Calanthee

Nekoii, it barely begun, but I am trying to finish up "Darkness" ....writing two stories at once is just dumb, but sometime those plot/bunnies are more like demons than bunnies, and they have the evil tendency to bite you on the ass to keep you writing, and also I have another type of deviate demon harashing me [its called job hunting]....which totally wreaks my concentration, poor Cal the gslinger is possessed by to many nasty demons... they even interfere with spelling and grammar. LOL

Chitose would seduce Kazuya not because he wants him, only to make the boss reveal his true feelings for the kid, but what do I know, I am just an annoying fan and your the author LOL A worried too active mind which can't be turned off or away from its problems... is some times the worst culprite at bed time. Believe me I have been there, better to work out some sexy plot bunnies in your head until you nod off, if you don't need them now you can save' em for later! Cal the G

Juksty, Having read some authors who original published on here, and then later actually published their work later with some relatively unknow Yaoi publishers [that will remain nameless] These author's later works came out with disapointing elementary prose and utterly lifeless as if their muse took a hike..."quite elementary and very boring, my dear Watson!" almost if they were writing for twelve year olds. Certainly you couldn't fall to their inferior level, even if you tried, do whatever makes you happy... even if you only write for yourself, which is the most important thing anyway. That is of course if you let us read it when your all done! You need not reply to this! Just hurry up with next part of the story, Cal the impatient Gunslinger LOL!

You know me from here, I have read quite number of your stories, I am a fan! And I dabble with my own naugthy tales, but their not of your true caliber. Constantly you come up with original ideas that keep me hanging-on until the very last chapter. Heaven Far Away would make a very good manga, I'd love to see the story Illustrated just to see what Chitose looks like, he is such an absolute deliciousily complex creature.... possibly the power behind the boss' throne so to speak, number one in the true since, ruler of Opiate organization. I am guessing his relationship to Konbayoshi's is not as a lover but more a parental brother/mother... he doesn't seem jealous of Kazuya, more amused and pleased that he inspires affection in Konbayoshi??? Chitose is the personification of the game he plays and the people he controls.... an exquisite killer butterfly perversely feminine, who flits from flower to flower dealing in honeyed pleasure and controling venom in equal measure, but appears to be harmless...but is not really... at all! Hurry write more story, I can't wait, Calanthee aka Gslinger

Myth Flaming Fan Boys who write Yaoi are just confused... not Lesbians ????

...and Here I thought I was the only one this happen to, because I am just a lousy proof reader, people probabley think I don't check over my story for mistakes, but I do I do, yet as soon as I publish a chapter.... errors, mistakes, lousy grammar, missing and abused commas, bad spelling, the most hateful of all ... missing words squeeze out of the wood work like literary demons to make me cringe in embarassing disgust. I had two betas and they both ran away screaming in utter horror and we need violent military strength spelling and grammar check that gives us an electric shock and yells at us , "Hey dummy fix that you ass!" A foul misguided abuser of the english language, Cal PS. Yet I refuse to give up writing my sexy stories for they keep me sane!

Most authors here are amateurs... though some are very good and some even come close to almost writing literature at times, but that's no excuse to go after our hard working Moderators, who do it for free...they don't deserve blood thirsty criticism for whatever silly things happen, because what we write isn't that important ground breaking literature that needs to be bowed down with holy reverence... its fan stuff we do for fun. And fun is fine... we write because we enjoy it, and we need to do it, and it gives us pleasure, and if some readers enjoy what we write too! That's even better, we should be grateful and thank the readers for their comments. What would you do if the Moderators suddenly decide to shut the site down, because they were getting too much criticism for busting their balls, personally, I'd be devastated , I am not of the blogger mentality and would miss all freedom this sites gives us, certainly there isn't many sites out there like this one... is there??? So have mercy, leave the Moderators alone...and keep writing joyfully till your little pinkies fall off! Sincerely, Gslinger

Impatiently, he started to rapidly thrust his big toe forcefully against the creatures tiny resistent hole, the stiff dead cat was suddenly airborne and slide half way down the block and under a huge trash truck.

grins back with bloody fangs and sarcastic leer! so bite me, the lovely Cal

I like to call it Code Guess, guesswhat??? for damn if I can figure out what going on,,, The characters are all very pretty, but they seem constantly doing each other in for various obscure political reasons and of course... even though they are related in some way. And they all wear those anime required armored flying suits Sometimes. And Mr Purple eyes with the red wings inside... acts like the hero one minute and the bad guy the next... so which way is he going up or down...now the little bugger is the head honcho of the empire and wants to take over the world??? Yeah and daddy and Mummy were demented pieces of work too, I would have wacked'em too! And the little psycho fake bro, was homocidal brat... hope he stays real dead! My two favorite characters are the gray-haired gay scientist and the hot foxy chinese guy with long black hair, Lalouche is totally confusing and that so is that constant-turncoat twitchy Japanese Knight of the empire Kurogi. And that cold hearted immortal greenhair bitch, god knows what she up to. I was angery that Lalouche killed his girlfriend when her memory came back, for that was just not very nice!!! So would anyone care to try to explain this anime it to me, I do love the art work, but some of characters are really sick pieces of work... Is this a bazaar fantasy a sick byproduct of DeathNote, where everybodies a evil naughty loser??? OOH! DEathNote what have you spawned??? A Deeply confused Cal, HELP!!!!

DEar Supersonic Bitch, Well quilting hobbies are quite nice! Make sure you use the heavy duty thread to do the deed, and make sure the Flesh is totally fresh, otherwise the smelly mess will fall apart before your very eyes! Smooches, Cool Cal

This person is open wicked Potterite, with an unhealthy interest in severed skulls and a pile of dead cows, gee what a strange fetish. Cal Ps What's next Cow mutalations??? LOL

Because it takes two or three stupid people together, in order for them to come up with one complete thought. Reproducing faster like bunnies gives them the possible options of eventually coming up with right answer by trail and error. Be kind to stupid people, they don't know any better. Unfortunate this problem seem to run in families... thus the "Bushes", and politics only seems intensify this genetic flaw of stupidity to the ultimate level! Cal

"Oh Shit that really hurt! Damn-it to hell, I pissed out another baby again. Perhaps golly-gosh I should stop having sex with Elvis, Fred and the boys, for I can't tell who's the babies' real fathers are." Morning sickness sucks too! Yours Truly, the very lustful and productive, Cal PS. One more baby and I'll have a triple hat trick, what can I say I am a team player

This is Calanthee, for the Ethical Non-abuse of Vaginas... Again. I do believe you boys and girls, are actually taking me serious! Don't do that ever, for I am never serious.... it's satire! I am making jokes. I only used the word fascist cause it sounded good, I wrote that post as a mothers day funny I write Yaoi too, but unlike you guys I am fascinated by a little damp pussy occasional found hiding on a beautiful feminine male character in fantasy situation if only for the shock value, but not in reality based yaoi. Some scientific theories suggests that man as species, might have developed from a duel gendered being called a hermaphrodite, a being which carries both male and female reproductive organs, and then at one point, the genders seperated. And this fact for me generates hippity-hoppoty plot bunnies galore. So shoot me, I am not a Yaoi purest in any way shape or form, yet I can be just as prejudice for "Yuri girl on girl" leaves me cold... it doesn't make me heave my cookies, I just don't read the stories. But I do read regular het stories once in while. The rare Good writers can write just about anything and you'll read every word. Remember we all come through the same gate, our loving mothers, Happy Mothers Day! Cal

Pickey! Pickey! Pickey! Here I thought all Yaoi writers were chicks or chicks pretending to be guys/males, but appariently that's not the case anymore, there is possiblity that a few guys, perhaps with a particular persuasion are now writing Yaoi... well swell I am not predjudice... go for it boys have fun, but this terrible anti-vagina [anti-cunt for the crude] fascism must cease now before it get out of hand. This little damp hole you boys are mocking is simply another body part, necessary because it helps make babies, you boys don't need to go down on it... with such hatred! All body holes are equal, they just have different uses, after all the anal canal is not called the poop shoot for nothing. Sometime I think more shit comes of people's mouths and minds than ever comes out the other end!!! Just think about it! Yo will ya... please! And remember be kind to Vaginas, your mother had one too, for we all came through that particular gate when we were born, least you nauseous guys forget it! Calanthee, for the Ethical Non-abuse of Vaginas

Ok Mr Foe, how can one be dead and not a corpse? Unless you mean they can't get it up or make Willy salute, to do the Nasty? So come on already, what does dead mean to you??? I am curious, Cal the Har

Psycho Darling, metrics... smetrics it confuses old Americans, beside what I drank was weak rosy- sweet wine coolers and if you think #6 was BS, you didn't read the other numbers they're totally full of #2 as well Respectfully, Cal

good luck Kiddo, looks very heard to achieve, perhaps dyed blue lace, which is then glued on the body[ use somekind of theatrical body glue... Make the lace thicker over breasts for conceal issues! What about some kind special body pant too! I hope somekind blue cape is included with the outfit too! Good luck, Cal

Yo fussy fussy, Dude? I though every one was allowed to do their thing here, surly some of examples you have given are cluttered examples of poor taste in erotic literatuture, but did you ever consider they might be trying for ridiculous humor in their literary endeavors. A. It could been worse, the writer, could have writen, his seed came out his like silly string! B. His hard serpant cock struck hard and viscious like a viper, penetrating his partner's innocent channel like a predator. If you dress it up it works. C. Your right this one just friggin stupid. Unless you have a particular fetish! D. Thick cum flowed from him like a endless fountain of Juice/nectar E. His member slowly leaked drops of pearls and tears from his pulsating tip. F. Irridence white wet ribbons shot from his member and over his companions belly. G. This is stupid too... like it suggest their such a thing as woman cum, or LOL is there such a thing? H. Burning Manhood, maybe you should see a Doctor.... a hard warm and heated cock pressed eagerly against his thigh. Manrod? Is he armed or Horney? I. The word cock is superfluous. Human seed only comes from one place, unless there is mutants I don't know about? J. Your wrong there is nothing wrong about using the word globe to describe a perfect tight curving male ass cheek, in a long legged total fit male... sphere works well too... truly one of my favorite male parts. K. Actually never heard of this soup receipe before, surely Cambells doesn't carry it. L. She/He orgaismed and her/he body wildly rippled and spasmed, as the climax took control. M. The rapture caused by climax caused him to nearly pass out. N. The giggle of her ass, least I am stupid or I am congested... Yo dude she simply farted. so flee and save yourself. O. Hips pound or slap, But sugar they don't hum, only the mouth can do that! Trust me! Calanthee My view

... it was a slippery tentacle.

Because if the high level vibration function is too stronge, it will brake their crystal balls. How I wonder, do how the Potterites, have time to learn Magick, especially when they spend all time doing the nasty to each other in the sack??? Cal

Is "hole" really as sexy Vs. "tight pucker", Or as sophisticate as wildly twitching orifice? Which do you perfer to impale? LOL, Oh cum now tell me.... The Raunchy and Lovely Cal

No Sugar, your Naugthy Muse, just gets very turned on by what your writing and doesn't want to let go... happens to me all the time... sometimes for story structure and balance you need to reign in the little kinky fellow or he can get quite out of hand. You need to read over what you wrote and decide what works and what doesn't... especially if gets repeative and boring! Good luck. A hints given by a pro [Yo not me]... don't fall so in love with what you write, so much that you can delete it to make the story better. Happy writing, respectfully Cal