Desiderius Price

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Oh, lifting this from a facebook friend who mentioned that Australian slang is confusing…

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Or, “rescues” her? (Thinking Shrek here….)

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Welcome! Yes, there is a section for original works, I’m writing a series myself. - DP

First, thanks for the review. I loved writing the dream, though I did wonder if I had issues It seemed a good way to capture Jarred’s insecurities, because guys typically don’t express them well, if they express them at all. And yes, as I like to show rather than tell, I had to demonstrate his body reacting, that it did rattle him a bit. Susie/Clara likely did go a bit too fast, but I was focusing more on them teaching Jarred a thing or two. (That, and getting Jarred/Susie into that closet.) And Dale’s accounts are still suspended due to his grounding…. Well, glad you enjoyed it and your reviews help me appreciate the reader’s perspective. - DP

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