GrayNeko

Review for Extradimensional Besties: Fairy, a review from you is such a welcome treat. I'm glad you found this latest chapter so enjoyable on multiple fronts and that slow reveal about the day's events was so well received. I'm sure your hunch about Janna's plans isn't far off but I still hope I can surprise you with future installments, hopefully in part thanks to advice and suggestions I've received from other readers. Also the thing with the curse will become clear in time. Once again thanks for such a great review.

Another review for Little Red Riding Gwen: This marks my first Spanish review, me gusta! Anyway, for those of us not fluent in Spanish Google translates it as: "I congratulate you, it's a good story, hopefully are more chapters" Thank you Eduardo, I'm glad you liked it. Sadly it is a one shot piece, as much fun as it was to write.

Hey just wanted to share a little something an anon over on /aco/ whipped up while we were chatting about the latest chapter. Edit: The lovely anon also colored it

Something for all you turkey chompers out there to chew on while you digest your Thanksgiving day meals, the latest chapter of my Star vs piece is up! Have a good holiday folks!

Hi Darrius, thanks for the kind words. I hope you mean my other works like A Charmed Life or Extradimensional Besties are the Best! because otherwise I'm gonna have to break your heart by informing you that Little Red Riding Gwen was a one shot piece since it was a prize won by ForgetMeNaught in my 100 Fans Milestone raffle that I held over on Hentai Foundry. If you did mean my other works or just my writing in general then have no worries, I'm working on the next chapter of my Star vs the Forces of Evil piece currently and will jump back to A Charmed Life once I get that done. Here's a little spoiler for those who are interested, the next chapter of my Star piece is going to feature Janna. Edit: Hey Darrius, still appreciate the support but the review you put up on Extradimensional Besties are the Best! was identical to this one and not to sound inconsiderate but if you don't have something to say about the piece itself I'd rather you just give me an upvote to show your support. I just feel like the review section should be saved for genuine comments, not spamming the same message.

The inclusion of her cycle is all thanks to ForgetMeNaught, it was one of the details included in the prompt that just worked out so well. I'm glad you liked the details and descriptions so much, I strive to show, not tell, the reader and I feel that's always tricky with sex since everyone's sexual experience is unique. As for the ending, I was quite happy with how that came out, mostly because FMN's details for what he wanted really helped inspire that bit.

Well then, I suppose the question a lot of us might have is what do you have planned next? Any ideas for future works?

Well a truly happy Dipper and Pacifica warmed the very cockles of my heart, but something about the idea that Dipper and Pacifica could have had happy lives without each other, I just like the inclusion of that. Not only does it make Preston's suffering more delicious but the idea that if their relationship hadn't worked that it wouldn't have been the end of the world really goes against what I feel tends to be the norm if these sorts of dramas and I appreciate that. I also like the little details of adult Pacifica and Dipper's lives and the somewhat ominous observation by Bill, like he's just waiting for a crack to open up that would allow him to slip through and start messing with them again.

Sorry, there is not. I'm not very well versed with anything other than Microsoft Word so that's all I use. You might be want to see if someone else around here knows of a way to help.

Just wanted to say thanks for doing that for me. I'm not sure how much help it was as his post was just him asking the question for a third time with the answer to said question in the post right before his. Well you know what they say about leading a horse to water and all, eh?

Dude I love your enthusiasm but if you had taken a moment to look you'd see I've already answered that question in the post right above yours.

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600094895 The user DemiDemon, and thank you very much, I really appreciate that offer. I still might remove his second review since it doesn't really have anything to do with the story but only once I know he's found his way to my discussion thread.

So I recently posted a story that was well received but two users had the same question based on information I included in the author's note section. I answered the question in my review reply and discussion thread but one individual hasn't cued in on that fact as he posted a second review asking the same question and requesting that I email him the answer, only his email isn't displayed and his profile has zero contact information. I checked to see if I could pm him here on the forums but he doesn't have an account here or it's not under the same name. I know it's against the rules to reply to reviews in the reviews section of a story but I would like to know if it's okay if I do so this once. After a week or some indication that he received the info to check out my review reply thread I will have both unnecessary reviews removed.

Thank you both for your comments and to answer your question, HF stands for Hentai Foundry, an adult art site that also includes erotic literature and adult fan fiction. It went through a purge of all material with underage characters.

Unfortunately HF no longer allows content containing underage characters, it's the reason I found my way here in the first place (for which I'm quite glad as I've received some great responses and chatted with plenty of fine folk), so the story there simply contains a link to the story here. If you're willing to jump through a couple of hoops you can add this work to your Recommended Reading section of your profile, just click your My Control Panel and go to your Add Rec Reading button. You have to put in some vital info like title, author name, and the appropriate ID number but that last part can just be copy and pasted from your address bar when on those pages. Again, I'm glad you like the story and I wish it was a little easier for you to show your appreciation but that's the best I can give you.

Little Red Riding Gwen Review Well thank you very much Adrian, glad you liked the give away story I did. I too wish the favorite system of this site was a little less complicated, it's kind of a pain to add anything to the recommended reading section. Appreciate the super score! I'm so glad you like it man. It was such a great prompt that you gave me and while this was my first time writing for a piece for someone else I've never had so much fun working on a piece. High five right back at ya!

Yo! Here Also if you're looking for minor 1 & 2 you should check out shows and stuff with characters in those age ranges, lot of writers like to keep them as they appeared in whatever source they came from.

Well it doesn't have to be a huge hundreds dead sort of thing. How about a ferry crash? Mother and daughter fall overboard, only mother's body is recovered from the water? Looking for a little more complex? Car jacking that results in the mother's death immediately, the daughter, who was the real target of the kidnapper, manages to get away at a later location and the kidnapper snatches up another little girl before being spooked by police and crashing the car resulting in a fireball that makes DNA identification next to impossible. The second girl is reported missing while the daughter is assumed dead because they are able to tie the kidnapper to the mother's murder. Finally my years of binge watching crime dramas finally pay off!

Thanks for your great comments FS. I'm glad you found it so entertaining and I hope you continue to do so with future chapters. It's good to hear you thought the development felt natural, it's always one of my concerns with my work so I really appreciate seeing that. Star and Marco's relationship is probably going to be the most fun thing to develop but probably because it might get a little rocky along the way. Once again thanks for your review.

Hey Ed, do you know if your work has inspired any art or was there any art that helped inspire this story for you? I only ask because I stumbled upon a little Pincecest art music video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXM4kL0FCnw Some of the art made me immediately think of your work, especially one piece in particular where Dipper and Mabel are staring at each other over breakfast.

Thank you very much. I love writing in depth in character smut. As for when the next chapter will be up I have to finish the piece ForgetMeNaught won in my fan raffle on HF and once that's up I think I'll jump back to either my Ben 10 piece or this as I've got ideas rattling around in my head for both and I can't wait to get to them.

Is it weird that I've had this dream lately? Like a couple a times over the course of several months. I'm not even into exhibitionism and the dreams aren't sexual in nature, just me strutting around work in a pair of boots and a hat, only occasionally bothering to cover myself. Anyway, as for a reason how about: I needed to even out my tan.

I don't think that it was gross was what he was looking for Ed, he wanted a piece that evoked fear which I feel it did. At the very least I felt sympathy for Janna at the tragic turn of events, which is a necessity for horror because if you don't care about the characters then you don't if they're scared or hurt, essentially no empathy for anything that happens to them. What was really chilling to me was the sense of cataclysm at the end. To me it was like the calm before the storm as we get a hint of what these transformations are truly capable of, a promise of worse things to come that made it easy for me to see a devastated world where survivors hide from predatory rapists who hunt without mercy. If that doesn't scare you then I don't know what will.

While that is definitely a possibility down the road, we're a ways from that. After all, there are five whole condoms they have to get through and who knows what kind of high jinx will ensue to mark those special occasions. But seriously, like I've said, this whole thing snowballed into something much bigger than what I intended, but since it seems to help keep my writing flowing I don't mind so much.

My 100 Fan Raffle.