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Welcome and salutations, readers and reviewers. This is the response and potential information resource for those stories that fall under the games category.
Stories Included:
Star Trek Adventurer (http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090530)
As always, thank you for taking the time to review, all are greatly appreciated.
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Author: tcr
Title: Star Trek: Adventurer
Summary: Cadet Fourth Class Takala zh’An just wants to graduate. But 2410 is a strange time. The Second Klingon War has just finished; a Dominion Fleet reappeared at Deep Space Nine; and two Dyson Spheres lead the way into the Delta Quadrant for exploration… And attacks. Her Midshipman cruise just got a lot more interesting.
Feedback: Always appreciated. Constructive criticism is definitely welcome
Fandom: Games-Star Trek (Star Trek Online)
Warnings: F/F, Angst, MCD, MiCD, Violence, Nosex
Solo story or Chaptered: Chaptered
Link: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090530
Review Reply thread:
Well, here's a first, a fan fiction... Takes place in the Star Trek Online universe, scenarios and situations from there. It is currently a nosex story, but it may ultimately change in the future and tags will be amended to reflect that.
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Chapter 27 is posted. . Hopefully everyone’s enjoying it so far.
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Chapter 6 (No Going Back) is up and ready.
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Chapter 6 (Truths) is posted and awaiting hungry eyes to devour it. Not to mention, a Hunted Halloween fic (Death’s Chase) is added as well.
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So… Bit of a crossroads with both roads blocked at the moment (sounds like my city…)... Asked a mod about it and, of course,I never ask easy questions… So I posit this here…
Background:
So, strangely enough, the new one I started writing is, in some ways, an original in the world of fanfiction. That is, the universe, scenario, ships are all in the Star Trek fandom... Only, not one of the series...
My story takes place in the Star Trek Online Universe and there isn't a category for that her
So… I know there's a ST-RPG category (and it was suggested that it might fit there)... But I'm not sure, and neither was the one answering, if this would count Star Trek Online in it…
Thank you,
TCR
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1 hour ago, Desiderius Price said:
My entire original universe started off as a PWP, and I started to wonder, “how did they get there?” Wham, stories upon stories, and a plot bunny breeding ground.
And my experience with writing was entirely opposite... To the point that, if I went back in time and showed myself, my younger self would laugh and be like "Can't be me". My original writing had no sex whatsoever in them... How far and strange I have come... How very strange...
- Anesor and pippychick
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I'm thirding the put you first... It's your idea, after all, as has been stated. You know where you want the characters to go.
That said, as DP noted, listening to the readers can be helpful too. As long as keeping with the established character and situation.
For example, in mainstream DC comics, as far as I'm aware, Batman would never backhand Robin, force him to eat rats, or even call him retarded... (I'm excluding All Star Batman and Robin, that's just toilet paper in my humble opinion)... If you were writing a Batman story and someone suggested that, I'd be inclined to ignore it. If, however, you're writing Batman and someone suggests a threesome with two hot models... Or just in bed with Robin (yes, this actually happened in a comic, though I don't remember what number...)... I'd say go with it... (I'm rambling again, aren’t I?)
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Chapter 26 posted.
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Okay... So I'm taking this from CR... So, if it's wrong... <points fingers> their fault! All theirs!
Title: Stalker
Tags: Violence MiCD
Summary: She watched from a distance. Halloween, she changes the game.
Halloweeny theme: Death, violence, creepy stalkery murderer.Hopefully that all works...
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I think this might be the cleanest the review shelves have been in a while, with the dusting I've been doing.
Another review for Blood Prize, from MonaMina:
This is really well written. More please❤️
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad I've intrigued you enough. Chapter 5 is now up (as of yesterday) and I have several chapters waiting to be edited and posted, so there won't be an end to it for a bit :). Hopefully it continues being interesting.
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Chapter 5 (Trials and Tribulations) is ready for your viewing pleasure.
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Chapter 5 (Future’s Past) is up for reading.
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Might be a little late... Sounds like my usual, but…
Star Trek kind of started it for me. I started originals and loved the process and creativity in school and used that to get out of the bad situation. They were mostly vicious shorts, blood she'd and violence galore... (Has anything really changed?... ...) Then I started writing in the Star Trek universe for a little, expanded outward from shorts into novels... Which in turn became originals again... (A full circle, weird and crazy, but yeah...) Sci Fi has always been a part of my writing, I've just expanded out…
And I ramble on...
- InvidiaRed, BronxWench and Anesor
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Just now, Desiderius Price said:
I find AFF forums/chat to be a good repellent to those demons. I’ve tried loads of garlic, but that just offends the co-workers.
Well, I tried flamethrower, but apparently work frowns on that... After a few people turned KFC... And part of the building became a bonfire... I don't understand why they'd frown on it...
- BronxWench and pippychick
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3 minutes ago, Desiderius Price said:
Only one or two? I thought this place was filled with nutjobs! Myself included.
Nutjob? I prefer the term "untethered"... Perhaps a little unhinged...
- pippychick and BronxWench
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30 minutes ago, CloverReef said:
That demon is an asshole. It’s never been a problem to me, but I can be a bit on the arrogant side when it comes to feeling entitled to do things that make me happy. But I see it a lot in the people who are close to me. We gotta slay that bitch.
I say, we get together, trap this ugly motherless chrak'tova (I am definitely going to start using Straxi in life now, just to get weird looks...) and send it and RL into the sun... Kill it! Kill it with fire!
- pippychick, CloverReef, Anesor and 1 other
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Firstly, in my quite possibly not so humble opinion... Two reasons are a little bit of... Well, Ian Malcolm said it best: That's one big pile of shit.
To lump people together greatly cuts out others... At least I think so... I fall into neither category, too.
I had a pretty bad childhood, so the writing allowed me to escape elsewhere and live in wondrous worlds of crazy, bizarre things away from reality. As time progressed, I just liked to write, never showed anyone, never wanted to. It wasn’t a "tale to tell/tale to sell", it was just something I did. Now, it's a relief and definitely stress reduction technique... But it's still mainly because I enjoy it…
Do I want to be published? One day, certainly... I'd love to see my name at the bookstore... And walk around anonymously... Because I'd like to point out things... And slap people upside the head...
- BronxWench, pippychick and Anesor
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Chapter Four (Struggles of Atlas) is posted.
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Wow… Posted 25… Hope everyone is liking it .
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Chapter Four (Trouble, Again) is ready…
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Wow, page two… Didn’t think I’d see that day come… But no one’s here for me to ramble on…
Three reviews this time. (It’s been a few weeks, I know, Mister Toaster… Calm down...)
Hunted:
From Tahn:
Interesting start, look forward to seeing how it goes.
Well, I do hope that you’ve continued to read and that I haven’t disappointed in keeping it interesting. Thank you.
From InvidiaRed:
Quite enjoyable <3
Its not very often where the hunters are worse than those they hunt.
Well, thank you for that. Hopefully it’s continued to be enjoyable and will continue to in the future. I’m not going to lie, I was flip flopping through the entire spectrum of what I should do with the Guard. (I mean, aside from what I already did with them...) I guess the story itself made the decision for me and it just happened that way.
Blood Prize:
Also from Tahn:
Neat, good sci-fi stories are rare here. Look forward to seeing where this one goes.
I’m starting to think I might have a fan . Maybe… lol. And I try hard to keep my sci-fi good. I was told something a long time ago by one of my teachers (...man, I sound like I’m an antique...)... “Good science fiction isn’t about the technology or the time period, it’s about the people.” And I try to abide by that... Hopefully you keep reading and I don’t disappoint.
Thank you both for your reviews, they are much appreciated.
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2 hours ago, Desiderius Price said:
That's why I resort to random generators, simply because my mind gets stuck otherwise, and it becomes rather unrealistic if all your characters are named "Bob".
"Hi, Bob."
"Hey, Bob?"
"How's it going, Bob?"
"Not bad, Bob. How's the wife, Bob?"
"Bob's not doing too bad, Bob. How's the kids?"
"Oh, sorry, Bob. I thought you were talking to Bob. Has anyone noticed the high number of Bob's working here?"
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Chapter Three (Punishment) is posted.
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Chapter 7 (Moments) is up and ready to be read.