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Status Updates posted by Desiderius Price
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Happy April Fools Day! (Way more important than some dude getting in a three day sleepy weekend a couple of millennium ago...)
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Happy Fourth of July, to those that celebrate it.
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Happy Independence Day! (Now, can we have our country back? I miss it...)
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241 years since the original Brexit.
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We might need to go back to the beginning, and try this again sometime, when we’ve learned a few lessons about governance.
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Happy Labor Day (to those that celebrate it today).
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Happy Turkey Day everybody (though I’m opting for pork loin this year). 🦃
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Happy Winter Solstice Everybody!
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Hate it when I find a good article, useful for my writing, locked behind a paywall. It’s like… I’m not making money on my writing here.
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Hmm… maybe I should, like, draw a map to this haunted house before I write about it?
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Hmm…. what should I do when there’s a tropical storm with my name on it?
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Go for the trifecta: Watch the Weather Channel while drinking a bottle of Coke with your name on it.
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Harness its power somehow? Take over the world? Seems like a good time for a little sorcery.
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Hmmm… I can move this scene from #8 back to #7….. Keeping it in #8 makes for a better cliffhanger, but moving it to #7 makes #7 a tad more complete. Oh, the debate I’m having with myself.
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@Wilde_Guess Yep, that’s why I’m debating now, before I post. I’ll need to resolve this before I post either 7 or 8. Yesterday, I had moved it to #7, however, based on tone it belongs in #8. So, this morning, I moved it back. After all, a cliffhanger is typically an incomplete scene.
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True, that. Also, the move can “require” another 4k of writing to more fully develop an idea. That’s not a bad thing, but can confuse the reader if you do it after the chapter(s) were originally posted.
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That was the #5 debacle, about 2.5k but same thing. I try to adhere to the principle that a reader shouldn’t have to re-read an episode to understand things, though, of course, that can be unavoidable at times with a work-in-progress. Thus, I basically want to be confident in the episode/chapter before I post.
Cross my fingers, I’ll get #8 drafted tonight. (If so, I’d expect #7 to go up next weekend.)
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Horror headline that’ll get you below the belt … “Flesh Eating STD”