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Phone sex… or this Ron/Hermione scene I’m working on where I’ve got Ron trying to learn “healing” so becomes more of a “playing doctor” type of scenario.

Of course, swearing (or even talking) likely means they’re not really having sex, not yet, so is that actually part of the sex scene?

I’m pretty good at derailing anything off topic, I try to avoid it (usually). Profanity depends on the characterization too… boys in a locker room? That’s likely filled with expletives. A football coach? LIkely. Church? unlikely.

Counted… four orgasms in the last chapter I wrote. Pretty rare to actually get curse words, or even anything sharply worded, in them. Profanity’s kinda like a spice or flavoring, like garlic, cinnamon, or vanilla; a little bit goes a long ways. (Though I do tend to overdo garlic, tend to switch “clove” => “bulb” when I add it in.)

42674 Yeah, figured you’d fix that @Wilde_Guess. I know @Melrick loves getting in those 69s!

If a writer needs to advertise it’s a sex scene in order to be a “sex scene”, then I’d think something is lacking in the writing. Now, in certain contexts, a “fuck me” or “bang me” might be indicative of a character’s personality, or maybe there’s a scenario the two (or more) are roleplaying. (Though, I suppose you could have it be solo, somebody watching a B/C grade porn film.) Now, in the sex scenes I write, if there’s profanity, something’s going seriously wrong for the characters, or a copper’s busting them.

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You typoed… I’ll assume you’ll fix it. 42670

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