 2016 Report Posted July 14, 2016 Ichasennin, have you thought of using some of the Servants who're monster girl types, like Kiyohime or Shuten Douji or Tamamo for example, as possible monster girls Shirou may run into prior to the Grail War? Like as part of Quest encounters or whatever? Quote
Ichasennin Posted July 14, 2016 Author Report Posted July 14, 2016 The idea has merit, but I'd have to consider the long term repercussions on the plot. By the way, I'm off to bed.I won't be reading or answering for ar least 8 hours. Bye. Quote
VotedforKodos Posted July 15, 2016 Report Posted July 15, 2016 Saber: Arthuria Pendragon - Master: Emiya Shirou Caster: Morgan le Fay - Master: Kaynet El-Melloi Berserker: Mordred - Master: Tohasaka Rin Archer: Herakles - Master: Ilyasviel Von Einzbern Lancer: Chu Culainn - Master: Bazett Fraga McRemitz/Kotomine Kirei Assassin: ???? - Master: Sola-Ui Nuada-Re Sophia-Ri/Matou Zouken Rider: Medusa - Master: Matou Sakura/Matou Shinji Temptress: Kiara Sesshoin - Master: ???? So with these, there's 8 set, and 7 more to fill. I'm still advocating Ruler Jeanne, and have an attachment to the Destroyer Altera/Manaka Servant/Master pair I suggested a while ago. Other than that, I kind of want Stheno and/or Euryale, Martha, Kiyohime, Tamamo, Medea Lily, Okita, Scathach, Jack, Medb, Helena Blavatsky, Sita, Shuten Douji, and ibaraki Douji. Plus Astolfo, if Ichasennin is willing. That's just the broader list. Medb could at work as something like Summoner. Jack could be used for the Phantom class I suggested, and Stheno and/or Euryale would work as an Idol. The others could be worked, largely depending on Ichasennin's answer to using some of them as random encounters. Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 15, 2016 Report Posted July 15, 2016 Crafter Leonardo da Vinci and Hunter Atalanta are what I've suggested up to now. Just so we get all these out there. Quote
Ichasennin Posted July 15, 2016 Author Report Posted July 15, 2016 Alright! Three new chapters are published. Start from here: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600055434&chapter=2 Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 15, 2016 Report Posted July 15, 2016 (edited) On one hand, no smut. On the other hand, enough plot to work as a stable base. Would have liked more, but I've seen worse cases of writer's block, namely mine own. At this rate this story's going to be looooong. Edited July 15, 2016 by Wandering_Moth Quote
warellis Posted July 15, 2016 Report Posted July 15, 2016 So with these, there's 8 set, and 7 more to fill. I'm still advocating Ruler Jeanne, and have an attachment to the Destroyer Altera/Manaka Servant/Master pair I suggested a while ago. Other than that, I kind of want Stheno and/or Euryale, Martha, Kiyohime, Tamamo, Medea Lily, Okita, Scathach, Jack, Medb, Helena Blavatsky, Sita, Shuten Douji, and ibaraki Douji. Plus Astolfo, if Ichasennin is willing. That's just the broader list. Medb could at work as something like Summoner. Jack could be used for the Phantom class I suggested, and Stheno and/or Euryale would work as an Idol. The others could be worked, largely depending on Ichasennin's answer to using some of them as random encounters. What class would Shuten be? Quote
Guest SwordCommandos Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 I did not see that update coming I was expecting a few more days before it was posted Quote
VotedforKodos Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Glad to see the update, and some good development of the actual game mechanics. Also glad to see you didn't skimp on Shirou being Shirou, i.e. him spending a bunch of time just helping random strangers with errands, taking the time to make sure to politely refuse all the love letters, and showing concern about if he is improperly influencing the people around him with his abilities. It would be too easy and unfair to him as a character to have him just right it off. As for Shuten's class, warellis, aside from the FGO canon class of Assassin, I would then say Temptress, if it weren't taken for this story. Beyond that, since she's an oni, Monster or Beast would work, and you could probably come up with more. Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) Presumably Atalanta would not have untoward inclinations towards youngsters, she would not be 'chaste' otherwise. How do you suppose she would cave in to Shirou? Edited July 16, 2016 by Wandering_Moth Quote
warellis Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Presumably Atalanta would not have untoward inclinations towards youngsters, she would not be 'chaste' otherwise. How do you suppose she would cave in to Shirou? Maybe Shirou's kindness and charisma get to her? He sort of takes her home accidentally? As for Shuten, I could honestly imagine her possibly taking Shirou home! And just ram his cock into her. Quote
VotedforKodos Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Something like, it starts out with Atalanta wanting to save Shirou from all these "loose women" taking advantage of him, then when she actually interacts with him, she winds up feeling sexual desire for the first time? She gets hold of him, brings him back to her base, talking about how she'll protect him from people taking advantage of him, Shirou sees she's sincere about that and winds up petting her ears and/or tail, sort of a thank you head pat, and, per usual hentai trope, the petting turns her on immensely. Then there's a brief vicious cycle of Shirou petting Atalanta, her getting horny and fucking him, her feeling guilty about it, and him petting her to make her feel better. Ichasennin, still waiting to hear about if you'd use the monster girl type girls as random encounters. As far as proposed additional Servants and classes, so far: Ruler: Jeanne d'Arc - Master: Caren Ortensia Destroyer: Altera - Master: Manaka Sajyou Crafter: Leonardo da Vinci - Master: ???? Hunter: Atalanta - Master: ???? ...plus plenty more that we can come up with. Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) Something like, it starts out with Atalanta wanting to save Shirou from all these "loose women" taking advantage of him, then when she actually interacts with him, she winds up feeling sexual desire for the first time? She gets hold of him, brings him back to her base, talking about how she'll protect him from people taking advantage of him, Shirou sees she's sincere about that and winds up petting her ears and/or tail, sort of a thank you head pat, and, per usual hentai trope, the petting turns her on immensely. Then there's a brief vicious cycle of Shirou petting Atalanta, her getting horny and fucking him, her feeling guilty about it, and him petting her to make her feel better. You know, her feeling guilty about it all for spoiling Shirou's already spoiled youth makes much more sense than what I had in mind, mostly with her having a more casual attitude towards sex to the point of sucking him off in public if he happens to have a hard-on. On the matter of Kiara's master, would it make more sense for her to have a Muggle summon her by accident than a Magus trying to summon someone that they knew existed to a certain point? Also, warellis, what is it about Shuten that people like so much anyway? As far as I can tell there's more fanart of her in a few months than Scathach had in a year! and that sorta makes me sad. Is it because she has horns? Is it because she's a loli? Is it because she's dressed like a prostitute? Is it because she's a loli? Is it because she has a lewd personality with a subtext of inhuman bloodlust? It's because she's a loli isn't it. Edited July 16, 2016 by Wandering_Moth Quote
VotedforKodos Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) Combination of loli, lewd and also bloodlust-y personality, and I personally think a lot of it is that she's voiced by Aoi Yuuki. I mean, that's why I exhausted all of my resources trying to roll her in FGO, even though I knew there was basically no chance of it. EDIT: I also think there's been some bitterness and resentment about Scathach, since she remains a limited Servant only available when Delight Works decides to have her available, even though she already appeared in the story and there's only one 5-star Lancer available. Basically, she's one of the biggest examples of how summoning in FGO is completely fucked and the gachas are awful. Edited July 16, 2016 by VotedforKodos Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 (edited) What kind of character would you say Altera is, how do you suppose she would factor into the story. EDIT:that's even worse. Edited July 16, 2016 by Wandering_Moth Quote
VotedforKodos Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Kind of kuudere, but without excessive dere. Her biggest dere moment that I can think of is requesting that you call her Altera instead of Atilla, because Altera is cuter. She's basically quiet most of the time, and emotionless during battle, along with having a compulsive urge to kill people and a sword that's apparently designed to destroy civilization. Her wish for the Grail is to live a life not being a warrior, not because she has regrets, but because she's curious what her life would be like outside of battle. With Manaka, who is crazy and wanted to use the Grail in Prototype to resurrect the Beast from the Book of Revelations to destroy the world, as her Master, it would basically turn into them being more antagonistic than most other parties in the War. If I were to dictate how I would envision is, Manaka would be yandere for Shirou, and basically have the scenario the Grail showed Kiritsugu at the end of Zero as her actual goal: kill everyone else in the world except her and Shirou, maybe keep some people around as slaves, keep Altera as a reward for loyal service, but just make sure she gets him. And Aoi Yuuki is probably best known for Madoka Kaname, but my personal favorite role from her is Hibiki Tachibana from Symphogear. Although I also loved her as Clementine in Overlord... Quote
Guest Wandering_Moth Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Ah, Madoka, I think I see now, sorta. Though from what your saying her role in Symphogear was even better, is it any good? Quote
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