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FWIW, in my HP fanfiction, Harry is also paired with Ginny, Ron is paired with Luna Lovegood, and Hermione is paired with Neville Longbottom. Harry has only a sibling bond with Hermione, and Ron So, you don’t have to bash Ron to create a H/Hr pairing, or force an R/Hr pairing when Harry gets together with Ginny. Hit counters are great, but knowing why the counters go up or don’t go up is better. It takes more skill to tell a great tale that not everyone appreciates than it does to tell a sucky tale that everyone reads just because it looks like they might like it, even if they regret the effort to bring up the page after they’ve done so. Cheers!

41845 Nyah, Desiderius Price. Fixed, and thanx just the same.

41843 Cheers, Melrick!

Hi, all. I’ve seen this fic, but haven’t been able to find it in years. Like the title of this topic says, Molly Weasley was reincarnated as Cersei Lannister. She’s not unfaithful to Robert Baratheon, and all of her kids are also Robert’s. However, she gets tired of Robert’s incompetence at running the Seven Kingdoms and being a even mediocre father to his trueborn children, and has him assassinated anyway. Any help in finding this fanfic would be appreciated. Thanks in advance.

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Hi, all. Unless I post a “story preview” with the direct purpose of seeing if someone will read it, I don’t look for feedback at all. That doesn’t mean that I won’t listen to or even heed “feedback” from reviewers or authors who clearly know what they’re talking about; just that I don’t go looking for it or avoid writing because I haven’t received any. My one “long” fanfiction on this site is a HP fanfic with the “Harry/Ron” erotic pairing as one of multiple pairings. This is not a “popular” paring here or anywhere else. So, if I were to wait until I received a lot of “positive feedback” for that story, I would be waiting for a long time, and still sadly disappointed after the wait. The readers on this forum don’t tend to leave a lot of feedback anyway. So, I would post your “collection of one-shots” chapters in whatever order makes sense to you. Good luck.

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Hi, Deadman and all. If your writing style is now like your second quote, and not the example in the first quote, you might be making more of a mountain out of rewriting than it really is. I would suggest just doing the rewrite as if the text being rewritten was an outline, and just write it as you would. At the least, the revised text should be better than what it’s replacing, or at least enough better that you can consider the story done. Good luck.

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Since the last post, I’ve re-revised Chapter 1, along with Chapters 3 and 4. I added voice descriptions to each character as they’ve appeared, along with their physical descriptions. I actually should have done a better job with that in the first place, and I had been leaving readers ‘in the dark’ about one of the main character’s appearance for an entire chapter. I’ve also been generous with my use of the thesaurus to vary the speech tags, and make them more accurate, as well as mentioning moods of the speakers. Thanks, all.

I’ve heavily revised Chapters 1, 3, and 4. There aren’t any major plot changes, but I did do some “tightening up” and expanding the story. I’m still working on Chapter 36. If you like the story, but think I could tell it better; or think I’m telling it better than you could possibly imagine, then leave me a review to tell me.how I may improve your reading experience. “It is the tale, not he who tells it.” Stephen King. Thank you in advance for those of you who have read it.

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