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Chapter 41, “...and Michael in the Morning” is uploaded and available.

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In a very rare double-upload, Chapter 39, “Introducing Andy Dvorak”; and Chapter 40, “First there was Danny...” are uploaded and available.

42069—the perfect number for ‘herb aficionados” who also enjoy mutual oral sex.

Hi, all. Good (or even passable) erotic writing, like writing in general needs to have enough resemblance to real life that the reader is willing to read it. Since “marital appliances” really exist, then they enter fiction as well, whether to erotic or humorous purpose. “But X¬˚∆øˆ˙˙, that toy doesn’t work for our species! Don’t worry, kΩ≈ç, it wlll. And, two hours, they realized that it did.” Cheers!

Chapter 38, “...And the Lion Tamer Act Got Messy...” is uploaded and available.

42063 … and being flushed can mean either to cause a modern commode to empty itself or a synonym for blushing. Or, I suppose that if you have a ‘dookie fetish,’ it could be both at the same time. 😉

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Chapter 37, “...And the Circus Came to Town,” is uploaded and available.

Hi, all. You can edit a “double-version” of a story manually. @Desiderius Price just happens to be good at writing a lot of things beyond prose, so he plays to his strengths. Unless you’re going for “fanservice in every bite,” you can “porn-up” or “porn-down” most writing, most of the time, if the setting of your story allows for sex at all. The exceptions happen when either the very existence of the story hinges on a “questionable” circumstance, or the happenings of the story “demand” explicit descriptions. Not enough sex, follow them into the shower/bedroom/etc. Too much sex, “fade to black” and pick it back up when they’re basking in the afterglow. You can also change the “impact” of a sex scene by either providing the reason for it, denying the reason for it, or making it obvious that there is no reason for it. Cheers!

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Hi, all. Nothing at all wrong with PWP when compared with plotted written porn. But like you also just pointed out, once you start asking (and answering) questions, then the plot bunnies harness up, and the story takes off for places uncharted. I suppose you could say a similar thing about human life in general. As a rule, we are social beings and sexual activity, like most other human activities, tends to be more interesting when done in groups of more than one. My Dinner with Andre was well-received, both when it came out and today. While My Assignation with Andrea would more likely be the generic “Pornhub Two-Reeler,” it could also be so much more artistically, even while being just as erotically explicit if not more. While magical worlds, whether JKR’s or otherwise, can have their own unique gimmicks, in the end they still involve people, with all that implies. Some people are boring, and others not-so-much. And imagination can take you and your reader to the strangest places. Imagine that Hagrid is a closet felcher, and that he unknowingly interrupts Professor (Crouch) Moody’s hallway discipline of Draco Malfoy during The Goblet of Fire. Further, imagine that the human transfiguration doesn’t wear off until after Hagrid has enjoyed some mid-morning entertainment. What if Draco liked it? 😉 Cheers!

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Hi, Desiderius Price and all. Didn’t Black and Decker try to make an inexpensive knock-off of that in the late 1970s? After all, not everyone can afford Milwaukee tools. IIRC, the model in the print ad showing the device off had crooked teeth and was visibly wearing braces. Now, if only I could remember the name of that particular tool line… 😉 Cheers!

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Chapter 36, “Morning Conversations,” is uploaded and available. I’ve also made progress on Chapter 37.