Keith Inc.

I've got a start: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100334

I dunno. I'll think about it for a bit, but it's not my usual thing. Still, I'm going to be out of my gourd bored for the next couple of weeks, who knows.

Any preferred names? Ages? I assume you are male? Is the youth pastor not around because he's out of the state? Or is it possible he could walk in on you?

Yeah. Something like: "Can i request a story about a boy being seduced by his babysitter, preferably including a swimming pool, her friends, an orgy with space aliens, Groucho Marx and a Corvette..."

I would tend to agree. I doubt that most AFF authors are Review Whores as i would use the term. I know most aren't Concrit whores. All too many delete anything that doesn't attempt to beatify the author and jumpstart their advancement to authorship sainthood. I don't need that. i care nothing about the polarity of the review. Good, bad, or someone off their meds free-versing on a story element of mine...it's all good. Liking reviews is a normal human reaction. Enjoying them, needing them, using them to inspire further chapters, all this is, at worst, review-whores in a passive state. To me, whoring requires positive action. I am a review whore. I will do almost anything in an attempt to get reviews. I've begged. I've bribed. I've offered up to 100,000 naughty points per review. I've written stories for requests and only asked to get reviewed on the final product. I haven't posted a 'please review my story' thread because i fear that the reviews would be posted in the thread, not on the story, and defeat the purpose of the thread. I fear this because any time i post a 'I wrote a story' thread on other forums, inviting comments, the miserable bastards comment on those forums, not on the story in the AFF archive. I've been snarked on Gawd Awful Fan Fiction, and my first, fourth and fifteenth reactions to the information was wondering how to get the GAFF comments attached to the Bible Fanfic story itself.

But it just doesn't look like you're asking for fanfic of the story you found. Or a story inspired by events in it. The way the request is framed, it seems a little too close to plagiarizing. If you'd framed it as, i dunno, just a list of elements you want in an original story, without referring to someone else's effort, it might be more appealing. [/cent][/cent]

taboo? Taboo is a big umbrella. Selfcest? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/author...p?no=1296784213 Amputee giantess kidnapping? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096220 Xenophilia/Bestiality? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091706 Frankenstein's Slutpuppy? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092667 Daughter rapes father? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092454 Sexual potential of energized rubber suits, toys and sheets? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092847 Vore? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092480 Rape? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544202891 Four versions: woman shrinks and rapes her babysitter (female) woman shrinks and rapes her babysitter (male) woman shrinks, at mercy of her babysitter (female) woman shrinks, at mercy of her babysitter (male) Unicorn sex bible fanfiction? http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093423 Smurfette/Gargamel graphic sex? http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091101 Chick Tract Fanfic? http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600060236

Maybe some constructive criticism would work to bring out the 'potential' of the story? And leave it, like, still the author's story?What is it that you like about the story, though? Maybe there's something else around you might enjoy.

Nor should you be. The essence of fanfiction is the ability to show you understand the characters, the world of a fandom well enough to manipulate it in the story you're crafting. A crossover, done right, demonstrates a deep understanding of more than one fandom.

I suppose it's possible that someone or a group of someones could start using 'slash' to refer to any and all fanfiction. And as long as the reader/listener understands how they are using it, it'll be alright. But if someone recommends some 'slash' fanfic to most fanficfans, and there isn't a male-slash-male relationship in the narrative, many of them're going to be disappointed.

...when you get up in the middle of the night to write down a scene before you forget it. And end up finishing the chapter. ...someone forwards you a stupid email on a subject you hardly care about but you read it four times because something tells you there's a story in it somewhere. ...when you make a firm decision to take time off from your writing because Character A is starting to take over your life. And you consider that dedicating three days to writing about your D character instead qualifies. ...when someone can criticize your cooking, your job, your wardrobe and your haircut and you figure: Opinions are like assholes. No one knows what yours is like until you air it. But when they say you misunderstood a character in your story, you start to wonder about your place in the food chain.

I would go by who is going to be interested in reading it.If it's mostly an Aliens story, then i'd suspect that Aliens fans are your best bet for readership, reviews, and essential feedback.

You don't use 'double space' on your word processor. What i generally do once i finish writing is to select all, clear all formatting. Then i replace all ^p (line returns) with ^p^p. That'll doublespace the text. then i upload the story by cutting and pasting into the text box, rather than hope my file format matches what AFF expects.

Omnipotence. I was thinking of Star Trek or a few other shows where they run up against beings of pretty much unlimited power, or at least we see no limitations from our POV. A few times, they give some of this power to mortals to see how they'd use it, how they'd behave with absolute power. I was wondering about that. Usually, the empowered one may abuse his powers a bit but in the end upholds the moral code of his culture and rejects or loses the power. Or they decide to embrace the power fully and the omnipotent ones take them away where they won't upset the mortals. They always seem to be rather unimaginative writers on these episodes? I keep imagining a star trek episode where someone with strong fetish leanings gets such powers. I don't care what fetish. What if Q saw someone's attraction to _(Fill In The Perv)_ in their head, gave them enough power to indulge it at the least whim, and maybe gave that part of their personality a bit of a bump up on the id-ego-subconscious power play?

I do that a lot. Mark 'other' on the menu, then type in whatever the code i think needs to apply at the end of the story summary.

As for the profile, you can have two different pics, for avatar and for your profile. I believe if you upload a new avatar, it will overwrite the old one. At least, last time i tried it did, don't think the forum updates have changed that.

thank you. Thank you, everyone, for the positive comments. I appreciate the reviews.

I really wouldn't worry about where to place the sex. It'll be where it needs to be, or you're sacrificing the story for the sex. What i have done on certain fetish forums is announce at the beginning that i'll make it easy for them to find the sex. Something like: This story deals with drugs, violence, evolution, the rage of space, forced entry to political tiers and a male/female relationship that includes graphic sex depicted on elephant-back in a leather Howdah. The sex scene will be annotated below. Then after however long it takes me to feel that a romp of whoopie smoochies has been justified, there will be an author's note: Sex begins at the start of the next chapter. Right after 'the elephant paused and sniffed the air, trying to figure out why he heard so much squeaking from the hooker-red leather howdah.' You could put an author's note in teh front saying that sex starts on Chapter 7 or whatever. Let them go straight to the payoff, if that's all they're interested in.

http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600005653 http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600000538

In the X-Files section: AFTERMATH It's all over, the aliens won and those left alive are struggling for survival. M/M http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094217 http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094165 http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094143

One of my sex scenes was inspired by a girl i knew in Charleston. She used to... Well, here. Right after the narrator has ejaculated into Hina: Obviously, the girl in Charleston didn't have a tail or feet that gripped like hands. But she did have a trick or two for speeding the second round.Another was inspired by someone who licked his girlfriend like he was trying to write his name on her pussy in spit. I have no idea if that would actually work, but it doesn't matter, it's porn. Do something weird or unusual. Different. Even if you make it up. something the reader may or may not ever try, but won't stop thinking about. I covered a rubber toy in a super-rubber for one story. shake it once and it'll bounce like a thing alive for an hour. Play with those possibilities. New toys, even if they're impossible. I remember being struck by a phrase in a story i've long forgotten. The guy had a girlfriend who was as tall as he was. They kissed and it was powerful. The narrator said that straight-across kisses are more erotic than bending down to kiss someone, because usually straight-across kisses only happen in bed. Id' never thought of it that way. Tell the reader what you find special about sex or what you think they should remember about sex. Even if you make it up.

Okay. I tried: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600083933 I almost added 'toys' to the warnings in the summary, but that would be too, too cute.

Different settings? On the piano, in the car, rolling off the bed, bathtub, shower, Marquis de Sade room at the Wax Museum, inside a giant's pocket, across a Lilliputian bandstand? Or give them a little mutual fantasy to play out? Oh, Master, thanks for removing the chains; Oh, Headmaster, thanks for putting me on the team; Oh, Dr. Roth, this new serum...it makes me feel funny; You'll never learn the location of the secret invasion headquarters from me!

I don't think i could ever do that. Make it clear that i wasn't going to add a chapter until i felt the love? My god, what if no one posted after that? I'd be devastated. I do feel that the better received stories i write get more attention from me. As mentioned above, that feedback is what i'm online for. More comments makes it more worth my time to write the stuff. But as a contract? Yeegh.

I do more than a little het non-consensual sex. But with my other kinks, it's not always worth it for others.