Rescue25 Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 Response is on my forum, but I have one additional thing to say. I don't hold myself anywhere close to magus standard. He is an amazing writer and I know that I will never be able to achieve anything near as good as what he writes. I don't compare myself to any of the great writers that I read,magus, jashley13, bashfulscribe, nivek_88, Joe long; because I know that I will never be as good as them. Beside their stories mine is a heap of trash that's been set on fire. Thats all, but if you want the story ended I can do that, but I will finish it. Might not be as quickly as you would like (not even as fast as I would like) but I will finish it. If I start something I will complete it. BULLSHIT!! Don't try and tell me you aren't good! Have read too much of yours. Write at your pace. Would "we" like for you to post more often? HELL YES. Like the good ones to post often but understand R/L. B darthel0101 1 Quote
Guest Christian1040 Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 Max must vomit a ton everytime he kills a person, lots of blood...I just think he doesn't like the watching giving birth part, people say its one of the most beautiful things in the world, I say otherwise. Besides Max doesn't lack any medical skills, in book one he was quite the expert. He cured diabetes for crying out loud, not to mention he knows the human body more than anybody. I just think like all the skills he's mastered, he likes to hold back and let his girls shine instead. He wants to make them feel proud of themselves and think they are just as good as him. Quote
MajorMarioc Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 Max must vomit a ton everytime he kills a person, lots of blood...I just think he doesn't like the watching giving birth part, people say its one of the most beautiful things in the world, I say otherwise. Besides Max doesn't lack any medical skills, in book one he was quite the expert. He cured diabetes for crying out loud, not to mention he knows the human body more than anybody. I just think like all the skills he's mastered, he likes to hold back and let his girls shine instead. He wants to make them feel proud of themselves and think they are just as good as him. Giveing birth is something all men don't want to see Rescue25 1 Quote
magusfang Posted May 16, 2015 Author Report Posted May 16, 2015 BULLSHIT!! Don't try and tell me you aren't good! Have read too much of yours. Write at your pace. Would "we" like for you to post more often? HELL YES. Like the good ones to post often but understand R/L. I have to agree, your writing is pretty good and will only get better the more you write B Max must vomit a ton everytime he kills a person, lots of blood...I just think he doesn't like the watching giving birth part, people say its one of the most beautiful things in the world, I say otherwise. Besides Max doesn't lack any medical skills, in book one he was quite the expert. He cured diabetes for crying out loud, not to mention he knows the human body more than anybody. I just think like all the skills he's mastered, he likes to hold back and let his girls shine instead. He wants to make them feel proud of themselves and think they are just as good as him. Beautiful? It's the most disgusting thing if ever seen! Rescue25 1 Quote
Guest rescue25 Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 Knowledge is not necessarily skill. B Rescue25 Quote
magusfang Posted May 16, 2015 Author Report Posted May 16, 2015 So reading what I wrote last night...I really gotta lay off that button! Still useable but need to tone it down a bit Quote
BigMan7307 Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 To a degree I have to agree with Magus on the birth thing.... it's a wonderful thing, but, at the same time, seeing it makes a guy feel woefully inadequate, no matter how big he is, lol. Nanites are, no matter how you look at it, computers, and they'll only do as they're told. Granted, Legion has become self aware, the big question, who all has the Legion nanites, and who has the old "dumb" ones. We know that Nadi had the experimental ones, but, did they become self aware when Legion did? When you figure in the human factor involved in them, things like that will happen, every person is different, and will cause different complications. Quote
MajorMarioc Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 (edited) To a degree I have to agree with Magus on the birth thing.... it's a wonderful thing, but, at the same time, seeing it makes a guy feel woefully inadequate, no matter how big he is, lol. Nanites are, no matter how you look at it, computers, and they'll only do as they're told. Granted, Legion has become self aware, the big question, who all has the Legion nanites, and who has the old "dumb" ones. We know that Nadi had the experimental ones, but, did they become self aware when Legion did? When you figure in the human factor involved in them, things like that will happen, every person is different, and will cause different complications. Lmfao when i saw my first live birth i can tell you i was definetly not thinking of inadeduacy it was moor "WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT"How is the buttondoing magus that's a great invention Edited May 16, 2015 by MajorMarioc Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 16, 2015 Report Posted May 16, 2015 So reading what I wrote last night...I really gotta lay off that button! Still useable but need to tone it down a bit Read my post #3022. B Quote
magusfang Posted May 17, 2015 Author Report Posted May 17, 2015 Yep live birth is a miracle; a disgusting, bloody, messy, nightmare inducing miracle...all in all, I'd rather be shot at Quote
MajorMarioc Posted May 17, 2015 Report Posted May 17, 2015 (edited) Lol the talk of live birth has stoped the foam dead in its tracks Oh and glad to see you are cutting back on the button don't want to overdo it Edited May 17, 2015 by MajorMarioc Quote
magusfang Posted May 18, 2015 Author Report Posted May 18, 2015 Ok, so I know its been a while since I posted, should have something up soon. I thought I would have more free time stuck in a hospital bed...but its like grand central station in here! Should have something soon, I do have to do a little revision...well basically the middle of the chapter needs a rewrite...its a fine line when on painmeds and once crossed...well lets just say I'm not sure some of what I've written is english...and it gets worse from there Quote
that-one-guy Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 Ok, so I know its been a while since I posted, should have something up soon. I thought I would have more free time stuck in a hospital bed...but its like grand central station in here! Should have something soon, I do have to do a little revision...well basically the middle of the chapter needs a rewrite...its a fine line when on painmeds and once crossed...well lets just say I'm not sure some of what I've written is english...and it gets worse from there That just makes for a better read Quote
magusfang Posted May 18, 2015 Author Report Posted May 18, 2015 If you can read it! I wrote it and was lost two sentences in...not just the plot being way messed up, the syntax was so bad it made even me cringe. I know my writing can be a little confusing and difficult to read at times but holy crap I think I invented a new language here Rescue25 1 Quote
magusfang Posted May 18, 2015 Author Report Posted May 18, 2015 You just want a peek at my crazy But, alas and alack, it has been condemned to the ether; and I doubt, hopefully, that I would be able to recreate it Rescue25 1 Quote
that-one-guy Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 You just want a peek at my crazy But, alas and alack, it has been condemned to the ether; and I doubt, hopefully, that I would be able to recreate it You could always hold the button down for a while Quote
magusfang Posted May 18, 2015 Author Report Posted May 18, 2015 Again to my great sorrow, the magic button is lost to me; the nurses took my IV out and I am resigned to little white tablets - they do not compare favorably! Quote
crazychickhull Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 I'm thinking of posting one of my stories. Would you guys promise to be gentle? I.e. Batter the hell out of it point out where I'm going wrong? Quote
magusfang Posted May 18, 2015 Author Report Posted May 18, 2015 No problem, I enjoy crushng perspective writers...err...I mean giving condtructive critscism... Quote
crazychickhull Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 No problem, I enjoy crushng perspective writers...err...I mean giving condtructive critscism... Go ahead make my day the first two chapters are up Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 "Make my day' Isn't that a quote from a famous person as he was thumbing back the hammer on a .357 ot was it a .44? B Quote
Rescue25 Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 I'm thinking of posting one of my stories. Would you guys promise to be gentle? I.e. Batter the hell out of it point out where I'm going wrong? Can't find it. Can you post a link? B Quote
Sniper014 Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 "Make my day' Isn't that a quote from a famous person as he was thumbing back the hammer on a .357 ot was it a .44? B It was a 44. The most powerful hand gun on earth and could blow your head clean off. Clint told the bad guy that he could not remember if he had fired five or six shots and asked the bad guy if he felt lucky. I carried a 44 on my hip with a 4 1/2 pound trigger pull to it. The shells was dum dum wadcutters. When I fired it at you if I did not hit you the sound of it going off would make you crap your pants and if I hit the engine of your car it would stop it because it tore the engine up. Go ahead make my day the first two chapters are up Could not find it either. What catagory is it under. Please send us a link. Quote
crazychickhull Posted May 18, 2015 Report Posted May 18, 2015 Can't find it. Can you post a link? B http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107454&chapter=2 Quote
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