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I came across this article and thought I would share. Apparently I'm depressed because I have an accurate view of the world. I have to admit that seeing things as I do doesn't help. I don't know... maybe he has a valid point. http://men.msn.com/articlees.aspx?cp-docum...8&GT1=32001

Yeah... pick a tense and stay with it. That's always a good idea. And make sure you know basic grammar rules. There have only been two books I've ever met that I didn't like. 'The Chocolate War' because in my opinion, it was just fricken stupid. My classmates loved it because of all the cuss words. The worst however, was 'Cry, the Beloved Country'. All I can say is OMG..... I swear the author was probably rich because he would have to self publish that crap. The plot itself was good, but the author switched pov's and didn't follow grammar rules. He also went into overkill with detail if I remember right. Now, I have a reading disability where I sometimes have trouble understanding what I read. There's a faulty connection between my eyeballs and my brain. Usually, if I read slowly I usually don't have too much trouble. But that book... there was no point in me even trying. I nearly failed English because of it.

There are lots of weird things about me. Pick one. I once got off on having my toes sucked....

Now that you've calmed down, you make a much better argument. I can't speak for everyone else, but I'm not 'bashing' her exactly. I'm venting my frustratuions. I can't deny the fact that her books have gotten a lot of kids interested in reading. Maybe that was her purpose in this lifetime... and yay for her. Somebody needed to do it. But I, among many other people, are disappointed and disgusted with how she wrote the last book. I've been disappointed since book 5. And I can't say whether or not she took anything from fan fics. What I do know is there was a lot of stuff in book 7 that I saw in fan fics that I've read. The ending with Harry being a horcrux and having to die, and the mirror things are the ones I remember at the moment. Maybe great minds think alike... Don't know... I don't have access to her mind. If I did... Harry wouldn't have tried to disarm the dark wizard that was trying to kill him.....! Yeah, that has to be thing I'm most disappointed in. *screams*

"No flames intended." To quote you... are you fucking serious!!? "Screw the person who said they could write a better series" You just did bash us for our opinions. Are you fucking two? Seriously, we could've done without all the swearing and the ranting. Oh, by the way, you should visit mugglenet, or whatever it's called. I was looking up Alan Rickman last night out of curiousity about something and found it. There is a listing for all of her mistakes from each book. I didn't read all of them, just the first book. There is a whole page of screwups for one book. And not just things that sounded far fetched... oh no... she contradicted herself. Umm... let's see what I can remember. She wrote that a snake blinked when snakes don't have eye lids. She wrote that the characters had Astronomy Wednesday nights at midninght, but wrote a scene where they were in the common room looking something up on a Wedensday at midninght. Hermione lent Harry a book 1000 herbs and something or other, and a few chapters later it was 100 herbs and something or other. And I'm not saying that every author has to be perfect. One mistake here and there... ok. The woman is only human. The editors for the publishing company are only human. But that many? And she contradicted herself in the plot too. Face the fact... If she were just a nobody posting her original stories on this site... she'd be bashed and or told to get a beta. The only reason you are defending her at all cupcake is that she is a famous and very rich person that got her books published. If she were a nobody I have a feeling you would be the first to break out the noose. And seriously, if you're going to have a book published for the public to read it, shouldn't you hold yourself to a higher standard? Shouldn't you go over and over your plot, the small details, everything to make sure that there are no mistakes and no holes? I write on this site for free, and I do my best to make sure what I post is at least of reasonable quality. I take pride in my work. As I've said before, I like her story idea, I just think it was poorly written. And she didn't give her characters a personality, she gave them several. Am I the only one who noticed that in the first book Hagrid was a sweet but bumbling idiot, that in the rest of the series magicaly became smarter? So, in closing, if you have an opinion based on any other fact that she's rich, famous, or that she's sold a lot of books, I'd be happy to hear it.

Ok, so there's a plot bunny that won't leave me alone. I want to do a Harry Potter fic where Snape kind of kidnaps Harry and makes him his sex slave. It's an outlet for my sick and twisted mind. But I can't for the life of me come up with a title.... HELP!!! I'm seriously bad at titles.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600015879 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600015845 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600015526 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600015825 I do find it very annoying when I'm actually trying to find a good story to read.

Hmm... maybe that's why it's too thin. It tasted good on the pizza though. It was a little salty, but yummy.

I recently got the idea for a Harry/Snape fic. I need someone who isn't easily offended to catch typos and plot holes. It's going to have a Master/slave type setting.

Ok, so my boyfriend has this kick where he wants me to cook instead of buying boxed and frozen stuff. I'm not a bad cook, I'm just a little lazy. Anyway, I like pizza so he gets a crust, a can of tomato sauce, and pepperoni so I can put together my own. Am I alone in thinking you can't put straight tomato sauce on a pizza? So even though I feel like total crap today, I decided to try my hand at pizza sauce. Ok, so it's a bit thin and isn't restaurant quality... I'm still proud of myself that it tastes somewhat good.

The biggest problem I see with it is that there are a lot of fics that would fall into more than one category. Not sure how that could be fixed. Possibly those of you who know more about coding than I do could come up with something.

Yea I think it really is a matter of how you are raised. I was born a nudist, and I still am. My mother tried to make me civilized, and it ended up as a comprimise. I'm always fully clothed in public. Now I have a friend who grew up second oldest of 7. He said they didn't even bother covering up with towels going back and forth from the shower when he was a kid. He's seen his brothers and sisters naked many times. So when he went into the Marines the close living quarters with other men didn't bother him in the slightest. He actually thought it was weird to see some of the other guys being so modest.

Ok, I had a thought last night. There's another site I go to that has the stories broken down into categories as far as like bondage, college, outdoors... You know... So if I'm in the mood to read a certain type of fic I can go select the category I feel like at the moment. I was just wondering if it might be possible to break down each pairing further like that. It was just a random thought.

To post a story just go to the site and under member tools go to author panel. You can add and edit your stories from there.

Yay for you!! I know how hard loosing weight is. I always gain like 10 or so pounds over the winter because I don't get out and do much and all there is tro do is eat junk food. Then in the spring my summer clothes don't fit anymore... So I'm working on dropping my winter weight.

I might be willing to try it. I've read all 7 books, have seen all 5 movies millions of times... and I have been rp'ing for about 4 years. I'm not sure how good of a Snape I'd make, but it can't hurt to try right?

Happy Easter to everyone! I really didn't do anything special. My grandparents took us all out to dinner. That was the extent of my holiday.

It did kind of drag on and on didn't it. The whole book sucked period. After book 3 she got into the habbit of adding lots of unneccesary filler.

I think it's just really hard to get feedback on this site. I consider myself incredibly lucky to have a few readers who are giving me lots of reviews. But I'll take a look at your story. If it sucks... I'll tell you lol.

I wish my parents wouldn't have been such prudes. Hell my mom was 16 when she got pregnant with me. And would you like to know why? My grandparents, the rich prudish snobs that they are, didn't think it was proper to teach their teenage daughter about sex. So she goes to Italy for a summer and meets a local boy who um... gave her a souveneir.... Parents spend too much time trying to censor everybody else and don't pay enough attention to the kids they are trying to protect. If parents would actually stop spending all their time trying to make everything squeaky clean and actually like talked to their own kids... this world would be a much better place.

Cu-kid9, I totally agree with you. When character A starts looking at character B and gets all flushed and aroused... so delicious I could melt. I enjoy sexual tension and teasing far more than sex as long as it's done well. Though I will admit that I like it when said sex follows scenes like that. But over all, the story has got to be written well for me to like it.

Another one... http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600015797

I still have my copy. The storyline in general is great. But I could point out holes throughout the whole series. But I'm fixing it in my own version. And yeah, I often had the feeling while reading that she took some stuff from other people's fan fics. I actually read one where Harry sacrificed himself and the piece of soul in him died but he survived. I wish I could find that fic again, but I don't remember the title. It was good.

I meant creators... Apparently I have no brain left anymore. If I had to guess I would say I'm sleep deprived. I was writing a check yesterday and wrote fife instead of five. I'm not on drugs I swear! And most of my reviews are from the same few people, but I'm still proud of them. I don't always leave a review, but I do if I really like the story. I'm using what's left of my brain power to write chapter 7 and do beta work. There isn't any smut in chapter 7 either. There might be in chapter 8, I haven't decided yet.