Desiderius Price

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Welcome back Jungle drums. Like you, I’m here because I don’t feel like self-censoring my works.

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First, a thank you to Savvat for suggesting diarrhea for a bad date. Second, an admonishment to Google for pushing cures when I was looking for triggers, though I do suspect “how do I cause diarrhea” is a less frequent query. And, I’m glad I had the database, because as I was listing oysters as a favorite for Dale, I noticed that I had previously listed an allergy, so I knew I hit dynamite I was nearly dying while writing the date scene, because I couldn’t discuss it in the chatbox, spoilers and all. It was fun to write, and challenging in that it couldn’t be deliberate on Dale’s part, I wanted him to be trying to do it right. Maybe I should write in more bad dates to my stories…. Hadn’t considered Mario’s orientation, I was using him as a bully (like Morton/Lane, or Kex) to help the shower scene. After all, locker rooms are specifically designed to help us get in touch with our sexuality, right? Anyways, thank you for the reviews, they’re gold to the aspiring author! - DP

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An early posting for the weekend. Chapter 2 is up! - DP

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Switching between VR and reality is a bit of a challenge, so I’m treating it like the holodeck on Star Trek, where it’s just presented as footage, not anything denoting the difference until the archway is called for, or the computer is instructed to do something. Can’t really comment further w/o spoiling things. Thanks for the review! - DP

Luckily, no harm, my main computer’s operational! Almost wasn’t expecting that after it browned/stopped/rebooted/browned out with the soda.

Grrr, so last night, I accidentally spilled my soda cup as I was playing Skyrim, and it doused my computer with the motherboard and video card taking the brunt of it I’m still pulling it apart to assess the scope of the damage (and order any replacement parts, as needed). The good news is that before playing, I had copied the story directory onto my shared data drive (shared between Windows & Linux), and that drive is accessible to my backup travel laptop; therefore, the stories are safe with no data loss

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Just a quick note, I had the topic name changed to make this more of a general gathering/discussion spot for anything StarRebels (or me) related. And in doing so, I think I just figured out the name of Jaimie’s online chat group (in the stories) - DP

Author: Desiderius Price Title: Dale’s Game Summary: Compelled to temporarily stop using the latest Baby Shark gaming platform, Dale is forced back into the reality of his family’s destitution. After a date with a girl goes wrong, Dale faces his demons with the help of his friend, and Dale finds himself. Feedback: Feedback and Constructive Criticism appreciated Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: (anticipated) 3Plus Abuse Anal Angst Bi Bigotry Contro Exhib Fet FF Fingering HJ Humil Inc MCD MF MiCD Minor1 Minor2 MM Oral Rape Rim Scat SH Solo Tort Toys Violence Voy WD WIP WS Solo or Chaptered: Chaptered URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108463 Review Reply thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59549-jaimies-campfire-starrebels/