Jashley13 Posted November 19, 2016 Report Share Posted November 19, 2016 Chapter 59 is up and posted! Whew! Good to be back writing and hopefully things will go smoother from here And I’ll try to post a ‘best stories from boot camp’ thing in the next day or so (can’t reveal too much, obviously). Right now, I just need to relax a little, then dive headlong into Chapter 60 Hope you enjoy reading! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted November 19, 2016 Report Share Posted November 19, 2016 Wouldn't you know it? I'm at work! Have to wait till tonight. Thanks, Joe! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caide Posted November 19, 2016 Report Share Posted November 19, 2016 Another awesome chapter as usual. I'm curious to see how things play out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted November 19, 2016 Report Share Posted November 19, 2016 Check in for the first time in a month to see that the chapter was posted 3 hours ago. Damn, and I had stuff to do today. Those can wait. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted November 19, 2016 Report Share Posted November 19, 2016 Just a handful of typos deal with all of my shirt. I mean, not like I brought her in her to— how amazing it was being wit Kayla Yeah, I am. Hey, I’m gonna be coming home today? gripping me to tightly to turn around Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted November 19, 2016 Report Share Posted November 19, 2016 I’ve said it here before, but Jack & Kayla didn’t say it to Rhona. Maybe they didn’t want to call her a bitch because Rhona isn’t mean, but she certainly does have an abrasive personality. My comment was that Rhona could probably get laid any time she wants to, but her personality keeps people at a distance. Being that way, the only times guys would try to get close is to have sex. Rhona needs to lighten up and be a person that someone would want to be friends with. One needs to be able to open up and make an effort to please the other person. Fortunately, she seemed to be showing signs of that as she dropped Jack off at his house. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caide Posted November 20, 2016 Report Share Posted November 20, 2016 Yeah Rhona is her own worst enemy. I'm wondering when/if she admits she likes jack as more than a friend. I'm also curious about the change jack felt that he couldn't pin down as to what was changing. I was happy to see that Kayla made it for his birthday and that she walked in when she did so it was plain jack wasn't doing anything wrong. Like I said it was great and can't wait to see what happens Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted November 21, 2016 Report Share Posted November 21, 2016 A pretty good chapter but I have the feeling it’s the calm before the storm. I was glad that Jack and Kayla got back on track before the school year starts as they’re going to need each other. I wonder who it was who hurt Rhona so badly? Or maybe it was a series of bad boyfriends— similar to what Tara went through? Maybe if she continues to confide in Jack we’ll find out. Remember Jack’s question to Amanda— “What about girls?” I think that’s the problem between her and Alan. They both want Kelly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jashley13 Posted November 24, 2016 Report Share Posted November 24, 2016 A very Happy Thanksgiving to you all I know there are many things in my life that I am thankful for but one of the biggest is having a fan-base that has been so loyal and supportive over the last two years. A fanbase that never fails to encourage me to keep working, even when I’m struggling. A fan-base that was so patient that they were able to wait TWO MONTHS for an update when I’ve been pretty steady in my work output. It means the world to me, guys, and I’m thankful each and every day that you all stick with me. Hope you have a great day and look for my Reality Check and update within the next day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted November 24, 2016 Report Share Posted November 24, 2016 1 hour ago, Jashley13 said: A very Happy Thanksgiving to you all And to you, my friend. Have a great day! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted November 25, 2016 Report Share Posted November 25, 2016 We respect your devotion to and the quality of your work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jashley13 Posted November 29, 2016 Report Share Posted November 29, 2016 Sorry for the silence! Been busy the past couple days but I'll be posting the Reality Check and update later today Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jashley13 Posted November 29, 2016 Report Share Posted November 29, 2016 Hey guys! So I finally had a few moments to breathe at school here so I figured I’d give you all an update and Reality Check. Actually, the Reality Check is going to be extra simple...there isn’t one. Yeah, like I said before, this section is purely of my own creation. Some emotional similarities and reactions don’t count. If the event didn’t actually happen, it doesn’t go into the Reality Check. Well, that was easy Chapter 60 is actually fairly close to being done. I’m in the last section of it and I’m hoping to have a straight shot to the end. This will be the last chapter in the Travel Saga, by the way, so there’s gonna be a new one starting up soon. Hope you’re all doing well and the next time you hear from me should be with an exact date Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted November 29, 2016 Report Share Posted November 29, 2016 2 hours ago, Jashley13 said: Chapter 60 is actually fairly close to being done. I’m in the last section of it and I’m hoping to have a straight shot to the end. This will be the last chapter in the Travel Saga, by the way, so there’s gonna be a new one starting up soon. Sixty chapters! That’s awesome when you think about it. As far as the next saga is concerned I would ask that you write it from the beginning of the school year and ignore the fact that it’s almost December. There’s no need to stay in real time with the seasons. Besides, this year is very important to the group and we don’t want you to skip over anything! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jashley13 Posted December 3, 2016 Report Share Posted December 3, 2016 Chapter 60 should be up tomorrow Not a huge chapter, not a majorly eventful chapter; more one that opens up Jack’s last year at high school. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted December 3, 2016 Report Share Posted December 3, 2016 Looking forward to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jashley13 Posted December 4, 2016 Report Share Posted December 4, 2016 And there’s Chapter 60 posted time to get some studying done before I start on Chapter 61. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted December 4, 2016 Report Share Posted December 4, 2016 Aarrghh!! Second time in a row you've posted a new chapter and I'm at work! But thanks-- I'll read it tonight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted December 5, 2016 Report Share Posted December 5, 2016 (edited) 20 hours ago, Jashley13 said: And there’s Chapter 60 posted time to get some studying done before I start on Chapter 61. OMG that was unexpectedly quick – here I am taking 5 months to write 10k words. Will get at it later tonight, when the boss has gone home (and I usually paste it into a Word doc, in case of prying eyes) Edited December 5, 2016 by Joe Long Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted December 5, 2016 Report Share Posted December 5, 2016 Saga question – I haven’t kept my notes up as well as I should. Would someone help me update this? Kayla Saga: Chapters 1-8 Jessica Saga: Chapters 9-15 Tara Saga: Chapters 16-22 Twins Saga: Chapters 23-28 Summer Saga: Chapters 29-37 Fracture Saga: Chapters 38-45? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted December 5, 2016 Report Share Posted December 5, 2016 All I'm gonna say is shits about to get real. And its gonna be awesome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester57 Posted December 6, 2016 Report Share Posted December 6, 2016 Whoa! Pretty good cliff-hanger. It’s going to be a very long year for everyone. I have a good idea what Mike Harrison wants to discuss with Jack before he leaves for college. That will be an interesting conversation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted December 6, 2016 Report Share Posted December 6, 2016 Whoa. And if you guys like cliff hangers, head on over to this week’s release of Being More Social Ch 17 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted December 6, 2016 Report Share Posted December 6, 2016 Only two typos to report! moaning at the ceiling, seeing the stairs straight through it I just texted Alan and Amanda and Amand said she was up in the food court. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted December 6, 2016 Report Share Posted December 6, 2016 17 hours ago, Chester57 said: Whoa! Pretty good cliff-hanger. It’s going to be a very long year for everyone. I have a good idea what Mike Harrison wants to discuss with Jack before he leaves for college. That will be an interesting conversation. Ive a couple theories, but, since the foundation has been laid this early, I think its gonna have deep implications on how Jack deals with a situation yet to arise, or its gonna result in a big arguement Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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