@Athenia-Glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon!
@ Reba-thanks for the tip
@Blink-thanks! Bella is going to be some fun!
@Mystra-there aren't many notes for me to work with so I'm not all that certain what I'm going to do with Sirius but he's coming soon, I promise!
@Alexa-Thanks!
@EvilGenius-thanks! I'll take the suggestion under advisement
@Vittani-My beta actually doesn't know HP at all, she's never read the books or seen the movies(she's game for anything so takes on whatever fandom I write in even if she doesn't know about it-gotta love someone willing to do that for you!). As this story is so long and complex, it's very hard to remember what when where in it, expecially, in her case, where you've only read it once(even for just a casual reader. It's slightly different if you write it yourself as you usually can remember certain things or have notes or outlines to work off of). I would adore a second beta to go over things for continuity errors but even finding a beta to do spelling/grammar is quite difficult. Nor am I willing to give up Tenchi for such things. If someone is willing to volunteer for that, I would be all for it. As it is, I'm going through the first version and taking notes on certain things to ensure I have at least a small idea of what went where(as well as loose ends I want to work with and other things that jump out at me). Anyone that wants to try to take it on can contact me through the forum here or various places listed on my profile.
@ILoveWyatt-Glad you're enjoying!
@ryuuta-glad you're enjoying!
@ivy raven-No offense taken and I hope you don't at this... I'm not going to try to adopt Aya's style. To do that, I would throw off, completely what I do with more that just this story, it would affect the way I work with everything I'm in the middle of, something I seriously don't want. While the style is different, I hope you enjoy. There also comes in the factor that each of us percieve characters and situations differently (if we didn't, there wouldn't be such a variety of HP stories out there!) so I'm going with how i percieve such things as I can't get into Aya's head and work with how she did. Hope you're enjoying anyway!
@LeaniaSTL -glad you're enjoying!
@Raven-trust me, what you mention is going to come into play! It's one of the few things I've PMed Aya and asked her about. Just gotta give me time to get there is all!
@Hollzhatter -glad you're enjoying and thanks!