She is the One

[Guest Showoff]

Yeah, my tmi bit might have been odd. I agree. I like the forums for the updates and story discussion, not the somewhat creepy(no offense, but it is) discussion on various topics. (I'm looking at you Joe Long) while this is a place where people can mostly say what they want, it is the SITO forum. There should be more SITO discussion. I hope this place can be as accommodating as possible, and I suppose I'm sorry that what people talk about drove you away. You'll be involved in uncomfortable situations all the time. However, that doesn't mean you should have to subject yourself to them. With that, I guess I'll add more real SITO discussion.

I said this earlier, but anyway, I've been rereading the chapters, and I have to say, I think the fight with Brad in chapter 15 is my favorite passage. It's just incredibly epic. It's well written, and I get this dumb "wow" smile on my face every time I read it. It's crazy that it took 4 people to fight him. And they couldn't even take him down. I just think "Holy Shit!" Every time. Other than that there's a smattering of passages that I really enjoy reading. In not sure I could pin down my favorite chapter though.

I agree 100% with this message.

This topic has indeed become quite weird, going from exchanging on a wonderful story to talking about someone's young niece!?

Nothing personal JoeLong, but it's kinda not what this topic is for, tho I do enjoy your comments on SITO.

I also agree about the "Brad fight" chapter(s) being the best.

Actually, the first 15 or so chapters have been my favorites, even though the rest of the story has been awesome too.

[Joe Long]

As it was the opinion of more than one, I'll cool it, sorry.

SITO forum yes, but I was also thinking erotic fiction in general, and how we draw upon personal experiences for writing ideas.

BTW, she's 25, no blood relationship.

[YNP_Refugee]

Personally I thank JL for his pics of his cousin/nieces. They are very attractive young ladies. That said I have to admit I may have given too much personal info on this forum. I hope I was always using it to support a point. Now one last thing to say. We on this forum show we care about one another. I have seen few other communities reach out with well wishes and offer moral support as they do here. With that naturally comes a feeling of comfort and the feeling that you can talk to the others involved. I would like to see that continue here.

Edited June 8, 2015 by YNP_Refugee

[thismy]

Personally I thank JL for his pics of his cousin/nieces. They are very attractive young ladies. That said I have to admit I may have given too much personal info on this forum. I hope I was always using it to support a point. Now one last thing to say. We on this forum show we care about one another. I have seen few other communities reach out with well wishes and offer moral support as they do here. With that naturally comes a feeling of comfort and the feeling that you can talk to the others involved. I would like to see that continue here.

That's actually the reason I made the post about accidentally getting hit in the crotch. One, I'm not shy or embarrassed about it. I laughed with my friends after. This is a community that does show support. As much as I can like or know people over the Internet, that's how this forum feels. I can discuss things with others. We all should be able to. I thought, "hey, this would be funny to share" and did. I'm sure others on here share personal info because they feel they can, and they should continue to feel comfortable. So doubly, because people spoke out about feeling uncomfortable, and that others didn't immediately say "fuck you! Deal with it!" I think speaks for this community. Keep it this way. Discussions like this should happen.

[thismy]

Ok, I'm making no promises, but I think I'm ready to deliver my final pre-threesome discussion verdict. Jack says at the end of the chapter that his arguments don't hold now. Why not? He brings up multiple valid points against doing it.

First, he's worried that making love to Tara will set a bad standard for her. How does that still not apply? If you think about it, it's completely true. She says she feels bad because all the guys are not as great as Jack. That's the exact thing he was worried about! How is that going to change? It hasn't. Either way, it's broken. Maybe he sees the threesome as the best way to fix it. This is a block either way, and it defiantly still applies.

Second, as I've said, Kayla is going to be a problem. She doesn't have the reservations she had last time, and she's had months to think about it. However, you're boyfriend having sex with someone else, even if you're apart of it and seem all on board, can still create reservations. It's not like I'm saying Kayla is the one with problems, but purely in any relationship, in this situation, there're bound to be aftershocks.

Moreover, what's this going to do to Jack? He's the center of it. It depends on him. Tara and Kayla seem to be all on board with it, but Jack is the one who all of it hinges on. Tara wants Jack to vindicate her. Even if she and Kayla got into it, which they did before, if Jack wasn't interested, it wouldn't be the same. The outcome of how Tara and Kayla feel about it rest on his shoulders. How is he supposed to preform? Others have pointed this out. There'll be a lot of emotion and stress. No matter what they say its not just going to be "oh, no strings attached love making for fun." That won't happen.

A few minor problems exist. There's the incest aspect. That's not as a big a deal for them, obviously, but I'm not sure if Jack was ever 100% on it. So much is culminating on how they deal and perform. And many problems still exist, despite what Jack seems to think. As for me? I'm still not sure what I think about the whole thing. I'll just have to wait and see what sort of masterpiece Joe weaves for us this time.

Edited June 8, 2015 by thismy

[Joe Long]

I can discuss things with others. We all should be able to. Discussions like this should happen.

In hindsight I realize some things might have been better unsaid. OTOH, as this is an adult fiction site, I figured we're all here because we like reading sex stories (although SITO is much more than that) and there are some things that, you know, are hard to talk about in most other places.

With fiction in general, we look to our experiences and imagination, things we've done and might have been tempted to do, in order to weave a hopefully entertaining and/or titillating story.

When we read about Kayla's parents going through a difficult time, we wonder why, and whether Joe has already decided what the story will be. In order to guess at those possible scenarios, I looked back at why my own parents split up, and what I knew then, while it was happening, was not what I know now. By drawing on our (collective) experiences, we can visualize realistic scenarios that might be written into the fictional story.

Now, am I the only man here, or anywhere, over 35 who's looked lustfully at women in their teens and twenties? I dare think it's fairly common, so again, would be a topic for erotic fiction. How does it happen? What are the consequences when discovered? Would it be that unrealistic that after Tara visited for Christmas and met Kayla's Dad, that he might have been downloading pics off her Facebook? Could that be why his wife is now so uncomfortable around him?

So anyway, that was the kind of comversation I was trying to start. Again, I apologize for my excesses as I was learning the limits in what was for me a new setting.

[Joe Long]

First, he's worried that making love to Tara will set a bad standard for her. How does that still not apply? If you think about it, it's completely true. She says she feels bad because all the guys are not as great as Jack. That's the exact thing he was worried about! How is that going to change? It hasn't. Either way, it's broken. Maybe he sees the threesome as the best way to fix it. This is a block either way, and it defiantly still applies.

Repeating what I've said previously, Tara is looking for emotional fulfillment, but she's looking for it in sex, and with someone who although he's a great and kind guy, but can never be the soul-mate she is looking for.

[thismy]

Now, am I the only man here, or anywhere, over 35 who's looked lustfully at women in their teens and twenties? I dare think it's fairly common, so again, would be a topic for erotic fiction. How does it happen? What are the consequences when discovered? Would it be that unrealistic that after Tara visited for Christmas and met Kayla's Dad, that he might have been downloading pics off her Facebook? Could that be why his wife is now so uncomfortable around him?

So anyway, that was the kind of comversation I was trying to start. Again, I apologize for my excesses as I was learning the limits in what was for me a new setting.

There's something I can't weigh in on. I'm fairly young, much younger than most of the people on this form(as far as I'm aware). So I look at girls in their late teens and twenties like another man their age. (I don't remember a lot of 9/11 if that gives you an idea)

[thismy]

Repeating what I've said previously, Tara is looking for emotional fulfillment, but she's looking for it in sex, and with someone who although he's a great and kind guy, but can never be the soul-mate she is looking for.

Exactly, and that's one of my biggest hang ups on the threesome happening. I don't think Tara will come away from it with what she thought she would take away, and it'll be a big deal. Like I said, problems exist. Jack said it wasn't fair to ask the questions, but I'm not so sure.

[Joe Long]

There's something I can't weigh in on. I'm fairly young, much younger than most of the people

shhhh...we don't want you banned

[Joe Long]

So I look at girls in their late teens and twenties like another man their age.

When I was that age we didn't have the internet. The CB radio was our social media, but it wasn't visual.

So tell me, do guys your age collect pics of the girls they find attractive? (in case they need something to, you know, look at)

[thismy]

Ok, so no, to answer your first question, I'm not under 18. I just don't like revealing my exact age. I'm between 19-22. It's not like saying "I'm 29" is giving away personal info, but I just don't like to.

Second, honestly, I don't know about other guys. I mean I'm not like "hey I watched this porn video, you should totally see it." So I'm not sure. People don't talk about there um..."personal lives". I would love to tell people I know personally about SITO. I really do, but they might think it was odd with the certain sex themes. And its just considered something you don't talk about. I do collect pics. Not of people I know though. I might "think" about them, but then I feel weird. Don't know how to explain it. I watch a little porn. If you've heard of Reddit, I use it to find some pics. But I also write for my own pleasure. So I guess that's the best I can give. As far as I can guess, most people look at some sort of "visual stimulate." Be it porn or pics or whatever.

If you're looking for how this all relates to SITO, I guess I can say I might have a different view point, because that was recently me. (Though all to quickly that time is slipping away). I look at some of the stuff they do and think "I never did that." Jack talks about getting caught watching porn. In my opinion that's kind of dumb. I always took precautions.

Edited June 8, 2015 by thismy

[Guest No_One]

There's something I can't weigh in on. I'm fairly young, much younger than most of the people on this form(as far as I'm aware). So I look at girls in their late teens and twenties like another man their age. (I don't remember a lot of 9/11 if that gives you an idea)

No you're not I'm pretty young, too. But shh

[thismy]

No you're not I'm pretty young, too. But shh

Careful, people take that underaged stuff seriously, not accusing, just saying. Joe long is right about that. I mean, it's not like the day I turned 18 I said "oh, i can watch porn now!" But seriously.

[Joe Long]

I would love to tell people I know personally about SITO. I really do, but they might think it was odd with the certain sex themes. And its just considered something you don't talk about.

SITO might be a little easier, because although there's graphic sex that's not the focus - it is a romance and a teen coming of age story.

I want to take pride in what I've written, but yeah, who can I tell about it without seeming like a perv?

I do collect pics. Not of people I know though. I might "think" about them, but then I feel weird. Don't know how to explain it. I watch a little porn. If you've heard of Reddit, I use it to find some pics. But I also write for my own pleasure. So I guess that's the best I can give. As far as I can guess, most people look at some sort of "visual stimulate." Be it porn or pics or whatever.

Porn was hard in my day. The only video was at the X-rated movie theater. Of course the time I went when I was around 21, the girl selling tickets knew a friend of mine and told him I was there. Other than that, it was stealing a Playboy or Penthouse and going into my parent's collection of porn paperbacks.

Reddit - I really enjoyed Victoria Justice, dressed or undressed. Just simply stunning.

Edited June 8, 2015 by Joe Long

[thismy]

SITO might be a little easier, because although there's graphic sex that's not the focus - it is a romance and a teen coming of age story.

I want to take pride in what I've written, but yeah, who can I tell about it without seeming like a perv?

Yeah SITO is about so much more, so that would help. Truly, I've almost told a few good friends. It's been on my mind and I've backed out.

The perv part, yeah I feel the same way. Like, there're people who I could tell, and they'd react negatively. You can still be proud. I know it can be hard, but every once in a while I look back and feel good about what I've written. But seriously, I know a few who I'm certain watch porn ect., but they wouldn't tell, so I won't. Thus I turn to the Internet to discuss this sort of stuff, even if it is more than just sex/porn.

[thismy]

Fitzsimmons blinked slowly (he had an unsettlingly slow blink). "Whats the biggest wedge in the relationship right now?"

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"I dont know. I was just looking into the bathroom mirror andit just popped into my head and wouldnt go away andWell, thank God Amanda knocked when she did. I might have jammed my finger right through the skin."

"Impossible," Dr. Fitzsimmons said nonchalantly, as if people suggested the idea often, "What were you thinking at the time?"

I tried the blink the first time I read it, and I tried it again just now.

I laughed really hard at both parts, especially the finger on where he just says "imposible" the way it's phrased. I lost it.

Edited June 8, 2015 by thismy

[Guest KingKrunch]

Loving the story mate, been a fan since the xnxx days keep it up, love from Australia

[Guest JohnnyBanana]

Good news: remission

[Joe Long]

Good news: remission

GREAT!

[COJimmyV]

Good news: remission

More like GREAT news!

[that-one-guy]

Good news: remission

Awesome news mate, you and your family are bound to be overjoyed

[Chester57]

Good news: remission

Delighted to hear that, Johnny!

[YNP_Refugee]

Absolutely, great news Johnny! My prayers that it stays that way.

[Jashley13]

@JohnnyBanana

So glad to hear it hope the good news keeps coming.

As for everyone else, I honestly don't mind what conversations happen on this board. If you wanna talk about something, go right ahead. Trust me, I put no filters on anything. I want everyone to feel included and involved here, whether you're a regular commenter or not.