that-one-guy Posted January 9, 2015 Report Posted January 9, 2015 How is it only a few chapters til summer??in the story it is still winter." Probably not much action untill then, maybe a convention for jack to go to Quote
Guest revengexxx Posted January 9, 2015 Report Posted January 9, 2015 Chapter 22 isn't the last one is it? Quote
Guest conman Posted January 9, 2015 Report Posted January 9, 2015 Hey man, The best way to describe this chap in one word is jashleytastic. Just one of your best works man. I read it late coz.... Just personel reasons so couldn't post earlier. I am thinking of writing a series myself of course inspired from jashley and bashful. I need a favour from you guys could you read my work and give me suggestions this just a request. I know this is a huge thing to ask to take time from your day to day life and read a work of an amateur but i could do with a few motivation thanks people i would inform you when and where i would post soon... Quote
Guest Bill Posted January 9, 2015 Report Posted January 9, 2015 I'm going to side with those who voted to have you lead the story in whatever direction you want. You're the creative one here and the story has been great so far. But, I would like to also see what happens to Alan and Amanda, read about Tara's return (Kayla was a little eager to be the one to kiss Tara) and follow the group of friends through highschool. We still need to find out about how Craig is handling Washburn's suicide. I also agree that if Tara moves to the same town, don't use Washburn's old house. Too creepy. Quote
YNP_Refugee Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 Oh, Joe, I noticed something in the last chapter. You mentioned how much like dad, Allen looks. You did not say how much like mom Amanda looks. Their relationship could be 'transference' The first person a boy gets a crush on is mom at about 3 to 5 years old. The same for little girls. By 7 or 8 they realize they can not have their parents. In the case of a brother looking that much like dad and having the same mannerisms Amanda may have transferred her feelings to Allen. And vice versa. That would be something for Jack to realize and use against dad. Especially since most fathers do fight urges toward their daughters even if they will not publicly admit them. Quote
YNP_Refugee Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 (edited) Oh, and a few weeks till he finds out the results of the arguments... Could Allen or Amanda be slated to move into Tara's parents house when they move into the area? Edited January 10, 2015 by YNP_Refugee Quote
Guest conman Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 Oh i completely forgot in my previous post go throught the high school part. A previous post is right we have a lot of loose ends here. What happens to the twins, what about craig, there might be problem from jeff and of course how jack and kayla deal with these problems.... Quote
Guest Cano_Lathra Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 Hey, Glad to see you continuing. You are a great writer. That being said, I did find a few (minor) discrepancies in Chapter 22. Nothing big, but I was wondering if you would mind me posting them here, or would prefer a PM? Also, finding an editor is often better than waiting for readers to find something, so I would suggest looking into that. Note that I'm only talking about 'fact/physics' checking here, as your grammar and punctuation is some of the best I've seen in a while. Just a few things to think about. Keep typing, and good luck. A Faithful Reader, CanoLathra Quote
Guest daddy's girl Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 Hey Joe, I think you have to continue with this and no need to jump directly to the college part I want to know what will happen when TARA will be back What Kayla and Jack will do ?? I really want to read about their threesome and more so I want to know about Alan and Amanda more I want to know more about Jack's family So Please I request you to continue with chapter 23 With lots of love and big hug Quote
Guest Leon Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 I am so glad that I found this story again, it is the best thing to happen to both xnxx and this site. I just finished chapter 22 and I almost cried, thinking 'Shit man, it's over...' But then I decided to look for a comment section or forum and then stumble here just to find out you're planning to continue!! I'm ecstatic now and I can't wait, keep at it! Quote
Guest Leon Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 I'm new to reading his work on this site, usually how long is the gap between chapters? Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 I'm new to reading his work on this site, usually how long is the gap between chapters? Depends on his work load and if life gets in the way, id say about a couple weeks or so Quote
Guest Leon Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 Oh okay, thanks, can't wait ^^ Quote
Guest daddy's girl Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 I'm new to reading his work on this site, usually how long is the gap between chapters?Actually he takes minimum 3 weeks or more but it's worth to waitBecause as you know by reading that he writes with soul and so real that when you got to read next chapter you will find that your wait is worth With lots of love and big hug for Joe Quote
Guest Leon Posted January 10, 2015 Report Posted January 10, 2015 Wow you guys are nice and welcoming. Do you have any recommendations on other stories I should read while we wait? The only other story I've read on this site is bashful's Being More Social. Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Magusfangs stories (boy in the grass, girls in the grass [the sequel], northstar) COJimmyV 1 Quote
Guest Leon Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Strated boy in the grass, it's really refreshing starting something new, and there are a LOT of chapters in this Quote
Guest dark_lord52 Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Wow you guys are nice and welcoming. Do you have any recommendations on other stories I should read while we wait? The only other story I've read on this site is bashful's Being More Social. Quote
Guest dark_lord52 Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Wow you guys are nice and welcoming. Do you have any recommendations on other stories I should read while we wait? The only other story I've read on this site is bashful's Being More Social.A New Day... series by P.O.I. but he's in xnxx. His story is good and is still ongoing. Quote
Guest bashfulfan88@gmail.com Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Im working on a fan series of bms.you should read it when it is done Quote
Guest Armando Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 First of all, I love that cast list, I would totally pay money to watch that movie. Secondly, Loved 22! I agree with other people on here. I think you have tho continue high school, maybe put it on a fast track to graduation. Still there are seeds that could be planted, like Tara moving. Kinda hoping for that threesome haha. Still it's up to you and I am so into this story for the long haul. Can't wait for 23. Quote
Guest guest Posted January 11, 2015 Report Posted January 11, 2015 Wow. Just amazing joe. I'm enjoying the story very much and I'm very curious if Craig tried to commit suicide. Keep up the good work. Quote
Guest JohnnyBanana Posted January 12, 2015 Report Posted January 12, 2015 Wow. Just amazing joe. I'm enjoying the story very much and I'm very curious if Craig tried to commit suicide. Keep up the good work. If Craig commits suicide I will go apeshit. No, we just got over the hump after Walburn's death. Depression is okay, suicidal is a big NO. I can't deal with that much negativity after we just went through that. Quote
Guest Guest Posted January 12, 2015 Report Posted January 12, 2015 To be honest, I don't think you should skip, Joe! I feel that skipping to college would be a dis-service to the story in a weird way. Mainly because of the huge potential for major life events, or good action moments in the story! Plus, skipping means the story is that much shorter. lol Quote
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