GrayNeko

Thanks, that's really what I was going for when I began this whole thing, sticking as close to the source material while expanding it in a believable, if adult, manner.

Thanks Ed, always thought Palcomix was a pay-to-access site so I thought I needed a way around that, and also that it might be virus central, also glad to see that wasn't the case. Early Parole wasn't bad but I think I'm spoiled by deviantArt and Hentai Foundry, but hey it was free so who am I to complain? Anyway, I'm glad you like the latest chapter and I appreciate your feedback. You have to understand that there's a method to my madness in how the characters interact that will, hopefully, become more apparent in future chapters.

Glad you like both of them, and don't worry there is still plenty of story. Hey Aysha, if Palcomix is breaking the law then let's break the law right back at them! Some one get me a link!

Thanks Aysha, the way I had originally intended to end this arc of the story was using Ben's Eon form but it was very Dues Ex Machina and I'm glad I went another way. As for the pics, I don't want to get anyone in trouble, just curious is all.

OrgyVille is still several towns over with a couple of stops between here and there, but don't worry, this ol' sex locomotive will carry us there faithfully. And now that I'm done beating that analogy like a dead horse, no I haven't read the Palcomix comics about the three of them but links are always appreciated. In truth I always hoped my stories might inspire some art of the pornographic variety.

Well balls, sorry about that. I figured the birthday was sooner because that was around the time they started introducing more aliens, you know, Ben 10 becomes Ben 11 and gets more aliens accordingly. I actually changed it from when I posted it on HF because I figured since the summer was almost over when my story took place the birthday would have come and gone. Appreciate you checking and I'm glad you enjoy the story. Sorry about the misunderstanding Ed, and thanks for the compliment, others have said similar things and I'm always glad to hear it.

Do you remember which scene that was? I'd hate to have inadvertently plagiarized from the show.

Ed, I just want you to know that I appreciate all your comments. People were excited for the potential of a threesome when I first posted this on HF and it will happen but since this is also story driven, it will be some chapters later.

Man Ed, you don't even know.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's interesting to see which parts of the story resonate with readers, I never know what to expect.

Many thanks. I have to say I'm surprised at the number of people who don't seem to care for alien on girl action, one would think with aliens being one of the focuses of the show it would be more popular. Still, for the most part this story is human on human, though there is a rather intense alien scene many chapters later.

Glad you like it Edward and we will be seeing how Gwen deals with this situation in the next chapter. Yeah once I finished Island Misadventures I found the story still going in my head so I kept with it. Next chapter will be up next Friday/Saturday. Hope the story continues to please.

Hello, hello, GrayNeko here. Just wanted to bring your attention to a little piece I wrote a while back and am posting here for you all to enjoy. It's a single chapter piece so I thought I'd give it a chance to earn some recognition by promoting it a little. If the response is great I'll throw up a talk back thread in the appropriate forum section and we can all have a nice little dialogue. Without further ado I present... Author: GrayNeko Title: A Paladin's Duty Summary: Based on a character from a DnD game I'm in, a 'what if' scenario where his relationship with his eldest sister takes an unexpected turn. I threw up a more serious sounding summary for the actual story because I thought it might draw readers in. Feedback: Greatly appreciated and welcome, good or bad, let me know what you thought. Fandom: Original Pairing: The eldest siblings of a family Warnings: Incest (incase you haven't figure that out yet), sex of a slightly wilder nature Solo story or chaptered story: Solo Story URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107456 Thanks for giving it a once over folks, I hope you enjoyed it even if incest isn't necessarily your bag.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It would have been tricky for Charmcaster to smuggle some seeds back with no real pockets to speak of but don't worry, the three of them will still get up to some wild stuff in the sequel. As for their age, I'm assuming Ben and Gwen are 10 at the start of summer and then there's the episode where Wildvine is introduced and the topic of their shared birthday comes up, with, I believe, said birthday taking place at the end of the episode, which would make the two of them 11 at that point. I was trying to remain as true to the canon of the setting as possible, as my story timeline wise takes place near the end of summer.

I'm glad you liked the story. Originally this piece wasn't going to be story oriented at all, just a smutfic where Charmcaster was raped by each of his alien forms because something on the island would drive each of them crazy, but as I was trying to write the scene where Wildmutt pinned her down and ripped her clothing off I realized it just wouldn't be in character for Charmcaster to continuously be a victim and not just kill Ben in his sleep. Week after next we'll get to the sequel to this piece and everybody will get to see how things change for the two of them once they're home.

Story tags have been added to the top of chapter 1.

Yeah, only a few seem to be aware of HF and my works from there. You're right that it is nice that people like the story, wished they commented a little more, even if they didn't like it. Thanks for stopping by.

Many thanks, I just wanted to have it marked as Complete so folks aren't waiting for more chapters. There will be a sequel to the story but that won't be posted for a couple weeks.

The Island Misadventures of Ben and Charmcaster, I too wanted to let readers know it was complete. Didn't have this problem with my first story, but that did have a much shorter description as well.

I'm having a similar issue and I'm sure I'm under the 240 limit. Not only that, I thought that by making 'Minor 1, Minor 2' in my description into 'Minor 1&2' it wouldn't let me add '&' and then wouldn't let me add the second 'Minor' back into the description.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and it had the intended effect.

Thanks, glad you kept up with the story despite it not being what you expected.

Thanks, the scene between Ben and Charmcaster in that chapter was one of my favorites to write. I think you'll enjoy the next chapter as well then because it reveals more about the island itself. I'm glad you liked it, this really is the turning point in their relationship. Just a warning that the rest of the story is more story driven and less erotic from here on out.

While this was their first time I wouldn't call it their first intimate moment due to the inclusion of mind altering substances, that scene is coming up and I hope you'll be pleased with it. Many thanks for the compliment.

Really the groping was more Charmcaster subconsciously dealing with the stress and frustration, plus, in my interpretation of her, there's more to her background that I haven't revealed yet. There is a scene in the sequel to this piece that might make you happy.